☆ Reviewing Dream Towns! ☆

[teanigami]

Mine is in my signature! It was updated last night and I put lots of items near the tree. If I had more time I would update again tonight because there is a meteor shower.

 

[amemome]

my town is not even close to complete, but if you'd like, you could check it out. dream code in signature!

 

[Byngo]

I'd love to hear your opinion of my town. <3

DA is in my sig~

 

[ForgottenT]

You can visit mine if you want, I haven't updated it since February I think, but I haven't done too much since so it's not really out of date.
Also there's a meteor shower so it looks really nice ^^

 

[420blazeityoloswag4jesus]

Just visited! Here we go:

I like that you used little fancy letters to name your town rather than just calling it "Rosewood." (This isn't really part of the dream review, just wanted to tell you that)

Pros:​

★ I liked the way the event plaza felt sort of "closed in" with trees and bushes around the sides. It gave a cute, cozy feeling. <3 The fruit trees along the bottom seemed sort of random though.
☆ I loved that you laid a bathrobe in front of the hot spring. That was a cute touch.
★ Your path looks very nice with the brick bridges!
☆ There was a cute, dramatic entrance up to Maku's house. The flower arch looked nice!

Cons:​

★ The bamboo forest with the hot spring was really cute, but I'd suggest adding a path up to it. Not your main path, but a smaller path (like maybe stepping stones). Something more natural and not as bricky as the rest of town.
☆ I thought the path looked sort of bad with the wooden bridge. Wooden bridges are beautiful, but they don't really look good with the brick path you have. I'd suggest using brick bridges for all three of your bridges.
★Over by Lolly's house and the beach access the path looked strange. What happened there? It looked like you might have laid it down wrong.
☆ There were a lot of things on the ground throughout town that looked like they didn't belong. Like all the tools on the diagonal bridge. Why were they there? I suggest you use wrapping paper to wrap up all the items that are meant to be for the dreamers and take away anything else. Then it's a fun surprise to open them and see what it is, and it won't look so cluttered.
★ I think diagonal bridges look bad when they have path coming up to them. Maybe relocate the bridge?


Overall, I'd say your town is quite cute. There was a lot of empty space though, and I personally prefer towns with more trees and flowers. I'd also suggest choosing a color theme and sticking with it throughout the whole town, because it'll tie everything together more. Like the flowers - I think it would look cute to use only flowers that are similar colors or that look "nice" together (ex: purple, blue and white flowers tend to look nice together, or pink and orange flowers look nice together, etc.) I guess that's more of a personal opinion though. I think the most amazing dream towns use only a few specific flower colors throughout the whole town. It always makes a town look very put together and not at all cluttery.

- - - Post Merge - - -

Wow, I got way more responses than I expected. O.O
I promise I'll get around to everyone's town. It might take me a while, but I'll get to them! Please be patient, and thank you :3

Thank you for this review!! I really needed it~ I have no idea where to put my fruit trees, and I think the color scheme idea is great advice. I left the tools there by accident before updating my town xD I usually have no space in my pockets so I just leave them in the middle of my town lol. Im working on getting Sable to talk to my alternate characters >~< (kinda explains the reason why the path by lolly's house is like that, I was gonna use a boardwalk pattern, andd the bamboo area >~<) also for the diagonal bridge, idk where to relocate it because I basically worked my town around it until I got the brick bridge pwp request ;~;
Its still a work in progress, and I'll definitely use your advice

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

kinda need one. it's in the sig.

Specific things I'd like opinion on:
more PWPs: what and where?
to the right of the southern bridge where the purple pansy is: tiki torch or streetlight(if st lt, which?)?
Alice: should I try make the left room into a palace bath or should I change it to a maid's quarters?
Reimu: how to make a Japanese bath area(not the spa set, but a feudal era-like bath)?

 

[Sidewalk]

Visited! Just wondering: why didn't you capitalize the town name or ken's name? XD

Thank you so much Dewy!

Time to hunt for another path

 

[Lee-chan]

Oh wow I saw that you write really nice and detailed reviews!
My DA is in my signature but since you already have so much to do, then take your time, okie^^
Thanks a lot <3

 

[Dev]

I'd love to hear your thoughts on mine if you have time! My DC's in my signature. x)

 

[aimeekitty]

I'm pretty new to the game, I'd love to get some constructive criticism on the outside areas of my game before things get too overrun and complicated. Path and tree placement, largely. The flowers are not done at all due to me trying to mass-hybridize some flowers and the flower beds and fence are just placeholders till I get more PWP suggested.

So basically? I'd love some suggestions on where to put bushes, path and tree placement, design of the outside near houses,? etc? and anything else that sticks out at you. Much thanks in advance.

Dream Address: 4600-3722-4754

 

[Akina]

Would you review mine? I've updated in a few minutes ago
Address is in my signature!

 

[Triplicatezero]

I'd love some feedback/ideas as to what to do with my town going forward, it's not at all complete

 

[AsaiT]

You can go to mines.

Major Tomomi of Kyoto
Dream Address: 4700-3314-5286

 

[CHICKENWATCHER]

Would you visit mine?
I just updated and the code is 5300-3391-2080

 

[Salem]

Would you like to visit mine (if you still need to)? Dream Address: 5700-2186-3063 It's a major work in progress so I know there's a lot of mess and unfinished areas. I'm also not sure when I last updated it, lol. And I'm waiting for a lot of PWP suggestions. But any suggestions/criticism is definitely welcome. Don't worry about being too harsh. I'm not really happy with the way the town is turning out tbh. O-O

Also, could you post your Dream Address if it's ok? I'd love to visit your town as well!

Also, 500 is a lot! Is there any way to know how many you're up to? Good luck!

 

[iheartbeau]

I'd love an objective take on my town!
5200-2186-5867

 

[Fantasyland]

You should visit mine! It's in my signature. Ignore the second floor and basement of my house, please!
(Also, every tree except 4 are supposed to have fruit. I just harvested, so they don't in the dream! Pretend they have all the different kinds of fruit.)

 

[Kitty2201]

You could visit my towns dream My dream address is in my signature

 

[CinnamonCrab]

Can i get advice on my paths? My town is strewn with random items, I have a villager moved in on my path, and my flowers are haphazardly placed. I know of these issues, I would just like to know how you think the paths and bridges could be improved so everything can be accessed. I would also like to know where the best place to put a second house (a schoolhouse) in would be! Thank you so much

5400-2580-0148

 

[Mayaa]

Mine is 5000-3055-6300. I'll check your's out too and write a review either here or somewhere on your profile. (assuming you have a dream town.)