Please visit my recently updated DA!

[benben12]

I just updated my DA (5700 4478 0372) last week and would love to get some feedbacks about it. I might do some major re-landscaping in two weeks so, any comments are absolutely welcome!

I have 3 houses. Prat's house has a golden exterior with HHA value of about 1.5 millions. Angelica's house has a very nice 7-11 store in there, while Emily's house has a really cool personal museum on the second floor.

Feel free to visit and comment. Also, let me know your DA if you want me to visit too.

Thanks, guys! I really appreciate your time and effort.

 

[TheGreatBrain]

I will check it out in about an hour.

 

[patriceflanders]

I'll have a look

maybe look at Paarl too (to me, my town is "finished", but hey there's always room for improvement, no ?) : 6600-4546-2246

edit : while updating my dream an hour ago, the code changed (again) : it's now
6600 4628 2156

 

[benben12]

Thank you guys. I'll visit your towns tonight

 

[TheGreatBrain]

I gave you a review at the train station.

 

[seigakaku]

I'll visit later tonight, although I think I've visited before I can't remember

 

[benben12]

Bump

 

[Lou]

I would love town review ^^
It's my first Dream Adress, still very WIP but I'm quite happy with c:
going to visit yours now! brb!

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mine is in my signature x3

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writing reviews are hard ;n; !!
so first off:
blossomed towns are my favorite :*
i'm jealous of some of the PWPs you have *--* and you've got a nice map !!
my favorite area transition were the coffee place (how the bridge the connects you to the place, and the small island looks like a maze) and the statue fountain area c:
I like how you matched the colors of flowers with your alice in wonderland pattern, and everything is nicely organized / connected.

Cool 7/11 shop :*

 

[patriceflanders]

okay here goes:

1) I love the combination of the differents paths you have used. Lou's right, it gives your town an Alice in Wonderland feeling. Also, the choice of your villagers really fit in that theme too.

2) One of your bridges (the one on the right) is aligned diagonal (not sure if this is correct English *, but sure you understand), which gives the layout a playful feel (again, great for the theme)

3) Love the classroom, "office"/library and personal museum in Emily's house, great idea (what's the room in front, a chapel ?). With the theme in mind, I think her house (the outside) fits in the best

4) You have the full rococo in Prat's house - I have it too in my mayor's front room, but for some reason Prat's room seems bigger than mine / maybe because I use the "normal" version of the rococo (your pink makes the room definitly lighter and therefore maybe it seems bigger).

In general: love what you've done with the place and think your combination of zen and fairtytale PWP worked out fine. I myself went for the complete fairytale, maybe should combine a bit of both too.

Personally, I am not too crazy about the golden houses of NL. One of my humans had it for like a week or so, than I changed a few parts to their original state. It just gave me a headache (literally).

Like me, you still have the normal bridges. Looking at the colors of your path, the fairytale bridge really would fit in perfectly. Maybe, like me, you are waiting for a villager to ask for it...

Please visit Paarl too (dream address is just changed ): 6600 4628 2156 and let me know what you think. Please also be critical. After a few dreams today, I feel inspired to changed a few things... not sure what yet, but maybe you can help me along the way...






* = sorry English is only my third language

 

[Flyffel]

Liked:
- Very saturated with all the hybrids and saturated colorful paths!
- The "random" little nature paths! (I use the same pattern, love it!)
- I generally dislike water tiles because they still are not water (haha) but the part with the "bridge" and bamboos was so beautiful I can forgive using them. xD
- I like your cheerful doctor office a lot more than mine... I need to improve mine...!

Suggestions:
- A picnic blanket should be surrounded by pink trees for "hanami"!
- Clean up your beach and design it. xD
- Add some clothes for male characters too!

Questions:
- What is the bookset called that you use on desks in your classroom? (Please Profile Message me!)

Please visit my dream town too if you have time, I have some similar rooms and I think you will like parts of the town! :3 (Addy in signature!) Would love a little review and suggestions. It's not in perfect dream condition but oh well...

 

[benben12]

Thank you sooo much guys for visiting my town. I'm really glad that you enjoyed your visit. Also, anymore comments will be greatly appreciated

 

[benben12]

bump

 

[benben12]

bump

 

[Eline]

Woah, I just visited! Your town is so pretty! I wish I could make my town look like that

 

[jasa11]

6700-2142-4574 I'll review yours soon let me post this first

 

[benben12]

Woah, I just visited! Your town is so pretty! I wish I could make my town look like that

haha thank you!!

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thanks! i'll visit your DA by tomorrow

 

[benben12]

bump

 

[honeyaura]

I'll visit today as well
And I'll post a review once I'm back online lol

 

[honeyaura]

Your town is gorgeous!

-I love the transition from one area to the next. Everything seems to be unified perfectly.
-Manages to be very eye-catching without anything fussy/overwhelming.
-The mix of laid-back nature and concrete areas compliment each other perfectly. Nice balance.
-ONLY thing I didn't like was the beach that had a bunch of pink azaleas. And even then it was out of the way, so it barely affecting anything!

Lovely town! I have a DA but it's from many many months ago, and currently updating it lol.
Hope this was a decent enough review!

 

[benben12]

Your town is gorgeous!

-I love the transition from one area to the next. Everything seems to be unified perfectly.
-Manages to be very eye-catching without anything fussy/overwhelming.
-The mix of laid-back nature and concrete areas compliment each other perfectly. Nice balance.
-ONLY thing I didn't like was the beach that had a bunch of pink azaleas. And even then it was out of the way, so it barely affecting anything!

Lovely town! I have a DA but it's from many many months ago, and currently updating it lol.
Hope this was a decent enough review!

thank you for visiting!!! i just visited your town too and it's pretty. i really like it how you keep it simple and not too overcrowded