Need help with town tune!

[oranje]

I'm not good at reading music and there is a certain tune I want for my town. It's the first few notes of this song starting with 0:01 with the saxophones. If someone could please help me convert this into a town tune, I'd greatly appreciate it!

 

[ams]

Hey! I can help you tomorrow if you still need it - I can't get into town hall due to fireworks and I don't TT

 

[oranje]

Hey! I can help you tomorrow if you still need it - I can't get into town hall due to fireworks and I don't TT

That would be great! Thank you so much!

 

[ams]

Give this a shot and let me know what you think! If you'd like a shorter/different portion of the song, feel a note is off etc. I'd be happy to keep working on it (I think the second last note needed a sharp/flat but the rest was ok)

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[oranje]

Thank you! I like your work but maybe could I have the beginning part of the same song? https://youtu.be/7gkTcfZ1ww4?list=PL946E4A18A9CB10B8
I'm not sure which one I'd like better. Sorry about that!

 

[PaperBag]

Hey, I did two from the first song you posted.
The town tune is not capable of making most of the notes made by that saxophone, but I tried my best to get to notes close to the one's in the song. Also the timing of the town tune won't match the song well either.

1: Just the beginning diddy

2: Beginning plus little part after

 

[ams]

Ok try this one out! Again there's one note that's off (It's the A which should technically be a B flat). No worries if you want me to try something else

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[oranje]

Thank you so much everyone!