town advice?

[witchy]

hi!! so i recently restarted my game, and ive been trying to work on my towns aesthetic for the past couple days or so. i feel like its starting to look ok, but after seeing some amazing towns on here, im not so sure what i should do with it.
i dont necessarily have a 'theme', but im going for a quaint, nature filled town in the fall. any advice helps a lot!

my da: 5100-5183-0438. nobodys visited yet, so i havent gotten any comments or anything. uvu
ill look at yours and help too if youd like!

 

[00jachna]

I'll visit! When I find the time -.-'

 

[witchy]

thanks so much! its not much yet, but im hoping to improve.

 

[00jachna]

I would also be really happy if you could review my DA (not yet though, it's been FOREVER since I updated it lol)

 

[witchy]

ill definitely do that! let me know when youre ready for me to review it.

 

[00jachna]

Going to your DA now c:

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Oh and things to don't mind in my town:

-Junk that may or may not be on the ground
-The houses, they are near empty

REVIEW

I really liked what I saw! The paths were beautiful and I'm so jealous of all your flowers c: that along with awsome PWPs and faboules trees makes for a pretty great town. Your villagers are all great (exept maybe Klaus, I personaly don't like the bears lol). Your house also gave me some great inspiration for my houses. I simply cannot wait until your town is finished Yes, I know... I sound super cheezy

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I'll do some things in my town then i'll update it and post my DA c:

 

[witchy]

thanks so much!! and yeah he was a random move in.. not a fan of him at all ^__^;; i really appreciate everything! ill be sure to review yours when you post it.

 

[00jachna]

Updating now

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DA: 6100 5101 5055

 

[witchy]

review!!
its beautiful! i really really love what you did in front of town hall with the roses, bushes, and trees. your paths are varied which is nice! around your fountains is also lovely. i like your pwp placement and the symmetry you have! are you still working on the left of the bottom island? the rest of it is so so nice.

 

[00jachna]

review!!
its beautiful! i really really love what you did in front of town hall with the roses, bushes, and trees. your paths are varied which is nice! around your fountains is also lovely. i like your pwp placement and the symmetry you have! are you still working on the left of the bottom island? the rest of it is so so nice.

Aww, thanks c: and yes. I have barly touched that area xD

 

[olivetree123]

ok first off I really like the outfit by the tree so ;o;
also is that frida kahlo i spy

your town is kind of randomly laid out but it works? i mean i can tell it's a huge WIP but it still feels very nice to just stroll around in :> maybe try some neat flower arrangements? try creating a rainbow garden, make pictures with them (this is kind of hard lol but an idea)

the area with a lot of bamboo made me think of zen gardens i've seen people make - maybe try that?

i dunno, but you've got a very cute town so far! c:

 

[littlebabymonster]

Lol. I have Klaus, Diana, and Fang and I've had Canberra and Merengue.

I love the path. Especially how it looks around the tree. The pumpkins are too cute. I really like the shape of the river. You picked a great map, imo.

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

I took some pics.

Spoiler: suggestions!

I'll be digging holes to help you get a better idea of the placement I'm thinking of. Sorry if it looks like I want to destroy your town. xD

I think the tulip topiary should go on the sides instead of the middle. That way you can put a bench in-between if you want.


Some bushes would look great where the flowers are.


If you could move the fountain one space to the right, you could put another fountain on the other side and put the bench in the middle somewhere (might have to move it a few spaces back like you did before). Afterwards you can intertwine the path around the perimeter of the bench and between the fountains.



Shift the path on the right a little bit to the left to where that yellow violet is and make it follow the holes toward the train station. Now you've got a space to put a hammock!


I hope you like them! I love when PWPs are used in union with one another. Good luck!

I would love a review of my dream town if you get the chance. I'm not sure if I updated right when the clock strikes, but if you could check if you hear the town theme at the beginning, then that would be fantastic! DA: 4600-2145-6163