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Please critique my DA for Palette! [CLOSED]

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Do not bump this thread, i decided to work on my town a bit more before accepting critique.


This is my new main town which was created a few minutes before 2015 rolled in here in the US. I started the in-game time in November similar to when i actually got ACNL though because some of my villagers were with holders and i needed to TT them in once they were all ready from their holders. This is the first time updating my DA in Palette and i am looking for your thoughts C: I am open for path suggestions/looking for a nice water path.

I would also love to see a screenshot of your favorite place in town, if you post one i will send you a little something C: I will also critique yours if you ask. I have also posted my former towns DA if you would like to compare them and state if you prefer that vibe that town had over this one if you would like to compare to previous work. Please mainly critique Palette, Astoria is just for comparing purposes.

Palette (current town) DA: 4900-5249-5557
Astoria (old town) DA: 4800-4874-2270

- Please keep your criticism appropriate, you may either post your review here or PM it to me if you would like to go more in detail/be more harsh.
- Please do not ask for any villagers in my town, at this time they are all permanent residents with possibly 2 being switched out in the future but i will not name them.
- Please do not look in my houses, they are not done. The only room i consider "done" is Natalie's upper floor which is a caf?, so you are free to check out that room and give me your thoughts. Marie's "house" is still a tent since I just recreated her yesterday to allow my path to flow better and more naturally.
- Please help me decide which bushes to line my desert with by Ankha's house. The white roses are placeholders.
- All yellow benches will be replaced by nicer benches and are placeholders.
- Please excuse any stray flowers/items lying around town, i recently cycled for Pietro back so there is some clean up that might have been missed.
- Please help me decide what to put in area's of my town marked with blue pattern. I am open to all ideas. Areas marked in green are going to be filled with future projects when they are suggested.
- My beaches are mostly bare and will have banana/coconut trees added later on.
- My apple orchard was destroyed while i cycled so excuse the big gap, it will be replaced sometime this weekend or moved to another location that i found.

Thank you for your time/reviews C: hope you enjoy my town, it is still a huge WIP and i hope to complete it soon
 
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I'll definitely visit! I'd also appreciate it if you'd review mine as well, my DA is in my signature. Will post review asap
 
I'll definitely visit! I'd also appreciate it if you'd review mine as well, my DA is in my signature. Will post review asap

take your time i will review tomorrow most likely since it's getting late here. thank you though<3

actually kind of disappointed 78 views on this thread and only one person agreed to critique it..when i did this in the past i got way better results :/
 
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I liked your town, nice villagers, lovley paths, faboules flowers and so on. Though I feel like there are not enough trees and too many flowers (imo). And the sand path outside Ankhas house felt a little "basic" but you can get a new more faboules one from
THIS DA: 2700-0520-1469

(The DA is BEAUTIFUL so it's a good place to get inspiration)



And I would really appriciet it if you could perhaps review my DA?
My DA is still a WIP and it's missing a few flowers here and there
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DA: 6100-5101-5055
 
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