Dream Town Reviewer!

[VioletPrincess]

Will you be doing this in a couple of days? I am still trying to get my town back in order after doing a 16 villager cycle to get Rosie back into my town. I have made a lot of changes. You can take a look at my town how it was if you want. But it is very different now

 

[JellyBeans]

Me too!

I'm in Azalia!

What I Liked
Items on the ground! Yeah!
Your path is cute! And I like how you have different types of tile, not just the one.
I love the fountain in front of your train station, it fits in perfectly and I love the flowers around it. The flower arch in front of it is cool too!
The zen garden is really nice with the bamboo near it.
I like how some of your river is lined with the purple shells - it looks good!
The cat face standee is really nice outside your house
Your mayor's house is really cute. I love the pink stuff as I walk in, and the whole house is really nice, especially the left room! But the basement is a little out of season.. haha.
Lisanna's house is really nice so far, it looks good! I'm guessing a school? And Mira's cafe(?) looks nice as well!
I love all your greenery as well!

How you could improve
Urm, I don't know. You could swap your mayor's basement for something less, well, Christmas-y? You also have a few bare areas that you could just dump flowers in I guess But your town was really nice overall!

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Will you be doing this in a couple of days? I am still trying to get my town back in order after doing a 16 villager cycle to get Rosie back into my town. I have made a lot of changes. You can take a look at my town how it was if you want. But it is very different now

Probably, yes. Just tell me when you want me to visit and do a review and I will

- - - Post Merge - - -

I think I'll do one more. I might not, I don't know..

 

[Swiftstream]

I'm in Azalia!

What I Liked
Items on the ground! Yeah!
Your path is cute! And I like how you have different types of tile, not just the one.
I love the fountain in front of your train station, it fits in perfectly and I love the flowers around it. The flower arch in front of it is cool too!
The zen garden is really nice with the bamboo near it.
I like how some of your river is lined with the purple shells - it looks good!
The cat face standee is really nice outside your house
Your mayor's house is really cute. I love the pink stuff as I walk in, and the whole house is really nice, especially the left room! But the basement is a little out of season.. haha.
Lisanna's house is really nice so far, it looks good! I'm guessing a school? And Mira's cafe(?) looks nice as well!
I love all your greenery as well!

How you could improve
Urm, I don't know. You could swap your mayor's basement for something less, well, Christmas-y? You also have a few bare areas that you could just dump flowers in I guess But your town was really nice overall!

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Probably, yes. Just tell me when you want me to visit and do a review and I will

- - - Post Merge - - -

I think I'll do one more. I might not, I don't know..

thanks very much for reviewing my town!!

I actually havent updated since december actually ; a ;

I have changed my basement and mira, and lisanna's house a lot :3

Thanks so much for the feedback!!!

 

[JellyBeans]

code is in my sig
thank you very much

OK...

What I Liked
I love Spring towns so much...
So many items I loved the relaxing bath outfit and all the food and stuff.
Easter eggs with candy inside?!?! <33
I loved the area with the Zen feel, and the boards (and cats!) around it. So calm and peaceful
Your path is really cute - perfect for Spring! And the animal patterns are really cute!
Yay for flowers and trees and bushes!
Your mayor's house is so bright and colourful and cute! It's just amazing all the way through! I especially love your basement of villager pictures! And the zen exterior is nice, too.
Your alt's houses are really nice as well! Daichi's house gave me a really Zen feeling, nice and calm and peaceful. The gym room was nice, and I liked the Nintendo basement! I'm guessing kaiji's house is a multi-room thing, with the shop and the hospital and lovely spa and classroom(?) and games room or something. And I just liked yuki's house, but I didn't explore it fully ;3
The Egyptian area was nice as well, with the king tut mask and the mushrooms and sphinx...

How you could improve
Gee, I dunno. Maybe try and squeeze either some stumps or a log bench around the campfire? I loved your town!

 

[nyenisu]

hiya, my town is still a WIP, but i would like some feedback on improvements and stuff like that. c:

dreamc: 4200-2959-7153

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

you know, I kinda need a review about now.
more advice about specific parts than whole town.
1) all houses except Yukari's
2) the south-western area
3) what and where for more PWP's
4) hybrid placement around town

it's in the sig spoiler

 

[lucindaa]

So, Can Town...

What I Like
Well, there's an aurora as I visit but that doesn't count
I like the clothes and items you left out!
Your paths are really cute, and I love how you have a different type depending on where in the town it is.
As always, I like the amount of flowers everywhere. And I like the tire toy near Butch's house, it fits in well with the flowers!
I love the couplets of villagers living together. Prince & Flora, Lopez & Bluebear.
Your lighthouse placement is awesome, and I like the bench near it.
Your house is really cute! I love the upstairs room with all the villager pictures in glass display cases, that room in general I guess! The whole house is just amazing!!

How you could improve
Haha I don't know really. There's a few bare patches in a few areas that you could just fill with flowers or a couple of trees or something, I don't know Couple more trees? I just love your town <3

Thank you so much for the lovely review, I'm glad you liked my town

 

[Klauser_Bateson]

Just updated my dream town and would like some feedback on it. Dream Address in sig.

 

[proddc]

http://www.belltreeforums.com/showthread.php?131141-Do-you-have-a-cool-town I kinda started the same thing! haha if more people participated you could've looked on this (x but my da is 4200-3391-7428 , its supposed to be Animal Village from Doubutsu no Mori the movie. But i put a path in haha and only have alfonso from the movie, but my two characters are ai and yu !

 

[JellyBeans]

Please do visit mine
6700-2364-3876

I'm in akeland!

What I Like
Your paths are perfect for Winter!
I love the pink flowers around your fairytale clock and Aelith's house - it fits in perfectly with the exterior of her house! And I love the Hawaiian to floor! I love all the rooms in it.
Flowers~
The bamboo forest is really nice, with the lighthouse nearby
Jelly of your picnic blanket and wisteria trellis - they look nice near each other.
You have Ozzie!!!
Bonny's house is really nice. It's more simple than the others, but it looks so good. I can tell some rooms are a WIP.
I love the special stumps lining the path near Bonny's house!
Evalsy's house is so nice! I love the main room, it's so cosy, even though the christmas tree is a liittle out of season. The left room is really good, and the sloppy room is awesome! The other rooms are cool as well

How you could improve
Um, I guess finish up your alt chars houses, take out the Christmas tree at your house.. :3 And maybe in between the special stumps near Fauna's house, plant bushes or flowers? And, the streetlamp and trash bin in the middle of the path, well, I guess you could move to the side of the path or something? Just an idea.

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DA in sig. It's very unorganized.

Startown!

What I Like
Your paths are nice!
I love the signs pointing the way to places in your town, it's really cool!
Your house is cool, even if some rooms are a bit bare.
Flowers! Especially the ones lining the river!
I like your zen garden with bamboo and bushes nearby!
You have Mira
I like the general amount of greenery you have.

How you could improve
In your mayor's left room, the wallpaper and floor hurt my eyes a bit but meh. Yeah, tidy up a bit, but you said it was a bit unorganized so yeah. Dump it in alt char's storage or something hehe. Your town felt a little crowded in some places. So in some areas, maybe chop down bamboo or something, and in some areas plant a bit more greenery (flowers, trees, bushes), for example by retail.

 

[JellyBeans]

My town is still a work in progress, but please review anyway c:
DA in sig ~

Winter...

What I Like
The special stumps near the plaza with famous mushrooms. Yay for gigantic people!
I love your flower arch - I wish I had it suggested!
I like how your town is in Summer, even if the town is called Winter.. then again your mayor is called Summer... anyway!
You have Merengue and Pashmina and they recognized me xD
Merengue and Roald are living next to each other. I think that's cute <3
I like the area with the hot spring and the bamboo. Very zen
You have hybrids in some places.
I quite like there not being any paths - no rules on where to go! Yeah!
I love the fountain by your train station, surrounded by all the hybrids!
Your mayor's house is really nice! I like the regal room at the back - it looks like a wedding or something? The gorgeous and mermaid rooms were good as well.

How you could improve
You could organize your flowers in some way, so they're not just in random patches around town. I also think you could maybe dump all the storage stuff in your basement in a closet, and add a different set to the basement. Or just have all your villager pictures in there Get Francine so the sugar sisters are united And for Autumn's house, you could maybe have some cabin items in there and keep it as a tent to fit in with the campsite area? That might be what you're doing but..

 

[JellyBeans]

I'd love to hear opinions on my town, I just finished it. <3

Just some minor things are left to finish, like my characters alt houses. Btw, my DA is in my signature.

I'm in Alfheimr!

What I Like
The name of your town!
Yes! Another Spring town!
I love your paths!
Your plaza surrounded by trees and bushes, with flowers behind it? Amazing.
I love flower arches and log benches <3 They look so good together, with all the flowers surrounding them!
I love the area with the statue fountain and wisteria trellis, surrounded by Jacobs ladders. It looks so pretty!
Nice lighthouse placement!
I like the bus stop area, with the picnic blanket and town hall right nearby
Heh I like your flag
I LOVE the windmill area, with all the special stumps and mushrooms <33
I like the bamboo forest near Chevre's house! And the zen garden and hot spring near Hamlet's house!!
I love your mayor's house! All of it - it looks so nice!
Alt #2's house is really cosy on the outside, surrounded by purple tulips, and cool on the inside. Alt #3's house is quite nice so far, with the harvest series.

How you could improve
I absolutely loved your town so pretty much nothing, except finish your alt houses p) and by the windmill, you could put some hybrids by the mushrooms to add colour, and in the corner near it, I think there was a tile misplaced - it looks like it was meant to be an inside corner :3

 

[FireNinja1]

Thank you so much for the review! I will certainly improve.