Need some help

[Propaganda Man]

I wrote a review (rough draft version) and I want to know if anyone would care to look over it and give their thoughts. Also fix any grammar problems. I'll send you a PM copy of it.

And guys, do me a favor and don't start an "argument" here.

 

[Brewsterboy]

how about sending one to me? luckly mino didn't post I hate him

 

[Furry Sparks]

luckly mino didn't post I hate him

That was random and uncalled for.

 

[JJRamone2]

how about sending one to me? luckly mino didn't post I hate him

I hate YOU.

 

[Propaganda Man]

how about sending one to me? luckly mino didn't post I hate him

I hate YOU.

And guys, do me a favor and don't start an "argument" here.

 

[Propaganda Man]

Anyone else like to help?

 

[JJRamone2]

how about sending one to me? luckly mino didn't post I hate him

I hate YOU.

And guys, do me a favor and don't start an "argument" here.

Did you not catch by the bluntness of that that is was a joke?

 

[Bulerias]

Umm, sure. Send it over.

 

[Mino]

how about sending one to me? luckly mino didn't post I hate him

Hmm, luckily I didn't, huh?

 

[Brewsterboy]

Hey mino, I'm sorry im nine I have no brains and if you really want I will die in a fire pit