You expect me to draw this stuff? Alright, I'll be a little informative with what I was saying.
OP, look at chibi's properly and see how they're drawn, they don't tend to have breasts half the size of their body, I only said to make her taller because chibi's generally have thicker bodies, her legs are waaaaay too thick for her body size, same goes for the arms.
The dress is specifically an area that needs to improve, considering you've given her decently sized breasts due to her cleavage, make it so the breasts aren't made out of paper and try to give it a little bit of detail, folds in the dress is another thing you NEED to consider if you're giving it shading, as I said, it's like you've cut out a cartoon dress from a paper doll set and stuck it on the character itself.
I'm trying to not be as harsh as possible by saying this, but you need to improve quite alot because of these lacking features, You HAVE the potential to be decent but if you're just going to throw crits down the drain, that won't happen anytime soon.
But if you want a price, 30 TBT at max, you can just ignore what I'm saying if it really bothers you.
Bruh, only one person in this thread has mentioned a price and it's low because of the lack of the OP's effort, the OP needs to take feedback and crits if they want to sell their art at a somewhat ok price.
Also I said the dress needs more details such as folds, how is that only saying it looks terrible? I too can paste a cartoon dress on a character with no details, would that be art? probably not.
