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My town is very depressing and sad and I'd like some inspiration.
I'm not very good at writing crits but I can write what's good about your town and maybe some suggestions.

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I'm at 5400-2580-0148.
I'd love some advice on where to put PWPs (campsite, decoration, fountains, etc) and where to put a second house (a schoolhouse).
My flowers are sort of a hot mess right now, but I'm considering red, white, blue, and orange flowers.
The town's pretty disorganized right now, I'm sorry about that x.x;;;

Thank you!
 
I would welcome a review. My town has a sort of Dr Who theme. It is not "done."

Town: Whoville
DA: 4700-4303-8972
 
I'm at 5400-2580-0148.
I'd love some advice on where to put PWPs (campsite, decoration, fountains, etc) and where to put a second house (a schoolhouse).
My flowers are sort of a hot mess right now, but I'm considering red, white, blue, and orange flowers.
The town's pretty disorganized right now, I'm sorry about that x.x;;;

Thank you!
Your town is very straightforward, I personally love how you were able to finish the tiles so I was able to go around your world without randomly setting off. Aside from that, I think the fountains would be good right in front of the train station, you should add trees so that it resembles a path and that'll help your town look alot more neater~

I really think when you start out decorating, always consider what type of town you're trying to go for: Futuristic, Present day, Past or Fairy-tale, with that you can consider what other towns you can use as your inspiration and revolve what pwp's and tiles you can use.

For the tiles, I think you should go with something more realistic, if that's the tile of your dreams then stay with it, but if not, I suggest going with something that can frame your path more~

I hope that I helped~

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I would welcome a review. My town has a sort of Dr Who theme. It is not "done."

Town: Whoville
DA: 4700-4303-8972

Visiting!
 
Your town is very straightforward, I personally love how you were able to finish the tiles so I was able to go around your world without randomly setting off. Aside from that, I think the fountains would be good right in front of the train station, you should add trees so that it resembles a path and that'll help your town look alot more neater~

I really think when you start out decorating, always consider what type of town you're trying to go for: Futuristic, Present day, Past or Fairy-tale, with that you can consider what other towns you can use as your inspiration and revolve what pwp's and tiles you can use.

For the tiles, I think you should go with something more realistic, if that's the tile of your dreams then stay with it, but if not, I suggest going with something that can frame your path more~

I hope that I helped~

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Visiting!

That was super helpful, thank you :) I'm going for a nautical red/white/blue present day kind of feel. I'll keep the advice about the trees and fountains in mind.
 
Could you visit mine? I'd love some feedback C:

There's thunderstorm but there's an umbrella in present bags :3
 
Hi.I'm not sure if you have seen my towns before.I have two in my sig.You could choose one.Thanks.I'll visit yours too, if you like.
 
Yes! I'll visit all your towns. <:
I've visited Whoville, going to write a review after I do a few things.
 
You can visit mine. I'll be updating again in a few days cause Marshal is moving in, but I only have his ropes today. I updated it a couple of days ago so go right ahead. 5400-3515-8043
 
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I would welcome a review. My town has a sort of Dr Who theme. It is not "done."

Town: Whoville
DA: 4700-4303-8972
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When you said it's Dr Who themed, I expected something more city like? I've never watched the series so smack me if I'm wrong. I loved how pretty your town was aside from that, I believe most of the Dr Who stuff went on in your house as you did use the telephone box design alot.

I'm not exactly sure what you're going for when you said it's Dr Who theme, do you mean in your house or outside? I love the arrangement of flowers and how it matched with the fruit trees, I have nothing to complain about the patterns you chose to define the road.

As for some advice, you maybe can put benches more often, I haven't seen many around your town. ( Or if not benches, tree stumps or something? ) Also, where the big tree is, you can use your tile design to lead the visitor around your town. I'm aware that your town is a WIP so I'll leave it as that~ Overall, great job! I can't wait to see how it ends up. <:

Decided to take pictures now~
 
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Z0UVE0r.jpg
MyFbZ30.jpg

wlSUgin.jpg
jYiviGw.jpg

srqUrV8.jpg
vBWluCT.jpg
ZfOQaBG.jpg
iH1xeoQ.jpg

When you said it's Dr Who themed, I expected something more city like? I've never watched the series so smack me if I'm wrong. I loved how pretty your town was aside from that, I believe most of the Dr Who stuff went on in your house as you did use the telephone box design alot.

I'm not exactly sure what you're going for when you said it's Dr Who theme, do you mean in your house or outside? I love the arrangement of flowers and how it matched with the fruit trees, I have nothing to complain about the patterns you chose to define the road.

As for some advice, you maybe can put benches more often, I haven't seen many around your town. ( Or if not benches, tree stumps or something? ) Also, where the big tree is, you can use your tile design to lead the visitor around your town. I'm aware that your town is a WIP so I'll leave it as that~ Overall, great job! I can't wait to see how it ends up. <:

Decided to take pictures now~

Thank you so much! The show is about a man who can travel in time, so he visits many places and time periods. I was going for a natural, lush, feel. There are a few subtle nods, like bowls of bananas.

I took your advice and added a path that leads dreamers away from the wake up zone. I also changed the outfit I offer to a space suit.

I've been ill, or I would have read this and responded sooner. Thank you so much for the great suggestions! I also added a fourth bench. :)
 
If you want to be absolutely amazed and stunned, give my dream town a visit. It'll be worth your while.
 
If you want to be absolutely amazed and stunned, give my dream town a visit. It'll be worth your while.

First off, I know I'll be visiting next I play mine xD I need to visit more.

Also I finally put my DA in my sig in tiny letters. I would love a review of what little I have of my theme so far, I have one more PWP to place before I hit my limit and yes I have them where I want them<(^_^)>>Town theme is it looks gorgeous in the sundown of evening, but there is a money making conspiracy within each building>>potentially the mayor's plot xD Casino, outrageous bakery/restaurant prices and a very expensive five star hotel, it is technically still a HUGE work in progress, getting it done very slowly<3
 
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