The "You're Banned" Game

[Myst]

Banned because how short?

Banned because I have a horror piece that's two chapters so far.

 

[Ken1997]

Banned because I have a horror piece that's two chapters so far.

Banned because tell me, why is it that you write stories?

 

[Myst]

Banned because tell me, why is it that you write stories?

Banned because oh, uh... I have no idea... I've been writing for as long as I know. It's in my blood to write and I enjoy it too. ^w^

 

[Ken1997]

Banned because oh, uh... I have no idea... I've been writing for as long as I know. It's in my blood to write and I enjoy it too. ^w^

It's a hobby of yours? ^^

 

[Myst]

It's a hobby of yours? ^^

Banned because yeah, yeah, it is! Writing is to me what drawing is to artists~

 

[Ken1997]

Banned because yeah, yeah, it is! Writing is to me what drawing is to artists~

Banned because oh okay I understand. Also maybe there's someone there *that can help us out. (Silhouette, Chapter 1 paragraph 21)

 

[Myst]

Banned because oh okay I understand. Also maybe there's someone there *that can help us out. (Silhouette, Chapter 1 paragraph 21)

Banned because lmc. >.<

 

[Ken1997]

Banned because lmc. >.<

Banned because let me correct?

 

[Myst]

Banned because let me correct?

Banned because "let me check" and... thanks for catching that!

 

[Ken1997]

Banned because "let me check" and... thanks for catching that!

Banned because I've never heard of lmc before. Also in paragraph 25 it's shoot not shot. You're welcome.

 

[Myst]

Banned because I've never heard of lmc before. Also in paragraph 25 it's shoot not shot. You're welcome.

Banned because I'll go check on that one too... >.<

 

[Ken1997]

Banned because I'll go check on that one too... >.<

Banned because I know why you use correct grammar when talking to people, because you write stories.

 

[Myst]

Banned because I know why you use correct grammar when talking to people, because you write stories.

Banned for figuring that out just now... oh, and thanks for catching that second error! I think I might go through and edit my early chapters tonight.

 

[Ken1997]

Banned for figuring that out just now... oh, and thanks for catching that second error! I think I might go through and edit my early chapters tonight.

Banned because do you not proofread your chapters?

 

[Myst]

Banned because do you not proofread your chapters?

Banned because I do but it's been a few months since I wrote them so I have a fresher perspective. Plus, I want to edit not just for grammar but also story consistency.

 

[Ken1997]

Banned because I do but it's been a few months since I wrote them so I have a fresher perspective. Plus, I want to edit not just for grammar but also story consistency.

Banned because I don't have any knowledge on story consistency so I can't help you there.

 

[Myst]

Banned because I don't have any knowledge on story consistency so I can't help you there.

Banned because don't worry. I can handle that much. Basically, making sure that the characters didn't wildly change, also to edit in some foreshadowing.

 

[Ken1997]

Banned because don't worry. I can handle that much. Basically, making sure that the characters didn't wildly change, also to edit in some foreshadowing.

Banned because when did you write Silhouette?

 

[Myst]

Banned because when did you write Silhouette?

Banned because I started writing it in... March, I believe.

 

[Ken1997]

Banned because I started writing it in... March, I believe.

Banned because what do you mean by a fresher perspective? In paragraph 37 there doesn't need to be a comma after here.