ayeAmariah
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Hello! I'd like a review on my town O: DA is in the signature!
✿ post your dream town address(es) for a review! ✿
- Thread starter krielle
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I'd like a review too 
DA in my signature
thank you!
DA in my signaturethank you!
Mine is in my signature. I literally JUST uploaded it. I would like some advice because it's only about 10% done; I've been playing for almost 2 months now. Please be honest! I'm going for a zen/nighttime feel, although it's not evident quite yet.
Also, after uploading I actually did some work so I will be updating tomorrow.
Some of my goals:
- Have a couple more fully expanded and themed houses by where my (the mayor's) home is right now
- Only have blue, pink, white and purple flowers
- Hot springs and more zen PWPs
- More organized orchards & bamboo
- A meadow somewhere
Also, after uploading I actually did some work so I will be updating tomorrow.
Some of my goals:
- Have a couple more fully expanded and themed houses by where my (the mayor's) home is right now
- Only have blue, pink, white and purple flowers
- Hot springs and more zen PWPs
- More organized orchards & bamboo
- A meadow somewhere
plastercannon
~::College Cramming::~
I'd love a review kiyo. DA is in sig.
No! ^^
I have just been caught up with cycling for a villager
I've lost so I could not go to the dream suite so often.
I will continue right now, my apologies~
I'd love a review, my dream address is in my signature!
I just updated it last night when there was an aurora
What I liked:
✿ the aurora is pretty!~ gives a nice overall effect to your town.
✿ flowers to the bottom of the town plaza are arranged nicely xD
along there i see wendell walking around.
✿ i love the spot to the right of mitzi's house! it looks very natural,
especially how the log bench is placed. behind a tree and surrounded
by flowers. neat <3 well done!
✿ overall, i like the top half of your town better than the bottom half.
theres a lot that can be worked on but i believe you can do it! <3
What I think can be worked on:
✿ the grass paths look really weird in contrast to the snow >w< ~
✿ basically, your town would look so much better in spring time because
the paths you chose for your town is all green and doesn't look nice with
the snow.
✿ flowers could be arranged more nicely, the normal flowers make your
town look very messy in my opinion. not really a big fan of scattered normal
flowers.
Overall rating: 6/10!
✿ the aurora is pretty!~ gives a nice overall effect to your town.
✿ flowers to the bottom of the town plaza are arranged nicely xD
along there i see wendell walking around.
✿ i love the spot to the right of mitzi's house! it looks very natural,
especially how the log bench is placed. behind a tree and surrounded
by flowers. neat <3 well done!
✿ overall, i like the top half of your town better than the bottom half.
theres a lot that can be worked on but i believe you can do it! <3
What I think can be worked on:
✿ the grass paths look really weird in contrast to the snow >w< ~
✿ basically, your town would look so much better in spring time because
the paths you chose for your town is all green and doesn't look nice with
the snow.
✿ flowers could be arranged more nicely, the normal flowers make your
town look very messy in my opinion. not really a big fan of scattered normal
flowers.
Overall rating: 6/10!
Please can you visit my town and tell me what you think of it all so far?
6900-3561-5479
What I liked:
✿ i loved the dark flowery paths you used! it's refreshing to see
something like it once in awhile. it looks pretty paired up with the
heart cobblestone path you used. -- i didn't know it was a path
until i looked close up at it heh.
✿ very nice use of combined pwp's to create a unique area!! in other
words, i'm a big fan of what you did with the water fountain and the
flower arches right next to the town hall and up a bit. <3
✿ it pretty much looks like the trees are perfectly spaced apart, and it
looks natural.
What I think can be worked on:
✿ your town is beautiful, but i found it to become boring after
a few couple of minutes.
✿ i recommend to you~ more PWP's and flowers. you could also
place paths around your town, not necessary though. however
if you do choose to place paths around your town then go for either
the heart cobble stone path you used or a wooden kind of path.
Overall rating: 8/10!
✿ i loved the dark flowery paths you used! it's refreshing to see
something like it once in awhile. it looks pretty paired up with the
heart cobblestone path you used. -- i didn't know it was a path
until i looked close up at it heh.
✿ very nice use of combined pwp's to create a unique area!! in other
words, i'm a big fan of what you did with the water fountain and the
flower arches right next to the town hall and up a bit. <3
✿ it pretty much looks like the trees are perfectly spaced apart, and it
looks natural.
What I think can be worked on:
✿ your town is beautiful, but i found it to become boring after
a few couple of minutes.
✿ i recommend to you~ more PWP's and flowers. you could also
place paths around your town, not necessary though. however
if you do choose to place paths around your town then go for either
the heart cobble stone path you used or a wooden kind of path.
Overall rating: 8/10!
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WatashiWantsWaffles
かわいいかも&#
Hi, my place is fairly underdeveloped, but a nice place to walk around. The villagers are all pretty nice, and it`s ok if my score is lower, `cos it`s still being made beautiful.
DREAM ADDRESS: 7900-2923-9162
Please visit, i would love anybody to. I`ve only had one person dream about my town
.
DREAM ADDRESS: 7900-2923-9162
Please visit, i would love anybody to. I`ve only had one person dream about my town
.
Hi, my place is fairly underdeveloped, but a nice place to walk around. The villagers are all pretty nice, and it`s ok if my score is lower, `cos it`s still being made beautiful.
DREAM ADDRESS: 7900-2923-9162
Please visit, i would love anybody to. I`ve only had one person dream about my town
Added yours to my list =D I will visit your dream town xDD
WatashiWantsWaffles
かわいいかも&#
Thanks soo much! Have you had a look yet, sn0wx?
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I would really appreciate it if you had a look at my town as well I'm almost done with it, still working on my alts houses. I would love to know your opinion about it & what I could still improve ;w; My dream address is down below in my signature!!!
Take your time & thanks!
I'm almost done with it, still working on my alts houses. I would love to know your opinion about it & what I could still improve ;w; My dream address is down below in my signature!!!Take your time & thanks!
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420blazeityoloswag4jesus
i dont blaze ok
I need help with my town >.< please critique it with brutal honesty, and please help me improve by giving some suggestions ~ >.< my town is not finished yet but I could use some reviews ~
EDIT:: DA is in siggy ^^
EDIT:: DA is in siggy ^^
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I'd love a review! Dream address is in my signature Please excuse all the stuff laid out all over my town >__> In the process of completely redecorating my first house and moving things to my second house >.<
But please be honest and let me know what I can do to fix my town. Currently I'm most focused on the interior than the layout of my town~
Please excuse all the stuff laid out all over my town >__> In the process of completely redecorating my first house and moving things to my second house >.<But please be honest and let me know what I can do to fix my town. Currently I'm most focused on the interior than the layout of my town~
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