Just Updated Dream Town, Need Criticism! [updated: August 6]

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Hey! So Ya I just updated my dream a couple minutes ago and I would like to know what I can do to my town seem more.. idk.. intriguing i guess :D

the dream address is 4100-2374-1493

So if u are bored and wanna go check it out, that would be amazing :D

thanks so much to anyone who does this for me~

If you wanna, you can leave ur DA here if you visit mine, and when I have some free time, I will go visit it!

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Just Update!
8/6/2015 at 11:30 pm EST
 
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i just visited and your town is really nice!! the only improvements you could really do are work on the area around Lilo's house (top right corner?) and plant more trees! i noticed that you don't have a ton of trees in your town C:
 
lizzy541 said:
i just visited and your town is really nice!! the only improvements you could really do are work on the area around Lilo's house (top right corner?) and plant more trees! i noticed that you don't have a ton of trees in your town C:
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I use the area around lilo's house for bell transactions.. there is an abd in here house and people drop the bells outside :D

and ya there used to be more trees, but I cut them down because the look of roses was better for me ^-^

most of my trees are long the train tracks and on the beach :D thank you so much for your tips! :D
 
I love the brick path. I like stone paths in general. I also like how you have a multitude of roses in some areas. My favorite place would have to be this:
HNI_0048.JPG
Gotta love Tails!


These are all suggestions:

I saw a little illuminated tree off to the side of Jacob's house. Speaking of Jacob's house, considering he is the mayor, maybe you could make it look cooler by adding some streetlights, illuminated trees, or any 1x1 pwp here:
HNI_0047.JPG
I also dug out some other great spots for pwps:
This spot would be great for a bell, tulip topiary, hammock, or video screen
HNI_0044.JPG
This place could be used for a statue fountain or windmill
HNI_0045.JPG
Next to the town hall is a fantastic place to put a flower clock or illuminated clock, kinda had to dig up some stumps though:
HNI_0046.JPG

Overall just make your PWPs really stand out and not look like they spawned out of nowhere. Symmetry, planting flowers and bushes around them, putting similar themes together, congruency, etc. really go a long way.
 
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Mega_Cabbage said:
I love the brick path. I like stone paths in general. I also like how you have a multitude of roses in some areas. My favorite place would have to be this:
View attachment 137416
Gotta love Tails!


These are all suggestions:

I saw a little illuminated tree off to the side of Jacob's house. Speaking of Jacob's house, considering he is the mayor, maybe you could make it look cooler by adding some streetlights, illuminated trees, or any 1x1 pwp here:
View attachment 137408
I also dug out some other great spots for pwps:
This spot would be great for a bell, tulip topiary, hammock, or video screen
View attachment 137409
This place could be used for a statue fountain or windmill
View attachment 137411
Next to the town hall is a fantastic place to put a flower clock or illuminated clock, kinda had to dig up some stumps though:
View attachment 137414

Overall just make your PWPs really stand out and not look like they spawned out of nowhere. Symmetry, planting flowers and bushes around them, putting similar themes together, congruency, etc. really go a long way.
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WOW THOSE ARE AMAZING IDEAS
thank you so much I will work on them now!
 
I love the paths around, they are super cute! There could be more trees or flowers or something (maybe clovers?) around the front of the coffee shop, that's the first thing that really jumped out at me. The paths around the police station/beach ramp could maybe use come cleaning up with the edges. The huge amount of palm trees is a little awkward, makes the beach seem tiny.

The flower arrangements are super cute, I love those a lot! Also, the path across the bottom part of the town is really pretty, the colours look so good with the houses and pwp's there; but the two parts of the town have super different feels with the two paths, the top more modern and the bottom more fairytale which might be a little jarring. The general choice of pwp's is nice, I like that too. The only thing i really have to say is maybe have some parts that look a bit more natural? like less pathing, irregular flowers, some trees/tree stumps, that might look good.

Overall though I really do like it, the whole atmosphere is really cute and pleasant to be in :)
 
desieroble said:
I love the paths around, they are super cute! There could be more trees or flowers or something (maybe clovers?) around the front of the coffee shop, that's the first thing that really jumped out at me. The paths around the police station/beach ramp could maybe use come cleaning up with the edges. The huge amount of palm trees is a little awkward, makes the beach seem tiny.

The flower arrangements are super cute, I love those a lot! Also, the path across the bottom part of the town is really pretty, the colours look so good with the houses and pwp's there; but the two parts of the town have super different feels with the two paths, the top more modern and the bottom more fairytale which might be a little jarring. The general choice of pwp's is nice, I like that too. The only thing i really have to say is maybe have some parts that look a bit more natural? like less pathing, irregular flowers, some trees/tree stumps, that might look good.

Overall though I really do like it, the whole atmosphere is really cute and pleasant to be in :)
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thank you so much :D

ya i tried to go for 2 different themes, I guess I can make that look a little better hahaha

thank you so much for the criticism :D
 
I'll visit as soon as I can (I'm eating right now...) :) Feel free to visit my DA which is under my "Town info" spoiler c:
 
I'll visit it. I don't think I can go into detail till tomorrow night but in the meantime feel free to visit mine, maybe nab an idea or two.
 
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