Reviewing Dream Towns!

[ayeAmariah]

Dream Address is in my siggy!

Notes: It's kind of a work in progress right now, just trying to get villagers to suggest the PWPs I want D: And also, I'm trying to breed flowers so excuse the large flower meadows ^^;;

 

[PurplPanda]

Guys sorry I haven't been able to review dream addresses recently, doing it right now.

 

[TxAnt]

Feel free to visit mine (DC in sig) if you get bored. I just redid all the paths last night and am wondering if they go together and look ok.

 

[PurplPanda]

Ok, I will after I review everyone else.

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I'd like a review on mine too please!
It's still a work in progress, but any & all advice is appreciated <3

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Oops, forgot to add that my DA is in sig ! ^^;

Like:
1.Fountain with flowers! But you should have a pattern of flowers.
2. Train Station flower meadow
3. Meadows in general
4.Wall of Jacob's Ladders
5.So many flowers!
Dislike:
1. You have mainly hybrid flowers. Remember that regular flowers are pretty too.
2.Stitches' catchphrase is spelled incorrectly. I'm so OCD, I'm sorry.
Improvements needed:
1.Put paths down! It makes it so much easier, and if you choose the right ones, it makes your town look good too.
2. When you have large meadows of different species/colors of flowers, have a pattern. I know this is hard since you don't have lots, but when you do, you should have a pattern.
3.Fix Stitches' catchphrase.

 

[lexy_]

feel free to visit mine
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code is in sig

 

[PurplPanda]

Go ahead and check out mine. The code is in the sig under the spoiler.

Like:
1. Is that a Jumbo-Tron?
2. Fountain with bushes behind it
3.Your caution signs are cool
4. Your PWPs in general
Dislike:
1. You have a path leading from the town square, but it just stops randomly.
2.Random bamboo
3. You only have 1-unit paths in some places. It looks bad, and isn't convenient.
Improvements needed:
1.Make 2-unit paths
2. Have more bamboo, and make it less randomized.