I Need A Dreamie Judge! :)

[KyokoSmile124]

Hello Would someone please like to visit my dream town? I am trying to make it make it very happy like most people but I am at a loss of where to go from here. There are so many things to be done, I wish it were even half of the way done. I would greatly appreciate it and could pay you bells for your time if you like <3

My dream address is~ 4300-3283-6782 ^w^*

 

[Chipped-Teacup]

Okay, so first impressions, lovely! I like the blossoms blowing everywhere, goes with the whole oriental theme of your town. You positioning of a gap in the QR codes in the plaza doesn't align with my bed though- don't know if it's different for different people! I'm not a huge fan of the flowers, like I feel they should be more pastel considering your theme. I really like the water QRs around buildings and stuff, they look really pretty! Plus your house is cool, loving the hotel theme . Keep going with it, loads of potential!

 

[KyokoSmile124]

Okay, so first impressions, lovely! I like the blossoms blowing everywhere, goes with the whole oriental theme of your town. You positioning of a gap in the QR codes in the plaza doesn't align with my bed though- don't know if it's different for different people! I'm not a huge fan of the flowers, like I feel they should be more pastel considering your theme. I really like the water QRs around buildings and stuff, they look really pretty! Plus your house is cool, loving the hotel theme . Keep going with it, loads of potential!

Eeekkk you've already given me so many ideas! Unfortunately Redd is visiting today so I could not get him to shoo hehe but I shall resave the town in the morning once I patch where his tent was The pastel idea is so nice, I would like for there to be pink and yellow everywhere ^w^ Thank you thank you a billion times thank you hehehe ^__< <3

 

[toadsworthy]

First off, I really love the name of your town!! Narrows is awesome

Your House is super awesome, I love the whole theme you went for! Lots of people put tons of furniture in their house because it seems like the right thing to do (me included) but using negative space properly like you do is even more talented. The pictures may be too much all over the place though... and consider adding more to the back room, it didn't seem finished

In the main town I love your flower pattern N, and flower designs in general so maybe keep that going across the town and find extra spots to make more. I personally like the color palette across town, I don't think you should stick to just one color, and the ideas you have already are really nice! but focus on your favorites, it just seems like there is a lot going on... maybe pick one theme and create a story with it, it just seems clunky in some spots... there isn't a real pattern to the water paths and some of the PWPs seem weird... like the parabolic antenna and solar panel, it doesn't make sense why they are there and takes you out of the oriental theme you have. Same with the paths around your house, I wanna use the bridge behind it, but it takes me out of the setting when I have to walk across the "water"

But I can tell you have an amazing eye for making beautiful settings. Just the set-ups for your lamps (which I never saw using in my personal towns) are cute to walk by. The wind turbine is a tricky PWP, but you made it look gorgeous.

So just work on streamlining and connecting your paths and theme, focus on creating a story that people continuously enjoy throughout the whole town and it will look super quaint and beautiful at the same time

 

[KyokoSmile124]

visiting now! will type out a description in a minute... love the name already though!

Oh my you're so kind! :,) Really thank you very much, if there is anything I can do as thank you let me know~!

 

[toadsworthy]

Oh my you're so kind! :,) Really thank you very much, if there is anything I can do as thank you let me know~!

you can visit Riften in return, DA in my sig... I'm working on getting new PWPs, but its almost done

 

[KyokoSmile124]

you can visit Riften in return, DA in my sig... I'm working on getting new PWPs, but its almost done

I want to deeply thank you so very much for your detailed review, I actually wrote your ideas down in a little notebook i have with a sketch of my town~ I have so many ideas now! I don't feel stuck anymore :,) I would absolutely love to visit your little town! Again thank you soooo much, the ideas are flowing so give me a few days (maybe a bit more) and I hope you will see that your ideas have helped my town grow ^u^;

 

[toadsworthy]

awww great! always glad to help! have fun fixing up your town, some people get stressed out changing paths and stuff, but I sorta love it I just had to swap out half my villagers, demolish some hedge fences and fix up some paths in my town and while its been slow getting bushes, I love seeing it change!