Dream Town Feedback?

[Chaerin]

I've been working on my town for the past few days and think that i've made some decent progress. But, I know that there are probably some things I could get rid of, add, change, etc. So, I was wondering if there were any people who would be willing to look at my town, and give me some feedback / constructive criticism. My town is pretty far from being done, but I think I like a lot of the progress I've made. Please let me know what you think of my town so far and what you think I could / should do to help improve it and make it look better.

Dream Address: 4D00-001D-F6B6

 

[tae]

yeah i'm in the same spot as you are w/ reconstructing my town since the update.
(hopefully here this week i can update a progress DA ahha..)


i guess first impressions when i entered your DA was i didn't know where to go because theres no structured paths that kinda "guide" you place to place. i'm not a huge fan of fairy tail towns but this is a good start so far.

one thing that really saddens me is the only dress up option is strictly feminine ( i have no issues with dresses, but i wish there were less hand held items and more clothing items, so it's less cluttered looking)

your villager houses look like you plot resetted them and although i'm not huge on spaced out houses i really think that whole all to the leftist in a curve looks really cute like that.

it's a great start so far, really it is. i can't wait to see what structure you end up bringing to it as your progress on your town~

 

[nostalgibra]

I'm really bad at this and I have no ideas on how to improve haha but omg your town is so gorgeous!! What you've accomplished so far is some of the best I've seen. I also really love your mayor's house!! I can't wait to see how the rest of it turns out.

 

[Eudial]

So far it's looking good! I think having the pattern as your grass instead of just maybe a path looks kinda strange.

 

[Chaerin]

yeah i'm in the same spot as you are w/ reconstructing my town since the update.
(hopefully here this week i can update a progress DA ahha..)


i guess first impressions when i entered your DA was i didn't know where to go because theres no structured paths that kinda "guide" you place to place. i'm not a huge fan of fairy tail towns but this is a good start so far.

one thing that really saddens me is the only dress up option is strictly feminine ( i have no issues with dresses, but i wish there were less hand held items and more clothing items, so it's less cluttered looking)

your villager houses look like you plot resetted them and although i'm not huge on spaced out houses i really think that whole all to the leftist in a curve looks really cute like that.

it's a great start so far, really it is. i can't wait to see what structure you end up bringing to it as your progress on your town~

yeah, i purposely made it that way so you could pretty much choose to go whichever way you'd like.
i don't actually plan to have so many items lying out when i've finished, i just sat them down for a moment and never picked them back up when i went to update. i think the reason the houses look like that is because i actually do a lot of tting, so it messes things up a bit. i'll try to add more masculine clothing options and not have so many things lying on the ground. thanks for your feedback!

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I'm really bad at this and I have no ideas on how to improve haha but omg your town is so gorgeous!! What you've accomplished so far is some of the best I've seen. I also really love your mayor's house!! I can't wait to see how the rest of it turns out.

Thank you!! It took me quite a while to get a lot of those things. I appreciate you taking the time to check out my town.

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So far it's looking good! I think having the pattern as your grass instead of just maybe a path looks kinda strange.

Thanks! Yeah, I see it that way too at times, it took me a while to actually find something that I thought I could work with. Thanks for sharing your thoughts ^^