Town Help (again)

[LilyElizabeth]

I really need some help with my town at the moment so I'm just asking if anyone would be willing to visit my town via DA and give me some advice? I'll give TBT bells to anyone who does

I'll write a list of the good and bad areas of my town - the bad areas are obviously the ones I need your help with!

Good:
The area in front of the train station
The area in front of the town hall
The area where my house is
The area around the pond
The area where the cafe/windmill/stonehenge is

Bad:
The entire left-side of my town and the area where Zucker & Marina are
The area around Penelope's house
The area around the zen clock

I really need some help with these places. A massive thank you if you do check it out and have any advice!

DA: 7100-4301-2836

 

[Eline]

Okay! I'm visiting now. Don't need the TBT bells though c: I'll do it for free since I'm working on my dream badge anyway.

FIRST OF ALL. I love how you didn't put down paths, but created paths using bushes and flowers! Awesome! Also, I'm sitting on a bench right now with the illuminated heart behind it, that is so cute! But since you put that part of your town in the 'bad' section (I disagree though!!!) maybe plant more flowers, this spot doesn't need any more PWP's in my opinion.

I'm thinking you should do something with the space in front of your house, since it's quite plain there. You put it in the good section, but I think it could use some renovation.

I started with the left part of your town, as you mentioned. I really like it, but if I were you I'd put more flowers down. That's basically the only thing I'd change about it.

The part where the zen clock is: I'd move the line of bushes in front of the clock on line forward, so the clock is in the exact middle of the little 'square' (it's not really a square, but you know what I mean c

The part around Penelope's home, I love it! The illuminated trees are great. I'm not sure what it looks like during the day though. Looking at it like this, I wouldn't change a thing.

My final big advice is to just fill the spots where you don't have flowers and where you don't walk with flowers. Maybe a different color than white would be nice. But overall I really love your town, it's stunning! I hope this was any help! c:

 

[LilyElizabeth]

Okay! I'm visiting now. Don't need the TBT bells though c: I'll do it for free since I'm working on my dream badge anyway.

FIRST OF ALL. I love how you didn't put down paths, but created paths using bushes and flowers! Awesome! Also, I'm sitting on a bench right now with the illuminated heart behind it, that is so cute! But since you put that part of your town in the 'bad' section (I disagree though!!!) maybe plant more flowers, this spot doesn't need any more PWP's in my opinion.

I'm thinking you should do something with the space in front of your house, since it's quite plain there. You put it in the good section, but I think it could use some renovation.

I started with the left part of your town, as you mentioned. I really like it, but if I were you I'd put more flowers down. That's basically the only thing I'd change about it.

The part where the zen clock is: I'd move the line of bushes in front of the clock on line forward, so the clock is in the exact middle of the little 'square' (it's not really a square, but you know what I mean c

The part around Penelope's home, I love it! The illuminated trees are great. I'm not sure what it looks like during the day though. Looking at it like this, I wouldn't change a thing.

My final big advice is to just fill the spots where you don't have flowers and where you don't walk with flowers. Maybe a different color than white would be nice. But overall I really love your town, it's stunning! I hope this was any help! c:

Thank you so much for the advice, it's really appreciated!

I've never really liked qr paths, they never seem to fit what I'm trying to do. I usually have dirty paths but they get covered up in the snow! I put the illuminated heart in between Marina and Zucker's homes to give them a big hint that they're meant to be together haha.

I'll definitely add some more flowers. I went all white because it's winter but I think I'm going to go back to using red,yellow,white in a repeating pattern

Thanks again