Dream town feedback, please? I'll give you one in return!
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Blondiexo
total trash
I just looked at your town and the first thing I noticed was your paths. They're super cute and fit your town! I like the welcome thing you have in front of your train station. Your villagers are adorable, and you have a lot of nice hybrid flowers. The only thing I really suggest is more organization with your flowers and trees 
ethre
komakoma
I just looked at your town and the first thing I noticed was your paths. They're super cute and fit your town! I like the welcome thing you have in front of your train station. Your villagers are adorable, and you have a lot of nice hybrid flowers. The only thing I really suggest is more organization with your flowers and trees
So, what kind of public works projects should I aim for? Zen? Fairy-tail? I'll get to your feedback in the morning
Blondiexo
total trash
So, what kind of public works projects should I aim for? Zen? Fairy-tail? I'll get to your feedback in the morning
I think fairytale would be great with your layout right now!
& okay, thank you :3
marigoldilocks
I believe in coffee.
With those bricks, I'd absolutely do Fairy Tale themed items. The fairy tale exterior town hall and train station, as well as the change out the lights, bench, and bridges and add the cloc.. You've got the wisteria, windmill, and fountain that all fit, but if you could add the tulip topiary, statue fountain, illuminated heart, and flower arch, they would tie in perfectly. Great town!
I'm going to visit~ /if you visit my dream, forgive my flowers... I'm trying to work something out but I'm waiting for the best lineup of villagers before I get too creative.../
First things first! lovely bricks you have around your town tree. May I suggest you extend the back edge so the whole plaza is covered? I understand if you're leaving it this way because of bell rocks, though. ^^ but once you don't need the extra bells, I would definitely finish covering the whole area! Also, some of the areas with sharp corners (paths) don't have the corresponding corner borders... I'd put borders on, if you can find them.
I think a fairy tale theme will suit your town! The bricks are pastel and beautiful, so I'd definitely look into it~
Reorganizing trees and flowers will definitely be helpful!
If you want to use a zen theme, you could try restricting it to one corner of your town! Use some bamboo to emphasize it!
I think for some more cohesiveness, you should reorganize your PWPs~
Overall, I think it's a great start!
First things first! lovely bricks you have around your town tree. May I suggest you extend the back edge so the whole plaza is covered? I understand if you're leaving it this way because of bell rocks, though. ^^ but once you don't need the extra bells, I would definitely finish covering the whole area! Also, some of the areas with sharp corners (paths) don't have the corresponding corner borders... I'd put borders on, if you can find them.
I think a fairy tale theme will suit your town! The bricks are pastel and beautiful, so I'd definitely look into it~
Reorganizing trees and flowers will definitely be helpful!
If you want to use a zen theme, you could try restricting it to one corner of your town! Use some bamboo to emphasize it!
I think for some more cohesiveness, you should reorganize your PWPs~
Overall, I think it's a great start!
ethre
komakoma
I just looked at your town and the first thing I noticed was your paths. They're super cute and fit your town! I like the welcome thing you have in front of your train station. Your villagers are adorable, and you have a lot of nice hybrid flowers. The only thing I really suggest is more organization with your flowers and trees
Your town is really cute.
I really like the paths! c: But it seems your town is empty in some spots. Maybe you could fill those with public works projects (I suggest zen pwps since that's the vibe your paths are giving off) Are you, perhaps trying to line your paths with flowers? If so, you should probably line it up with a certain type of flower and keep repeating it. Sure, variety IS good, like putting roses along the path in this side of the town and tulips in the other - but it looks sophisticated if you only do one type. :3 Your fence for your Jacob's ladders garden? Sure, it's effective, but it clashes with the look of your town.
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woah, your town's pretty nice. I really like the paths
Your town is reaally cute
Sorry, I couldn't find anything wrong with it xc
