Shop Town Reviews

[GirlPolarBear]

Not entirely sure if this is in the correct section, but I AM charging bells for it, and it is also a service, so I'm still putting this here. Administrators can move this if they'd like! I'm confused, haha.


Hello! I'm Laila, and I'm going to review your town!
In this service, I will post paragraphs of a detailed town review for you.

What I will review:

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• Effective Pathing (1tbt)

I will review your effective pathing, whether it suits the town's theme / atmosphere, and seems placed nicely

• Beautiful Landscaping / Appropriate Landscaping (1tbt per paragraph)

Placement of clovers, bushes, flowers and so on

• Overall atmosphere of the town (2tbt per paragraph)

What do I think of the town? What does it come across as? Are the villagers appropriate/fitting?

• Rate to 10 (free)

Free service of the overall [number]/10

• Individual segments of the town (varies from a corner to the whole town (5tbt - 25tbt))

North or South, just the beaches, just the left corner?

I will be using your DREAM ADDRESS to review.


Please fill in this application form to ask:

Mayor Name:
Town:
*
Friend Code:
Dream Code:
*
What I Want:
Total TBT:
*
Extra Donations (extremely optional):

Spoiler: Towns Reviewed + Their Dream Addresses

Town: Aoki ~ DA: 4500-5189-6655

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[Charcolor]

Mayor Name: Aimee
Town: Aoki
*
Friend Code: 1822-1929-5295
Dream Code: 4500-5189-6655
*
What I Want:

• effective pathing - my paths change a lot, so if you have any suggestions for paths i could use instead, please link me to the qr codes or something. 1 paragraph
• landscaping - i have a looot of trouble with figuring out where i should put certain flowers. 1 paragraph
• individual segments - your choice. basically if there's any specific segments you want to give feedback on then say it in the review. write as many paragraphs as you like, i'll pay 25 tbt.
• and a rate to 10 please.

Total TBT: 27 tbt i believe
*
Extra Donations (extremely optional): 70 tbt​

it's outdated by a few days so here are some things to keep in mind, unless i update it before you visit it:

• there may be golden nuggets in the plaza. i was leaving them for my friend and i forgot to clean them up before updating. they're gone now.
• pierce's house may be interrupting a path. i changed the path to go around his house, but he's not a permanent villager anyway, that's why i didn't plot reset for him.
• my town is nowhere near finished so i'm not worrying about the atmosphere yet. when i have a finalized dream town, i'll set the atmosphere on either a stormy night or a clear evening.
• secret's house is also not finished. i wasn't even going to expand it at all until just recently, and i'm not putting furniture in it until it's all done.
• i did not put much time in choosing my map and i don't want to reset my town just for a different map so when looking at the landscaping please do not criticize the map itself, because i am not going to reset my town or hack.

sorry if this is a bit much, take as much time as you need

 

[GirlPolarBear]

Mayor Name: Aimee
Town: Aoki
*
Friend Code: 1822-1929-5295
Dream Code: 4500-5189-6655
*
What I Want:

• effective pathing - my paths change a lot, so if you have any suggestions for paths i could use instead, please link me to the qr codes or something. 1 paragraph
• landscaping - i have a looot of trouble with figuring out where i should put certain flowers. 1 paragraph
• individual segments - your choice. basically if there's any specific segments you want to give feedback on then say it in the review. write as many paragraphs as you like, i'll pay 25 tbt.
• and a rate to 10 please.

Total TBT: 27 tbt i believe
*
Extra Donations (extremely optional): 70 tbt​

it's outdated by a few days so here are some things to keep in mind, unless i update it before you visit it:

• there may be golden nuggets in the plaza. i was leaving them for my friend and i forgot to clean them up before updating. they're gone now.
• pierce's house may be interrupting a path. i changed the path to go around his house, but he's not a permanent villager anyway, that's why i didn't plot reset for him.
• my town is nowhere near finished so i'm not worrying about the atmosphere yet. when i have a finalized dream town, i'll set the atmosphere on either a stormy night or a clear evening.
• secret's house is also not finished. i wasn't even going to expand it at all until just recently, and i'm not putting furniture in it until it's all done.
• i did not put much time in choosing my map and i don't want to reset my town just for a different map so when looking at the landscaping please do not criticize the map itself, because i am not going to reset my town or hack.

sorry if this is a bit much, take as much time as you need

This will be completed sometime tomorrow or Sunday, as I have a few mayoral things to do, haha. My town itself is getting done up.

Altogether, I'll have this paragraph completed as soon as possible for you!

 

[Charcolor]

bumping this because the review of my town was extremely helpful!!

 

[Mints]

is this still open? ♥ i've got a witch/scary themed town i'd like you to review!!

 

[GirlPolarBear]

It's still open, yes cx