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I want feedback on my house not my town. My house is a castle theme. It is almost finished and want some nice feedback on what I should do too complete it! Whoever gives the most helpful feedback wins 500k(: Dream Address 4900 2487 7769
 
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Just an fyi. We can't visit you if we don't know your dream address or town name~
 
When I entered the code, it went into a town of ElkRiver? Is that your town name? The villagers are different from yours, besides Al.
 
Are you only talking about your house exterior, because your interior looks nothing like a castle. I liked the way you mixed mermaid and fairytale. I think a fairy tale door would probably look a bit nicer than the mermaid door, but that's just me. I absolutely how the fuscia roof matches with the mermaid exterior.

And which part of it is not finished yet?
 
Typing this as I go: (I will include feedback for the town as well, is that fine?)
First of all, I love your pattern choice! It made me feel like I was living in a kingdom :) However, you shouldn't fill up most of the town with patterns, you should save room for flowers and trees.
Right outside your house, I felt like it was very pretty! The colorful exterior and the water patterns make it look like you are in a kingdom in a moat.
Inside your home, as soon as I walked in, I liked the darkness of the space room. It felt very realistic and the music was spot-on. I liked sitting in the seat with the control panel as well, LOL! In the left room, the bathroom was really cool! However, I would put the hot spring away because I think it would look really cool without it! In the right room, I LOVED the arcade play room style. It was a very interesting take on to a room. However, with the bowling balls, I would put the pins in front of them, so it would look more realistic! In the back room, I liked the cafe room! I think I just found an inspiration for my cafe! I love the use of realistic items that would actually be put in a real cafe. I didn't find anything bad with this room. In the basement, I liked all the dotted furniture! I loved how you refurbished them all and made them actually look nice together. I would put more dotted furniture in there though. Up stairs, I liked the mermaid series! It must have been hard to collect the series AND make it look nice. It looked like the effort was well worth it!
I really liked your town! I would only make small updates and see what you think, because I think your home is fine as it is right now, definitely better than my home!
 
Wow ok i must have too update it that was my house like a month ago!!

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My town is now updated!!
 
I really like your house.

A few things though.

In the throne room, maybe you should replace the whirlpool bath with an "outdoor bath" since it looks more like stone.
In the grave room, more graves! Also, the painting seems slightly out of place unless there's a story for why it's there.
In the bedroom, find a way to make the bed stand out--it seems like it doesn't match with the rest because it looks so pale.
 
I really like your house.

A few things though.

In the throne room, maybe you should replace the whirlpool bath with an "outdoor bath" since it looks more like stone.
In the grave room, more graves! Also, the painting seems slightly out of place unless there's a story for why it's there.
In the bedroom, find a way to make the bed stand out--it seems like it doesn't match with the rest because it looks so pale.
I know trying too get more graves:/ thanks for the feedback(:

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I really like your house.

A few things though.

In the throne room, maybe you should replace the whirlpool bath with an "outdoor bath" since it looks more like stone.
In the grave room, more graves! Also, the painting seems slightly out of place unless there's a story for why it's there.
In the bedroom, find a way to make the bed stand out--it seems like it doesn't match with the rest because it looks so pale.

Also do you think the whirlpool bath would go well with the first room you walk into?
 
I don't think the whirlpool bath would go with anything, to be honest. It just looks extremely out of place in the castle.
 
Your interior fits the castle theme very well. I'm not sure about the exterior. It is gold, but I don't know. I am personally not a fan of this type of exterior. I would recommend a wooden zen door as it resembles old style castle doors more.

I laughed at the basement room you have. It is perfect. A dungeon for the peons. Brilliant. My FAVORITE room in the house was the banquet hall. You might want to change the wallpaper and flooring to look more elegant. Nice lobby. You could probably add more bathroom stuff to your bathroom. The upstairs Gorgeous furniture I feel is too modern as opposed to castle-like. Pretty nice chapel in the right room. You might want to use a hard floor to give off the impression that it is like a church. Correct me if I'm wrong with this room.

Overall, I like it a lot. It's spacious, which is what I feel a castle should be, but I feel like you can fit a few more castle-esque items into certain rooms in certain areas to bring out your interior some more. :)
 
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