The Super Mario Gang and The Ancient Power Star
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Sapphireflames
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hes never gonna continue the series...
Sonicdude41
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I forgot about this old thing I had here.
Let's bring some new life two this two year old thing. =D
Note: For those who've read the series, I don't know if I've still got the same writing charm, so bare with me.
Let's bring some new life two this two year old thing. =D
Note: For those who've read the series, I don't know if I've still got the same writing charm, so bare with me.
Sonicdude41
Senior Member
Chapter 4, Part III
After the two year "writer's block" that I had experienced, let's move this story along!
When we last left off, we saw that Peach had retrieved the first piece of the Star of Great Power. After doing so, she came to find out that Mario was in peril. Yoshi was informed of the devastating news, and both decided to go and save their fellow teammate. What mysterious enemy will the gang face?
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As Peach and Yoshi return back to Isle Delfino, they continue to wonder what in the world could've happened to their well-loved cohort.
Peach: I'm worried about Mario. Where in Pianta Village could he be?
Yoshi: jokjeisjejkddjsljkejdisjejlke (For all we know, he could've been gobbled up by... *gulp* a Chain Chomp!)
Peach: A Chain Chomp? What's a Chain Chomp? (I've been held captive by Bowser so many timees that I have no earthly idea what enemies Mario and Yoshi have faced.)
Yoshi: *eerily* jfjejkxsjksljekdjsjkelskdiejsiejejdisjeldsisiejskd (It's a creature that's feared among Yoshis and the local Piantians. We Yoshis fear Chain Chomps because the Great Chain Chomp (their master) gobbled up our Noble Chiefs.)
Peach: Why that's horrible!
Yoshi: jfjesiejdksjeidjisjifjlkejslijdskfmsjfleskdijfleksoskdosoekslk (That's not the worst part. After the Great Chain Chomp was done with them, he destroyed our wonderful village. In the process, he eliminated my mother. My father... I don't know where he is.)
Peach: *crying* That's very touching.... There is a possibility that the monster could be the Great Chain Chomp. If it is him, you could avenge your family and your own kind.
Yoshi: jfjejsiejdjksjlfkeisjofidjflsjeijosdkfoseijsi (Maybe. But until we get to Pianta Village, we'll know for sure.)
-----Several Lapses in Time Later, They Eventually Find and Arrive at Pianta Village-----
Peach and Yoshi finally arrived. Even though they hadn't been to Pianta Village before, they had a feeling that something wasn't quite right there.
Peach: Oh my! Something definitely doesn't look right!
Yoshi: jfjkejejekjlsdjkjflsjlejisjiejisji (You're right! Everything looks all wavy and dizzy and dizzy and wavy and wavy an---)
Just then, Yoshi fainted.
Peach: Yoshi! Wake up! Please! You must wake up... You must wake... Must... wa---
Then, as fast as Yoshi fainted, Peach did as well. At that instant, two dark figures surrounded them and took them into a secret tree hut.
Figure 1: I think it's working! Keep spraying!
Figure 2: Yes sir! *sprays spray bottle*
Peach & Yoshi: Agh!!! We're awake, we're awake!
Figure 1: Oh thank goodness! I thought you both would be goners!
Peach: Thank you for saving our lives. Wait... where are we exactly?
Yoshi: jfjelsjlkejlkjdjkejljsij (And who are you two?)
Figure 2: You are in a tree hut. This tree hut is one of the many huts that spot our Secret Tree Village.
Figure 1: We are the Piantian Duo. He is Grubby Pianta, and I am Chubby Pianta. We saw you faint in that heat wave, and we came to get you.
Grubby: It's not safe to go out there in that unbearable. Not as long as Sir Chomp is in charge.
Yoshi: kfljejskelsijekljljfklsjfljlkfjeisjflidjo (Gulp, did you say... Chomp?)
Chubby: Yes. Sir Chomp came into our humble village a few days ago. He said he was looking for some star thingy...
Yoshi: fjksliejksjlkelsjiekd (The Star Piece!)
Peach: Really? Tell us more about what he was looking for.
Chubby: Well, as he was looking around vigorously, he ran into some weird mustachioed man.
Peach: Really!? Describe him to us!
Grubby: He had on brown shoes, overalls, and a hat with an M on it.
Yoshi: Jejjifjeskjleisjflejsijfelsjfiejsfei (THAT'S MARIO!)
Peach: What happened next?!?
Grubby: Well, Sir Chomp recognized him as your Mario and wanted to talk to him behind a ground hut. They never came back, and that's when Sir Chomp began taking over.
Chubby: We haven't seen your Mario since.
Grubby: And worst of all, he found and used the Star Piece thingamabob to take over! He used its power to turn the place into a fiery fortress! Because of that, we had to retreat to higher ground before we fainted.
Peach: That's horrible! Yoshi, do you know what we have to do?
Yoshi: fjejsijejsiejkdjlsjjiejdk (Nope!)
Peach: We HAVE to save Mario and get that Star Piece!
Yoshi: jfojeksiejkdljeidjkejejksljekj (I'm not coming!)
Peach: *empathetically* Please, Yoshi. Put your fears aside. Do this for Mario. Do this for me. Do this for Toadsworth's wellbeing.
Yoshi: *stiffens* fjejsijojiejkjejdiejk (All right. Let's go!)
Peach: Good job, Yoshi! Let's go!
Grubby & Chubby: WAIT! You can't go out there! You both need protection against the heat wave!
Grubby: These ought to help you on your way.
------------Peach and Yoshi received Fire Suits!-------------
Chubby & Grubby: Well, best of luck to both of you on your adventure!
Peach: Thank you. Well, Yoshi, let's go!
Yoshi: fjejlsjkejidjeksoljidij (Yoshi!)
With Peach and Yoshi embarking on their quest to save Mario, what dangers will they encounter? How will this adventure affect Toadsworth's outcome! Come back soon to find out!
After the two year "writer's block" that I had experienced, let's move this story along!
When we last left off, we saw that Peach had retrieved the first piece of the Star of Great Power. After doing so, she came to find out that Mario was in peril. Yoshi was informed of the devastating news, and both decided to go and save their fellow teammate. What mysterious enemy will the gang face?
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
As Peach and Yoshi return back to Isle Delfino, they continue to wonder what in the world could've happened to their well-loved cohort.
Peach: I'm worried about Mario. Where in Pianta Village could he be?
Yoshi: jokjeisjejkddjsljkejdisjejlke (For all we know, he could've been gobbled up by... *gulp* a Chain Chomp!)
Peach: A Chain Chomp? What's a Chain Chomp? (I've been held captive by Bowser so many timees that I have no earthly idea what enemies Mario and Yoshi have faced.)
Yoshi: *eerily* jfjejkxsjksljekdjsjkelskdiejsiejejdisjeldsisiejskd (It's a creature that's feared among Yoshis and the local Piantians. We Yoshis fear Chain Chomps because the Great Chain Chomp (their master) gobbled up our Noble Chiefs.)
Peach: Why that's horrible!
Yoshi: jfjesiejdksjeidjisjifjlkejslijdskfmsjfleskdijfleksoskdosoekslk (That's not the worst part. After the Great Chain Chomp was done with them, he destroyed our wonderful village. In the process, he eliminated my mother. My father... I don't know where he is.)
Peach: *crying* That's very touching.... There is a possibility that the monster could be the Great Chain Chomp. If it is him, you could avenge your family and your own kind.
Yoshi: jfjejsiejdjksjlfkeisjofidjflsjeijosdkfoseijsi (Maybe. But until we get to Pianta Village, we'll know for sure.)
-----Several Lapses in Time Later, They Eventually Find and Arrive at Pianta Village-----
Peach and Yoshi finally arrived. Even though they hadn't been to Pianta Village before, they had a feeling that something wasn't quite right there.
Peach: Oh my! Something definitely doesn't look right!
Yoshi: jfjkejejekjlsdjkjflsjlejisjiejisji (You're right! Everything looks all wavy and dizzy and dizzy and wavy and wavy an---)
Just then, Yoshi fainted.
Peach: Yoshi! Wake up! Please! You must wake up... You must wake... Must... wa---
Then, as fast as Yoshi fainted, Peach did as well. At that instant, two dark figures surrounded them and took them into a secret tree hut.
Figure 1: I think it's working! Keep spraying!
Figure 2: Yes sir! *sprays spray bottle*
Peach & Yoshi: Agh!!! We're awake, we're awake!
Figure 1: Oh thank goodness! I thought you both would be goners!
Peach: Thank you for saving our lives. Wait... where are we exactly?
Yoshi: jfjelsjlkejlkjdjkejljsij (And who are you two?)
Figure 2: You are in a tree hut. This tree hut is one of the many huts that spot our Secret Tree Village.
Figure 1: We are the Piantian Duo. He is Grubby Pianta, and I am Chubby Pianta. We saw you faint in that heat wave, and we came to get you.
Grubby: It's not safe to go out there in that unbearable. Not as long as Sir Chomp is in charge.
Yoshi: kfljejskelsijekljljfklsjfljlkfjeisjflidjo (Gulp, did you say... Chomp?)
Chubby: Yes. Sir Chomp came into our humble village a few days ago. He said he was looking for some star thingy...
Yoshi: fjksliejksjlkelsjiekd (The Star Piece!)
Peach: Really? Tell us more about what he was looking for.
Chubby: Well, as he was looking around vigorously, he ran into some weird mustachioed man.
Peach: Really!? Describe him to us!
Grubby: He had on brown shoes, overalls, and a hat with an M on it.
Yoshi: Jejjifjeskjleisjflejsijfelsjfiejsfei (THAT'S MARIO!)
Peach: What happened next?!?
Grubby: Well, Sir Chomp recognized him as your Mario and wanted to talk to him behind a ground hut. They never came back, and that's when Sir Chomp began taking over.
Chubby: We haven't seen your Mario since.
Grubby: And worst of all, he found and used the Star Piece thingamabob to take over! He used its power to turn the place into a fiery fortress! Because of that, we had to retreat to higher ground before we fainted.
Peach: That's horrible! Yoshi, do you know what we have to do?
Yoshi: fjejsijejsiejkdjlsjjiejdk (Nope!)
Peach: We HAVE to save Mario and get that Star Piece!
Yoshi: jfojeksiejkdljeidjkejejksljekj (I'm not coming!)
Peach: *empathetically* Please, Yoshi. Put your fears aside. Do this for Mario. Do this for me. Do this for Toadsworth's wellbeing.
Yoshi: *stiffens* fjejsijojiejkjejdiejk (All right. Let's go!)
Peach: Good job, Yoshi! Let's go!
Grubby & Chubby: WAIT! You can't go out there! You both need protection against the heat wave!
Grubby: These ought to help you on your way.
------------Peach and Yoshi received Fire Suits!-------------
Chubby & Grubby: Well, best of luck to both of you on your adventure!
Peach: Thank you. Well, Yoshi, let's go!
Yoshi: fjejlsjkejidjeksoljidij (Yoshi!)
With Peach and Yoshi embarking on their quest to save Mario, what dangers will they encounter? How will this adventure affect Toadsworth's outcome! Come back soon to find out!
Sapphireflames
Senior Member
^.^ I'm glad you continue the story. I was waiting for what happened next. When I saw The Super Mario Gang in your sig i clicked on it and got got hooked on it ( thats what my writing teacher says xD)
Sapphireflames
Senior Member
Lol. JJG it's just a story. Or maybe Super-Sonic can put members in the story. ^.^
Sapphireflames
Senior Member
..........Please continue it! D:
AnimalCrossingcool
Senior Member
8 month bump
AnimalCrossingcool
Senior Member
When will the next one be made?
AnimalCrossingcool
Senior Member
:'( :'( :'( :'(Doctor said:
Sonicdude41
Senior Member
Sorry I haven't continued it guys. The school year has kept me very busy. But now that I actually have some time on my hands, let's continue this thing once again.
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