Dream My Town!

[Moonstone-June]

Hi! I thought it would be fun to get people to dream my tow and write a but about it!

Kellan of Willow's DC: 7700-4188-9212

 

[MightyMunchlax]

Your town isn't very developed I see. You don't have any paths or anything going on. Flowers are kind of skewed around. They're concentrated in some areas, but for the most part pretty random. I'd say keep on working. I don't know if you want to mess with paths or anything, but if you're looking for a review a lot of people will expect good landscaping.

 

[Saylor]

I love your layout, especially cause you have a front-facing waterfall! I don't know if your town is still a work in progress but I think it looks really nice although a bit undeveloped. The beach looks awesome and I love the flowers surrounding some villagers houses. The trees to the left of your town, above the beach, look good too. I think more trees throughout the town and less flowers scattered everywhere would make it look better, but overall I really like your town.

 

[nekosync]

Spoiler: I wrote a short story about your town~

I referred to Goldie as a human in this.

Spoiler: story

Breaking through layers of consciousness, I find myself somewhere foreign, yet strangely homely.

"What is this place?"

This place looks nothing like my hometown; I must be so far from home. I think this is a dream, but I can't be too sure. Everything feels too real: the rain pounding on my face, the chilled surface of cobblestone on my toes, the intense slashes of lightning...

I slowly begin to walk. While I'm here, I might as well explore.

Eventually, I end up at a blindingly bright field of flowers: roses, pansies, and more. The smell, painfully strong, makes me cringe and wrinkle my nose. "Urgh..."

I decide to turn away from the foliage, and reach a small home. "Wonder if anybody's here...?" I mumble, before pushing open the door.

A tiny girl sits on a white sofa, a broad cup firmly within her palms. Her skin face is painted with tan freckles, her wide eyes are a deep brown. A mass of bronze curls sits on her shoulders.

"Oh, hello," She smiles. "if you'd like, I'll whip you up a warm drink, since you must be freezing."
"Oh, um..."

Isn't it a little rude of me to take drinks from strangers? On the other hand, would that even matter in a dream? I'm not sure what to say to her.

"I'll get you a nice steaming cup of hot cocoa."
She grins, shuffles to the door behind her and pushes it open with her foot. People in this dream are friendly, that's for sure. I lean against a wall, clicking my tongue rhythmically in boredom.
"How many sugars?" She calls. "How about four?"
"Sure, that sounds good." I reply.

She returns, and hands me a huge cup. A mountain of whipped cream supports miniature marshmallows, and it almost grazes my nose as I take the cup from her. "Wow, thanks...!"

"Take a sip."

I do as she says, and my vision begins to fail me. Everything becomes swirls and shapes, spinning faster, and faster...

I'm somewhere different, now. My face is buried in something... oh! My pillow! I'm back home? Sigh. Just when I was getting to the best part of my dream...

 

[Moonstone-June]

Your town isn't very developed I see. You don't have any paths or anything going on. Flowers are kind of skewed around. They're concentrated in some areas, but for the most part pretty random. I'd say keep on working. I don't know if you want to mess with paths or anything, but if you're looking for a review a lot of people will expect good landscaping.

Yes, its still a work in progress, my paths are going to be on a character that I made today, who cant use the qr machine yet.

The flowers, im not sure if they were random or not when I recorded the dream, but right now I only have the villagers gardens, and a few patches where im breeding to fill the gardens.

Yah, I know people might, but I like to see what people think of my town, and if they dont like dreaming towns I dont expect them to ^_^ .

- - - Post Merge - - -

I love your layout, especially cause you have a front-facing waterfall! I don't know if your town is still a work in progress but I think it looks really nice although a bit undeveloped. The beach looks awesome and I love the flowers surrounding some villagers houses. The trees to the left of your town, above the beach, look good too. I think more trees throughout the town and less flowers scattered everywhere would make it look better, but overall I really like your town.

Thanks! Yeah, I love waterfalls <3 Thanks about the flowers, although im currently trying to get rid of the ones on the beach. Like I said above the flowers will only be there as long as they dont breed.

Thanks a lot though!

- - - Post Merge - - -

Spoiler: I wrote a short story about your town~

I referred to Goldie as a human in this.

Spoiler: story

Breaking through layers of consciousness, I find myself somewhere foreign, yet strangely homely.

"What is this place?"

This place looks nothing like my hometown; I must be so far from home. I think this is a dream, but I can't be too sure. Everything feels too real: the rain pounding on my face, the chilled surface of cobblestone on my toes, the intense slashes of lightning...

I slowly begin to walk. While I'm here, I might as well explore.

Eventually, I end up at a blindingly bright field of flowers: roses, pansies, and more. The smell, painfully strong, makes me cringe and wrinkle my nose. "Urgh..."

I decide to turn away from the foliage, and reach a small home. "Wonder if anybody's here...?" I mumble, before pushing open the door.

A tiny girl sits on a white sofa, a broad cup firmly within her palms. Her skin face is painted with tan freckles, her wide eyes are a deep brown. A mass of bronze curls sits on her shoulders.

"Oh, hello," She smiles. "if you'd like, I'll whip you up a warm drink, since you must be freezing."
"Oh, um..."

Isn't it a little rude of me to take drinks from strangers? On the other hand, would that even matter in a dream? I'm not sure what to say to her.

"I'll get you a nice steaming cup of hot cocoa."
She grins, shuffles to the door behind her and pushes it open with her foot. People in this dream are friendly, that's for sure. I lean against a wall, clicking my tongue rhythmically in boredom.
"How many sugars?" She calls. "How about four?"
"Sure, that sounds good." I reply.

She returns, and hands me a huge cup. A mountain of whipped cream supports miniature marshmallows, and it almost grazes my nose as I take the cup from her. "Wow, thanks...!"

"Take a sip."

I do as she says, and my vision begins to fail me. Everything becomes swirls and shapes, spinning faster, and faster...

I'm somewhere different, now. My face is buried in something... oh! My pillow! I'm back home? Sigh. Just when I was getting to the best part of my dream...

Aha, this is pretty great! Thanks for your creative story, love it!