Paradox (Chapter 18)

[Bulerias]

Wow last time I checked you were at chapter 2...

The fact that he put up chapter five is my fault.

Well thank you Gengar. You get a kooky.

I hope you don't give up on the reading since there are so many chapters, though.........

 

[JJH]

Wow last time I checked you were at chapter 2...

The fact that he put up chapter five is my fault.

Well thank you Gengar. You get a kooky.

I hope you don't give up on the reading since there are so many chapters, though.........

No, I'm actually quite a fast reader. Read all three chapters in about five minutes. Please, add as much as possible.

 

[Bulerias]

Wow last time I checked you were at chapter 2...

The fact that he put up chapter five is my fault.

Well thank you Gengar. You get a kooky.

I hope you don't give up on the reading since there are so many chapters, though.........

No, I'm actually quite a fast reader. Read all three chapters in about five minutes. Please, add as much as possible.

Ah, okay! I definitely will.


^_^ I shall add two chapters early in the morning tomorrow, and if all my regular readers shall be finished with them, I might post the third one.

 

[Gabby]

Is this going to be a novel that you sell or a novel than you just put on the internet?

 

[Bulerias]

Is this going to be a novel that you sell or a novel than you just put on the internet?

I'm probably going to publish it with Amazon.com

 

[JJH]

Is this going to be a novel that you sell or a novel than you just put on the internet?

I'm probably going to publish it with Amazon.com

Really? I bet it will sell well. I find it rather exciting that I'm reading a book that may be sold to other people before it's out on the market. But I'm weird like that.

 

[Bulerias]

Chapters 6 and 7 are up, they explain why the heaven Jericho was in was rather drab. Also... err... Chapter 6 is the most gruesome out of all of the chapters.

 

[JJH]

Also... err... Chapter 6 is the most gruesome out of all of the chapters.

Oh boy. But I must read on!

Editage: I just finished, taking a break to have a muffin. I actually found chapter 5 more gruesome then 6. Is Mariam evil?

 

[Propaganda Man]

I'm gonna read them now. But before you publish it I'd describe the characters because ussally physical books do.

 

[Bulerias]

Also... err... Chapter 6 is the most gruesome out of all of the chapters.

Oh boy. But I must read on!

Editage: I just finished, taking a break to have a muffin. I actually found chapter 5 more gruesome then 6. Is Mariam evil?

To answer your question without going into detail (so as to avoid spoilers), Miriam IS NOT evil. Weird how that works, no?

 

[Propaganda Man]

Miriam was just trying to protect him. That note probably means he will in fact find a greater truth about everything thats going on. Right now Jericho is a blind ant in a field of lawnmowers




I think a chapter needs to be added before Jericho and his "love" dies. It would not only make the latest chapter stronger but it would give us a reason to see that there is love.

Also, a note, Jericho defeated greed in that chapter in the form of lust. He didn't before near the lake but now he is getting stronger mentally. Hopefully physically too as he has no way to fight. Its strange that a boy who leaves his parents to look at something that would surely kill him wouldn't be more of a rebel when dead. Just a thought I guess.

But please add that chapter.

 

[Bulerias]

Miriam was just trying to protect him. That note probably means he will in fact find a greater truth about everything thats going on. Right now Jericho is a blind ant in a field of lawnmowers




I think a chapter needs to be added before Jericho and his "love" dies. It would not only make the latest chapter stronger but it would give us a reason to see that there is love.

Also, a note, Jericho defeated greed in that chapter in the form of lust. He didn't before near the lake but now he is getting stronger mentally. Hopefully physically too as he has no way to fight. Its strange that a boy who leaves his parents to look at something that would surely kill him wouldn't be more of a rebel when dead. Just a thought I guess.

But please add that chapter.

Oh yes, he will definitely see that he has NO clue as to what's going on. However, that shall be remedied a bit later on...

Hmm... I shall do that, then.

And yeah, he is definitely progressing as far as mental and even psychological powers go. However, he has yet to truly make a leap, a giant step forward... However, I must add one very important note. He did not defeat greed YET. The object of his greed was taken away from him... but it wasn't necessarily Alejandra. Vague, eh?

 

[JJH]

Miriam was just trying to protect him. That note probably means he will in fact find a greater truth about everything thats going on. Right now Jericho is a blind ant in a field of lawnmowers




I think a chapter needs to be added before Jericho and his "love" dies. It would not only make the latest chapter stronger but it would give us a reason to see that there is love.

Also, a note, Jericho defeated greed in that chapter in the form of lust. He didn't before near the lake but now he is getting stronger mentally. Hopefully physically too as he has no way to fight. Its strange that a boy who leaves his parents to look at something that would surely kill him wouldn't be more of a rebel when dead. Just a thought I guess.

But please add that chapter.

Oh yes, he will definitely see that he has NO clue as to what's going on. However, that shall be remedied a bit later on...

Hmm... I shall do that, then.

And yeah, he is definitely progressing as far as mental and even psychological powers go. However, he has yet to truly make a leap, a giant step forward... However, I must add one very important note. He did not defeat greed YET. The object of his greed was taken away from him... but it wasn't necessarily Alejandra. Vague, eh?

Oh dear now I'm confused... Maybe his greed is just being in Heaven 1? 'Cause if it appeared when he reached Heaven, and it isn't Alejandra, then it must be that. Or the Truth. But that wasn't taken away. He never had it. I don't know, just guesses.


BTW, PM, that was the best metaphor I've ever heard.

 

[Bulerias]

Heh, heh, well, maybe you'll be able to figure out what happened with the later chapters.




Also, I must make a very important note directed to some of my readers... Some of you have rather misguided ideas about my writing style and the plot progression. Here's what I want to say, in a nutshell.

-I am NOT trying "too hard" to be intelligent, nor do I "rub it into anyone's face".
-The plot begins cliched, but that was the intended effect. KEEP READING, trust me.
-The love story is NOT there to appeal to teens and adolescents. It's integral to the plot because it's a bit more than a love story.

There, I just had to get that out of my system.

 

[Grawr]

This is going along really quick. He meets the girl, she dies (or, maybe not dead forever, but she still died), and now she meets someone else who is already in love with him and seems like some sort of evil...pursuader...person...

I dunno', its pretty confusing.




I'll just have to read on, I s'pose.

 

[Bulerias]

This is going along really quick. He meets the girl, she dies (or, maybe not dead forever, but she still died), and now he meets someone else who is already in love with him and seems like some sort of evil...pursuader...person...

I dunno', its pretty confusing.




I'll just have to read on, I s'pose.

Breakneck speed, isn't it? All of the events hurl Jericho straight into who-knows-what, increasing the sense of urgency... But you'll understand everything by... Chapter 14.

 

[Gabby]

Is this going to be a novel that you sell or a novel than you just put on the internet?

I'm probably going to publish it with Amazon.com

cool

 

[JJH]

This is going along really quick. He meets the girl, she dies (or, maybe not dead forever, but she still died), and now he meets someone else who is already in love with him and seems like some sort of evil...pursuader...person...

I dunno', its pretty confusing.




I'll just have to read on, I s'pose.

Breakneck speed, isn't it? All of the events hurl Jericho straight into who-knows-what, increasing the sense of urgency... But you'll understand everything by... Chapter 14.

So we're halfway to understanding your story? And yet, we're over a third of the way through...

This may sound like a stupid question, but what does ''paradox'' mean anyways? >_<

 

[Gabby]

Please put up chapter 8 i will give you a cookie of your choice.

 

[Bulerias]

Really? Do you guys want the next chapter posted? 'Cause I don't think Fabio or Zel finished reading these. D: