Review My Town?

[MannyK]

Hi! I was wondering if anyone can visit my town in a dream and tell me some Pros and Cons about it.
It is not a very developed town, so I would like suggestions on how to make it look nicer.
Also if you can may you review my two main houses!
Also, I got the Illuminated Arch requested, may you tell me a good place to put it?
Thanks!

My DC is: 4000-3359-8672
Town Name: LUNGTOWN

 

[Lurrdoc]

Regarding the houses I think they all need work. Some of the furniture seems to clash and not fit well together, however, I really like your mayor's main room. The pave furniture looks good here and so do the items you added from other sets. I also liked the costumes you had on the mannequins. However, the sloppy stereo and 2 masks on the wall to the right of the room sort of don't match.

As for your town, it looks nice. It could use more pwp's and the flowers could be more spread out in places like around your house or in between Coco and Agent S's house. You could also try your best to put some nice trees between their houses to make the bench area look nice. ^^ The wisteria trellis by the left bridge could be moved it feels like it isn't centered with the bridge and was sort of in the way as opposed to being easily able to go under it. I really like your all your other pwp locations. Good choices overall for those. Overall, your town was pretty enjoyable and I was able to walk around it easily without stepping over flowers.

 

[MannyK]

Thanks!

 

[Angerfish]

I'll do little play-by-play of what I thought while walking around:

• I like what you've done with your camping area. It's nice that isn't next to a pond and the sleeping cot is a nice touch, but maybe you could add some trees around the area to give it that "foresty" feel.
• The area around Milly's house is very nice. It seems your going for some symatry with the trees there. The front yard of the house feels a little empty. I think some flowers or bushes trailing from the nearby river bank to that house would look nice. The inside of the house is pretty barren, though this is probably there for storage.
• Love the fountain area!
• Wow that's a LOT of flowers at Manny K's!. This is such a romantic location for a house too! You've got a view of the waterfall, the beach and a cool lantern. I guess if I had to critique this it's that there's a patch of noticeable Pansy hybrids, but everything else is mostly random. You may want to aim for consistency. Organize your different colors, create patters with your flowers, ect.
• Manny's house sort of makes me nervous. This first floor's music is really unsettling, which goes well with Anka's picture, the sloppy stereo and your weird portraits. Not sure what you'd going with for this room though. Feel's like a normal livable space, but with mario fire. The top floor is the fish set, which I have a soft spot for. I like how one of the brewter gyroids is beating on the yoshi egg. Not sure what's with the wheel though. Love the music box; it's one of my favorite tracks. This room sort of feels unorganized though. Maybe the Captain and Sailor mannequins with fit better here then with the Pave set.
• Yellow bench area is really nice, and it's tucked into this interesting point at the river. I think if you centered your bench a little and placed the archway around the point, it's look great!
• Going down the bridge by Milly's and through the fruit orchard is a little disorienting. It's cuts off right at Brewsters, which is a little surprising if your heading south. I light the forest feel, but maybe you could include a thin clearing that guides visitors around brewsters.
• Oyster's name matches her house. That's pretty cool! I like how the first floor of the house is organized, but I'm not sure what theme you going for. I really like the crackles from the oven and campfire though. The room to the right is the alpine set. It's simple, but I like it. It have a sort of sleepy vibe. Top floor looks like it might later become a bath room, with a camera facing the toilet--terrifying!
• Zen garden is in a pretty nice place, with the water fall within earshot. Some bamboo would look really nice here.

Overall, I really like your town! I think some of your interior docorating could use work, but it's not bad. Last thing is that it'd be nice if you put some flowers or something around your villagers' houses. They feel sort of neglected, especially the one's around Manny.

 

[TeeTee]

In the future if you need some start on planning your path. This is something I made to help you:

Spoiler

^red lines are path plans

 

[MannyK]

Thanks all of you! i will take the suggestions!

- - - Post Merge - - -

Oh and TeeTee, I visited your dream town and may i say that it is AMAZING!!! I love everything!

 

[TeeTee]

Thanks all of you! i will take the suggestions!

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Oh and TeeTee, I visited your dream town and may i say that it is AMAZING!!! I love everything!

Thank you Manny but my town was like yours once.

 

[MannyK]

Hopefully my town will turn out great, Im gonna lay down some brick path!