Dark Veil 2

[Jawile]

(Okay, thanks. c: )

I notice a girl racing out of the supermarket. She runs into a bulletin board, and she takes a flyer.
"Hm." I decide to see what it was. It was nothing out of the ordinary, but there was a website written on it. Intrigued, I decided to take one. "Probably nothing." I thought aloud. I walked home.

 

[Goth]

(changed it)

 

[Beary]

I slowly come to, with a name on my tongue. Cindra. Is that my name?
Who am I?
I pick myself up off of the bricks on the sidewalk, and rub my eyes. Where am I?
I see a boy looking at a billboard, and walk up to him shyly. "Um..do you know where this place is?"

 

[Jawile]

"Yeah, this is a supermarket." I say, laughing quietly. "No, but you're in _____."

(Wasn't sure where the city/country/state we are in is called, so if you tell me what it's called I'll edit that blank.)

 

[Goth]

I got to the supermarket because I heard the posters are there I see a crowd of people I try to get passed them but then someone bumps into me then I bump into this girl I immediately apologize and tell her how someone bumped into me and I bumped into her as a mistake she shows me the poster its about a protest.

 

[Beary]

I stand there, puzzled. "I think I've lost my memory..I don't know who I am.." I say quietly to the boy.

- - - Post Merge - - -

I got to the supermarket because I heard the posters are there I see a crowd of people I try to get passed them but then someone bumps into me then I bump into this girl I immediately apologize and tell her how someone bumped into me and I bumped into her as a mistake she shows me the poster its about a protest.

( Please not the run on sentence ,_, )

 

[Lithia]

Sitting in my cramped home is kind of.. Bleh, but I deal with it anyway. Searching up the link, I find that this has a group organizations mark. was there another group? disappointed, I closed the browser, hoping for new information to be uploaded than just bare information. I walk back to the supermarket, hoping to find my cell phone that I dropped.

 

[Jawile]

"Oh, that's not good..." I murmur. "Do you remember where you live? I'm going home right now, if you'd like to tag along."

 

[Beary]

"Um..I can't remember anything really." I say shyly. "But I don't want to intrude, it's fine."

 

[Lithia]

Casually walking past the hoards of people, I noticed something.. Cindra?! She's alive?! I rush over and hugged her. "CINDRA!! How.. How are you here, alive? I mean, it's you, right?"

 

[Goth]

As I walk out of the supermarket something catches my eye a phone I go to the lost and found and return it there before I head home.

 

[Beary]

Suddenly, a random girl walks up to me and hugs me. I push her away, and step back. "Who are you?"

 

[Goth]

I get on my computer and look for the website it came up.

 

[Jawile]

I step out of the way of someone who rushed to hug 'Cindra.' I laugh quietly again.

 

[Lithia]

I look at Cindra weirdly. "You.. Don't remember me?" I said, backing up a little.

 

[Beary]

I look back at her. "No...should I?" I say quietly.

 

[Goth]

I found myself forgetting something at the store as I go back I see three people near the bulletin board I approach them cautiously.

 

[Beary]

I found myself forgetting something at the store as I go back I see three people near the bulletin board I approach them cautiously.

( Can you please not do run on sentences? )

 

[Jawile]

I see someone approaching us.
"Hi." I say, smiling.

 

[Goth]

(if I try there will either be more or less comas then needed and it's not like you can not read that sentence all at once but I will try if it matters that much.)