The "You're Banned" Game

Banned because hooray for peer editing and constructive criticism :D

Banned because yay!

Banned because I dunno, man. I just hate them xD I usually skip them in books, but I realize I kind of need to read them, in order to get what's going on, but I always prefer to be able to just jump right into the story. Omg, I have this one book, and the prologue is like 30 pages long, small print, too. It was ridiculous. I still have the book, too. I never got passed the first chapter xD
Yeah, I like the bickering. It just makes them seem more lively and fun to read about. That would be funny, if she did. As long as she doesn't get caught, of course. If she does, then Cade is just going to have bust her out! xD Oh, man, it's amazing to think how many different ways you could go with that story xD

Banned because oh, hm... I see. So you want to get to the action/good bits right away? Makes sense. :D

omfg. 30 pages. That's ridiculous... I always feel weird if my prologues are too long so I make sure they're not~ >w<

Bickering is amazing! Hehe, yup, so many different directions! It's so exciting!
 
Banned because yay! That's awesome >u<

Oh and if your story was published into a book, what would the blurb on the back say? :D
 
Banned because yay!



Banned because oh, hm... I see. So you want to get to the action/good bits right away? Makes sense. :D

omfg. 30 pages. That's ridiculous... I always feel weird if my prologues are too long so I make sure they're not~ >w<

Bickering is amazing! Hehe, yup, so many different directions! It's so exciting!

Banned because yes! I wanna get going with the story! Plus, usually, I need a fast paced story, or I can't focus long enough to read it. I had one book called 'The Madman's Tale' by John Katzenbach. I loved it, but it took me forever to get started reading it, because it had such a slow start, but man, it really picked up later on, and it was pretty ****ing amazing...to me, at least. Plus, people like to go back and forth between two different perspectives, i.e. Misery by Stephen King, and it confused the hell out of me. I never finished it xD I plan on it, though.

Yes, I know! Thirty freakin' pages. Yeah. That's why I don't mind your prologues much, because they are short ^^

I know! My story The Chase...not actually a story, yet, but I was thinking about making it one, and I got overwhelmed at all of the different directions it could go XD
Writing is amazing, now that I think about it.
 
Banned because yes! I wanna get going with the story! Plus, usually, I need a fast paced story, or I can't focus long enough to read it. I had one book called 'The Madman's Tale' by John Katzenbach. I loved it, but it took me forever to get started reading it, because it had such a slow start, but man, it really picked up later on, and it was pretty ****ing amazing...to me, at least. Plus, people like to go back and forth between two different perspectives, i.e. Misery by Stephen King, and it confused the hell out of me. I never finished it xD I plan on it, though.

Yes, I know! Thirty freakin' pages. Yeah. That's why I don't mind your prologues much, because they are short ^^

I know! My story The Chase...not actually a story, yet, but I was thinking about making it one, and I got overwhelmed at all of the different directions it could go XD
Writing is amazing, now that I think about it.

Banned because I'm on the same boat!

The story has to have a fast pace or I will lost interest

*attention span of a squirrel*
 
Banned because I hope the boat is big enough for the both of us 8D

By the way, you have been reading a lot of great books. I've just been following an old series from my childhood that really lost its luster over the years :(
 
Banned because I hope the boat is big enough for the both of us 8D

By the way, you have been reading a lot of great books. I've just been following an old series from my childhood that really lost its luster over the years :(

BBanned because this boat here ain't big enuf fer the two of us! >: D

Also banned because I haven't really been reading much of anything, lately xD
 
BBanned because this boat here ain't big enuf fer the two of us! >: D

Also banned because I haven't really been reading much of anything, lately xD

Banned because I read that in a really husky southern voice and laughed. You spelled everything perfectly and nailed the accent omg

It's better to read nothing than get your hopes crushed by really bad writing from what used to be your favorite series

btw I'm talking about this one

Warriors-NP1_Midnight.jpg


Just look at the facial expression of that cat. I'm dying
 
Banned because I read that in a really husky southern voice and laughed. You spelled everything perfectly and nailed the accent omg

It's better to read nothing than get your hopes crushed by really bad writing from what used to be your favorite series

btw I'm talking about this one

Warriors-NP1_Midnight.jpg


Just look at the facial expression of that cat. I'm dying

Banned because good! :D That's what I was going for ^^

Also banned because I had a friend who was OBSESSED with that series...I never could get into it...I was more into stuff like Misery, and 'The Madman's Tale...and Goosebumps, of course. xD I delved right into the adult horror, as a child.
 
Banned because GOOSEBUMPS

I ALWAYS WANTED TO READ GOOSEBUMPS BUT THE COVERS WERE TOO SCARY

Which goosebump book was your favorite??

Oh and here's another one of their covers

Warriors-NP5_Twilight.jpg


I feel like my personal space is being invaded
 
Last edited:
Banned because GOOSEBUMPS

I ALWAYS WANTED TO READ GOOSEBUMPS BUT THE COVERS WERE TOO SCARY

Which goosebump book was your favorite??

Oh and here's another one of their covers

Warriors-NP5_Twilight.jpg


I feel like my personal space is being invaded

Banned because hmm...I don't think I had a favourite. I do, however, remember the very first Goosebumps movie I saw. I don't remember a lot of the Goosebumps books I read xD

Yeah...ugh..that series. My friend, at the time wanted so badly for me to get into the series, she would read the books to me D:
 
Banned because I remember the movies too! The Mask really stood out to me. R.L. Stine was famous for making twist endings that no one saw coming. (Like how the girl finally takes the mask off.. She was told that the next person to wear it would have it permanently stuck to their face. And later she sees her little brother taking it out of the trash and putting it on ;A; The story just ends after that. Ugh dhsbfdf)

Aww, your friend was such a diehard fan! Do you remember why the books didn't interest you?

I can go on and on about how flawed the series is in general lmao
 
Banned because I remember the movies too! The Mask really stood out to me. R.L. Stine was famous for making twist endings that no one saw coming. (Like how the girl finally takes the mask off.. She was told that the next person to wear it would have it permanently stuck to their face. And later she sees her little brother taking it out of the trash and putting it on ;A; The story just ends after that. Ugh dhsbfdf)

Aww, your friend was such a diehard fan! Do you remember why the books didn't interest you?

I can go on and on about how flawed the series is in general lmao

Banned because the Night of the Living Dummy ones really freaked my ****, man xD
The first one I saw was Welcome to Dead House ^^ I still have three Goosebumps VHS tapes. I found them at a Thrift store, semi-squealed and grabbed them. They were only 50 cents a piece :D

Yeah, she was. I just...I was such a huge horror fan, at the time, that they just could not possibly interest me. If nobody was dying, and there wasn't some big mystery going on, I couldn't get into it.

- - - Post Merge - - -

Banned because I just ate~

Banned because now you're late...
I want to eat...but it's late ;n;
 
Banned because yes! I wanna get going with the story! Plus, usually, I need a fast paced story, or I can't focus long enough to read it. I had one book called 'The Madman's Tale' by John Katzenbach. I loved it, but it took me forever to get started reading it, because it had such a slow start, but man, it really picked up later on, and it was pretty ****ing amazing...to me, at least. Plus, people like to go back and forth between two different perspectives, i.e. Misery by Stephen King, and it confused the hell out of me. I never finished it xD I plan on it, though.

Yes, I know! Thirty freakin' pages. Yeah. That's why I don't mind your prologues much, because they are short ^^

I know! My story The Chase...not actually a story, yet, but I was thinking about making it one, and I got overwhelmed at all of the different directions it could go XD
Writing is amazing, now that I think about it.

Banned because I understand. Background info can get boring if given all at once. Do you think my stories are fast-paced? :3

Thanks!~ I had a longer prologue for Bitter but ended up making most of it into chapter one as it fit better in there~

Oooh, I see! I hope you make it a story! I would definitely read it. :3

IT IS SO AWESOME! YES!

Banned because yay! That's awesome >u<

Oh and if your story was published into a book, what would the blurb on the back say? :D

Banned because I'm not sure yet...

- - - Post Merge - - -

Banned because now you're late...
I want to eat...but it's late ;n;

Banned because late for what...?
 
Banned because the Night of the Living Dummy ones really freaked my ****, man xD
The first one I saw was Welcome to Dead House ^^ I still have three Goosebumps VHS tapes. I found them at a Thrift store, semi-squealed and grabbed them. They were only 50 cents a piece :D

Yeah, she was. I just...I was such a huge horror fan, at the time, that they just could not possibly interest me. If nobody was dying, and there wasn't some big mystery going on, I couldn't get into it.

Banned because of scoring that awesome 50 cent deal! 8U That's amazing

Warriors did have a lot of death, gore, and mystery though! It's a series about wild cat clans struggling to survive and constantly waging war against each other for stuff as simple as trespassing. There's treason, psychopaths that turn into serial killers, etc. If you read more of it back then, I think you might have gotten hooked like your friend and I c:

- - - Post Merge - - -

Banned because I'm not sure yet...

Banned because that's fine. OuO I was just curious to know what your story is about

- - - Post Merge - - -

Banning myself because I forgot to add that one of the characters dies by having another cat slash open his stomach and tear multiple organs in the process. This is in a book meant for like 12 year olds so yeah x3
 
Back
Top