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Alby-Kun said:
The general idea is to choose 3 quotes from the book to write an essay that examines the theme of good and evil while considering the ideas of war and oppression
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If that is what your essay is about oppression and war, you should start of with stating the book like "the war between the birds and the bees is a book written by Michael Jackson. It is about blah blah blah little kids blah blah hehe blah. The book also talks about war and oppression"."I like turtles" is your thesis. And after that explain your 3 points supporting your idea. Never talk to the reader like it tells YOU or teaches us. Also never support your opposing side in anyway. Hope this helps!

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DaCoSim said:
Here it is!
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I still need to finish the tree.
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It's cute!
 
Call me Daniel said:
If that is what your essay is about oppression and war, you should start of with stating the book like "the war between the birds and the bees is a book written by Michael Jackson. It is about blah blah blah little kids blah blah hehe blah. The book also talks about war and oppression"."I like turtles" is your thesis. And after that explain your 3 points supporting your idea. Never talk to the reader like it tells YOU or teaches us. Also never support your opposing side in anyway. Hope this helps!

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It's cute!
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Your version of a thesis statement is pretty vague.. xD
 
i swear i breathe mla format and essay writing bc my teacher last year was obsessed with writing in a perfect structure!! half the stuff we learned about writing wasn't even in the curriculum it was the hardest class imo
 
lizzy541 said:
i swear i breathe mla format and essay writing bc my teacher last year was obsessed with writing in a perfect structure!! half the stuff we learned about writing wasn't even in the curriculum it was the hardest class imo
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I nearly failed English in 9th grade due to my teacher being extremely rough about grading essays. Nearly half the class got an average of 65-80. It was only tougher due to having multiple requirements that dropped our grade on the paper down to a 50% automatically if 3 of them were to not be adhered to.
 
Alby-Kun said:
I nearly failed English in 9th grade due to my teacher being extremely rough about grading essays. Nearly half the class got an average of 65-80. It was only tougher due to having multiple requirements that dropped our grade on the paper down to a 50% automatically if 3 of them were to not be adhered to.
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one time she took off 10 points because i didn't add in page numbers
but ya she graded essays pretty harsh too but i've never been bad at writing so i did fine
it was just a really annoying class to take since you really had to be careful with writing ur essays correctly
 
lizzy541 said:
one time she took off 10 points because i didn't add in page numbers
but ya she graded essays pretty harsh too but i've never been bad at writing so i did fine
it was just a really annoying class to take since you really had to be careful with writing ur essays correctly
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Are you sure it wasn't just the teacher? Some are more strict than others.
 
that sounds like more like college level o ___ o
 
it really was the teacher haha
she was just really uptight and was only focused on drilling the curriculum into our heads??
like cmon have some fun we're gonna be here all year
and @ naekoya ya my school district has advanced classes which are like 3 grades ahead
so i'm basically doing college work
 
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