I'd like someone to let me know what they think of mine if that's alright.
updated during an evening snowfall
Heading to Mogi and Everleaf in a moment
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Mogi
Town:
Likes:
- nice layout
- park area
- like what you've done with most of your pwp's
Dislikes:
- a lot of path
- flower overload wherever there is no path
- no path to park area north of plaza
- totem pole is somewhat hidden
Dara's House:
Main: nice sitting room
Right: exotic bedroom
Back: cabana bedroom
Left: mermaid bedroom
Basement: regal bedroom
2nd Floor: lovely bedroom
Milly's House:
playroom
Suggestions:
- try a little more grass and trees
- the player homes a rather plain; try experimenting with unique looks
Final Thoughts: very nice, but not very much that makes it unique. as it is, it is good. I believe that with some work and imagination, you can make it great
Rating: 3.5/5
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Everleaf
Town:
Likes:
- nice paths
- koi pond
- city hall area
- train station area
- nice beach boardwalk
- cafe/park area
Dislikes:
- nothing really
Plum's House:
Exterior: nice cottage
Main: very nice
Right: a little cluttered
Back: again, rather cluttered
Left: nice restaurant; cauldron is out of place though
Basement: nice study
2nd Floor: nice, but still cluttered
Basil's House:
Exterior: nice zen castle
Main: interesing
Right: cooking room; a little bare, but I get the feeling that might be intentional
Left: this seems just bare though
2nd Floor: odd
Juniper's House: rarely see tents at all, let alone on purpose
Main: naturalist's tent
Suggestions:
- some more trees around the catbusstop
- some path leading to the hotsprings and campsite
- expand and improve Basil's house
- unclutter Plum's house
Final Thoughts: very nice, just some nitpicking detracts from it. a very lovely town.
Rating: 4.5/5