☆ Reviewing Dream Towns! ☆

[Dewy]

I would like it if you reviewed mine its 4000-2344-9619

Visited!

Pros:​

★ That one sort of "park" area is super cute. The one surrounded by bushes with a wisteria trellis in the middle and roses around it. It's so pretty <3
☆ You have lots of bushes and flowers to fill in empty spaces.
★ The path design with moss growing on it (the one used in the wisteria trellis and rose park) is very pretty! I like that path a lot.
☆ I like your town layout! I don't think I've seen a river quite like yours before, it's very unique.

Cons:​

★ The path design isn't consistent throughout the town. You use three different stone paths. I don't like the one you used in the northern part of town at all - it's too contrasty and distracting. The one used in the southern half of town is much nicer, and the one with moss growing on it is the best of all. I suggest using only one design for your paths (probably the light gray one with moss on it). c:
☆ Going through your town, I noticed there wasn't really any sort of theme to it. There were PWPs that didn't really seem like they should be in the same town, like the sphinx just south of Re-Tail and the zen bell. Try using PWPs that make sense together or follow the same theme.
★ The dream was taken at night even though there is only one light-up PWP. You could try adding more light-up PWPs or taking the dream during the day to brighten things up.

Your town looks very nice overall! I'd just suggest organizing things a bit more, like the flowers, paths and PWPs. You could try doing more flower arrangements and color coordinating the flowers to tie the town together better. And adding more areas like that cute wisteria trellis park would be nice!


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I haven't updated my town in awhile but heyyy why not! I don't have my # with me so just look up the town Yesterd?. It should be the only one. please tell me what it looks like, haah

Hey! I tried looking it up but Luna said that no dream address existed for town of that name. I think (not sure) dream addresses can be deleted if they're not updated often enough. Maybe that's what happened?

Your town name is cool though. I like how it's spelled :O

 

[Dewy]

I'd love a review. My town's a major WIP so let me know what I should add.

(p.s. The houses are where the "meat" of the town is.)

Visited!

Pros:​

★ Your town seems to have a pretty clear theme: modern! I like it. You could continue with this by adding in more modern PWPs (clocks, lights, etc.).
☆ The Tokyo Tower looks really good lit up at night. And it fits in very well with the rest of the town's theme.
★ That fountain with the purple roses around it by your house was pretty!
☆ The light-up PWPs also looked very good in your town. I like them with the modern theme that you have

Cons:​

★ Beau was wearing a bloody shirt and it made him look like a piece of roadkill. FIX HIM! Please. ;-;
☆ I didn't really like the path you chose. It's a pretty pattern, but I think it looks too dark and dull. I suggest using a path that's a lighter gray so it'll match with the light gray color of your bridges (and buildings).
★I didn't really understand why the police station was hidden out in the cedar forest. I didn't understand the cedar forest either actually.. Are you going to heavily forest the whole town like that? Or just that one area? It seemed out of place with the modern theme that your town has going on.

I liked it! I can see it has a lot of potential but still a long way to go. There are lots of empty spaces. You could add in flowers and trees or you could add in more PWPs - I think the light-up ones will look really nice in your town with the modern theme. I also wonder what the tiki torches will become! Maybe a sort of desert area with the sphinx and pyramid PWPs..? That's what the torches remind me of. I?ve seen some cool dream towns like this that lay down a sand pattern over the grass and have torches and the pyramid/sphinx around that area. But I worry that the torches won't fit in with your town theme since they aren?t "modern." (By the way, I didn't dig up the stars in front of them. What was there?)
So far so good!

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Thank you for this review!! I really needed it~ I have no idea where to put my fruit trees, and I think the color scheme idea is great advice. I left the tools there by accident before updating my town xD I usually have no space in my pockets so I just leave them in the middle of my town lol. Im working on getting Sable to talk to my alternate characters >~< (kinda explains the reason why the path by lolly's house is like that, I was gonna use a boardwalk pattern, andd the bamboo area >~<) also for the diagonal bridge, idk where to relocate it because I basically worked my town around it until I got the brick bridge pwp request ;~;
Its still a work in progress, and I'll definitely use your advice

You're welcome! I'm glad my advice helped you a bit :3 Thanks for getting me one step closer to my dream badge ~
Have fun finishing up the design for your town!

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Thank you so much Dewy!

Time to hunt for another path

You're welcome! Good luck on your path hunt

 

[Dewy]

500 is so many omg. It would be really awesome if you could visit mine! I just did a big update and I am looking for feedback.
5700-2158-7681

Yeah, 500 is a ton :c
I probably won't get there, but it's worth a shot XD

Visited!

Pros:​

★ It was so bright and colorful! Very cheerful and fun to walk around!
☆ You used a ton of bright, pretty flowers that livened up the town.
★ You have a fairytale theme going, and the train station, town hall and bridges all look very nice together! You also use fairytale PWPs which look perfect.
☆ The windmill PWP is super cute and the colors work perfectly with the rest of the town's fairytale theme.
★ That area with the bamboo, clovers, and wisteria trellis by the pond was so nice! It looked very natural.

Cons:​

★ The path. I was tempted to put this as a pro because I liked and disliked it at the same time. So it's an in-between. It's hard to explain. XD
It was very bright and colorful and fun to walk on, but I think it was maybe too intense. It made me happy to look at, but I think it didn't quite fit in that well with the town. It seems like you're going for a fairytale theme, and the fairytale stuff uses soft, pastel colors (sort of). I suggest using a different path that isn't so bright. Also, it would look nice if you only used white, blue, pink, purple, and yellow/gold flowers because those are the colors that match the fairytale buildings and PWPs.
☆ There were lots of items for dreamers in your town plaza, and I think this is a good thing, but, I think it would look better if you wrap them all up with wrapping paper (the pinwheels and balloons) and put them throughout the town. That way as dreamers are walking through the town they'll notice little gifts to unwrap for a surprise :3
★ The fairytale bench in front of town hall was cute, but I think you should put another one in the same place on the other side of the path to balance it out.

Your town is great! My main suggestion is to use a different path and maybe organize the flowers more. You could also add in more PWPs that would fit with the town's theme. The picnic blanket always looks cute in fairytale towns!
You could consider using one of these paths if you want: http://aforestlife.wordpress.com/qr-codes/ The first one works perfectly with the fairytale bridges and they're both nicely designed :3

 

[stardrop-crossing]

Yeah, 500 is a ton :c
I probably won't get there, but it's worth a shot XD

Visited!

Pros:​

★ It was so bright and colorful! Very cheerful and fun to walk around!
☆ You used a ton of bright, pretty flowers that livened up the town.
★ You have a fairytale theme going, and the train station, town hall and bridges all look very nice together! You also use fairytale PWPs which look perfect.
☆ The windmill PWP is super cute and the colors work perfectly with the rest of the town's fairytale theme.
★ That area with the bamboo, clovers, and wisteria trellis by the pond was so nice! It looked very natural.

Cons:​

★ The path. I was tempted to put this as a pro because I liked and disliked it at the same time. So it's an in-between. It's hard to explain. XD
It was very bright and colorful and fun to walk on, but I think it was maybe too intense. It made me happy to look at, but I think it didn't quite fit in that well with the town. It seems like you're going for a fairytale theme, and the fairytale stuff uses soft, pastel colors (sort of). I suggest using a different path that isn't so bright. Also, it would look nice if you only used white, blue, pink, purple, and yellow/gold flowers because those are the colors that match the fairytale buildings and PWPs.
☆ There were lots of items for dreamers in your town plaza, and I think this is a good thing, but, I think it would look better if you wrap them all up with wrapping paper (the pinwheels and balloons) and put them throughout the town. That way as dreamers are walking through the town they'll notice little gifts to unwrap for a surprise :3
★ The fairytale bench in front of town hall was cute, but I think you should put another one in the same place on the other side of the path to balance it out.

Your town is great! My main suggestion is to use a different path and maybe organize the flowers more. You could also add in more PWPs that would fit with the town's theme. The picnic blanket always looks cute in fairytale towns!
You could consider using one of these paths if you want: http://aforestlife.wordpress.com/qr-codes/ The first one works perfectly with the fairytale bridges and they're both nicely designed :3

Ah, thanks so much for the thorough review! I'm glad you said something about the path, because I'm not sure how I feel about it either! I'll have to try some different things with it.
I'll take all of this stuff into consideration as I keep working on my town, thanks!

 

[Yui Z]

6800-2775-1196
You can visit mine

 

[oath2order]

4900-2112-8090

Check it out if you want.

 

[Sir Takoya]

How have I not noticed this thread yet? Mine is in the description