Critique My Town

[Axeler137]

So, over the last few weeks, I've been working on getting my town to look great, beautiful and something I would enjoy walking around everyday. I've been to many great town with wonderful layouts, and it just inspires me to do something like that but unique to my personality and my town.

And, this is where you guys come in. I want you to go to my Dream Town, code is below. And do an honest critique of my town. Do you like it? Not like it? Hate something about it? Or is it just okay? I really love feedback and hope that you guys can give me some great feedback.

I will warn you that my town is still in construction with a lot of unfinished projects, I tend to be quite focused and scatterbrained at the same time. So please let me know below. Plus, maybe someone will get a spark of genius and do something wonderful in their town. You never know!

Dream Code: 5400-2380-3615

PS. Comment with your Dream Code and I will do my best to look at yours and critique you as well!

EDIT: I will be updating probably today sometime! I'll keep you guys posted!

 

[Sun]

looking at yours now, my Dream Code is in my sig, I'd appreciate feedback as well. I'll edit this post later with feedback

 

[hijessicarose]

I'll be visiting soon

 

[radical6]

ah ill check it out right away!! my town is very sloppy and lazy but ill put my dream code in later
cant wait uwu

 

[TeddysMama711]

Just want to start off saying I think your town is great! Here is a few things I wanna note though-

-The first thing I noticed upon entering the town was how the path stood out from the grass. [If it were me], I would go with a stone/brick kind of path instead because imo, the ones with grass looks a little strange against the contrast of the real grass.

-The fountain with the flowers around it is awesome looking!

-The one path that transitions from all yellow flowers to all red flowers to all blue is a really good idea

-Love the picnic basket!

-Orchard looks really good too

-I absolutely love all the flowers behind retail!

Overall I think its great. The only thing I would add would be maybe some more pwps.

If you'd like to look at mine, the code is in my sig.

 

[hijessicarose]

I absolutely love the blue and purple roses, and your house exterior looks beautiful. The interior is pretty good as well.
As far as paths, I think they are nicely placed. I don't care for the grass paths as they stand out too much for my taste.
More PWPs would be nice to see but I'd give it about a 7/10. Not bad!

 

[Axeler137]

looking at yours now, my Dream Code is in my sig, I'd appreciate feedback as well. I'll edit this post later with feedback

So I just looked at your town! It think it's marvelous. The patterns look great! You have a ton of flowers and trees, which is something I always enjoy. I see that you have just a ton of stuff on the beach which I'm sure its for your town. I really like putting the roses around the house that match the color! The only thing I could really critique is the change in patterns on the ground. They kinda confused me from pattern to pattern, but that might just be me. Great town! I might just come back to check up on progress!

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Just want to start off saying I think your town is great! Here is a few things I wanna note though-

-The first thing I noticed upon entering the town was how the path stood out from the grass. [If it were me], I would go with a stone/brick kind of path instead because imo, the ones with grass looks a little strange against the contrast of the real grass.

-The fountain with the flowers around it is awesome looking!

-The one path that transitions from all yellow flowers to all red flowers to all blue is a really good idea

-Love the picnic basket!

-Orchard looks really good too

-I absolutely love all the flowers behind retail!

Overall I think its great. The only thing I would add would be maybe some more pwps.

If you'd like to look at mine, the code is in my sig.

Oh wow! Thanks a lot I will definitely check out yours. as long as villagers request more PWPs, They will definitely go up!

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I absolutely love the blue and purple roses, and your house exterior looks beautiful. The interior is pretty good as well.
As far as paths, I think they are nicely placed. I don't care for the grass paths as they stand out too much for my taste.
More PWPs would be nice to see but I'd give it about a 7/10. Not bad!

See I used the grass paths because putting the stone paths right next to the picnic/windmill, it looked too crowded and I didn't like the feel of it! And, a 7/10 is not bad. I can deal with a passing C Thanks a bunch!

 

[Cardboardo]

Sorry, but I don't really like it. The path pattern you chose sticks out like a sore thumb, and the PwPs don't fit very well. Why is a stadium light facing the beach?
Your house is okay, but you seem to stick to one set too much.

Excuse me if I come off as rude, but I'm just giving my honest opinion.

 

[Axeler137]

Sorry, but I don't really like it. The path pattern you chose sticks out like a sore thumb, and the PwPs don't fit very well. Why is a stadium light facing the beach?
Your house is okay, but you seem to stick to one set too much.

Excuse me if I come off as rude, but I'm just giving my honest opinion.

I completely understand! Hah. I don't mind it at all. Thanks for your opinion.
I might just have to move the stage light somewhere else! Just don't know where...

 

[Corduroy]

i'm about to leave to go to dinner, but when i get back i will visit~

 

[Touko]

I'll go check your town now <
My dream code is in my sig so I would appreciate it if you could visit as well. But it's a W.I.P so my bottom half is still working on it xD

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Okay,

I like your town, it's very creative with the tree stumps, paths and layout.
I prefer the bottom half of your town because the top half has random mixes of flowers (I like organized flowers either in the same color/flower group or in a pattern)
The bushes around the concrete of the tree and train station - nice ~

Overall, I like the town and it's very interesting with what you did ^_^

 

[Axeler137]

I'll go check your town now <
My dream code is in my sig so I would appreciate it if you could visit as well. But it's a W.I.P so my bottom half is still working on it xD

So I'm in your Dream Town now. I absolutely love it!
The patterns on the ground are great! It must've taken a while to put them all on the ground.
I cannot wait for the autumn season, ha. The gifts are great!
I even got to meet Shep. One day he will be in my town :3
Love the inside and outside of the house. Even the Ice furniture set and game room.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed your town and can't wait for you to finish it!

 

[Touko]

So I'm in your Dream Town now. I absolutely love it!
The patterns on the ground are great! It must've taken a while to put them all on the ground.
I cannot wait for the autumn season, ha. The gifts are great!
I even got to meet Shep. One day he will be in my town :3
Love the inside and outside of the house. Even the Ice furniture set and game room.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed your town and can't wait for you to finish it!

Thanks! I can't wait to see yours fully finished so I can visit again!
I love visiting dream towns xD

 

[Axeler137]

Thanks! I can't wait to see yours fully finished so I can visit again!
I love visiting dream towns xD

Honestly, when I decided to work on my town, I just went with what I had already done and went from there. If you didn't already see that. Ha.
And, don't worry about the flowers! They will be fixed in time. Just had to have a place to organize them. Thanks for the input!

 

[Gingersnap]

I'll check it out after I eat dinner as well! Sadly my town is nowhere near being done, so visiting would be useless haha.

 

[Corduroy]

i am visiting now!
when i finish, i will post my review and my dream code so you can critique mine as well

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here are just a few notes and things that i noticed of your town! this is just my opinion, so.. ^_^

- i think the flowers should be more balanced in the top half of the town. i absalutely love how you arranged the flowers by color in the bottom half, and your town would be even more fantastic just by organizing the flowers more by species and color. also, some areas in the top half have no flowers, where others have an ocean of colorful flowers! it would be better if the flower arrangements were more evenly placed.

- the stone/grass path you have is fantastic! it looks great. however, i think you should add another really colorful and bright pattern because there is so much green from the path, grass, bushes, and trees that you need some contrast. i suggest making the new pattern pink or another "warm" color. this will also help make the pattern grass and the actual grass blend better if the new paths are placed properly! :3

- blue roses = AMAZING

- i think you need some more eye catching PWPs, atleast in the top half of your town.

- in addition to the above bullet-point, i suggest adding more decoration around the plaza. but it's already off to a great start!

- i think your 3 bridges should be of the same style. this is all about personal preference though, so it's nothing major. i like everything matchy-matchy, so it may just be me. ^_^

i hope you appreciate my constructive criticism! your town looks really great. ^_^

my dream code: 4800 - 2319 - 2879

 

[MadisonCrossing]

Ooh, I'll be sure to visit when I get the chance! I'm sure it's beautiful!^^
Oh, and by the way, my town isn't developed yet, so there's no use at looking at mine...I want to get it a little bit more improved before I allow visitors, so I hope you understand!
I'm not sure about getting a Dream Code, though. I have to set something up in Settings to get one, so I have to work that out first. :/ I'll have to let my parents know...I'm 12, so I still have to get lots of help from them! Especially when it comes to my 3DS, which is important...I don't want to mess up, right?

 

[Axeler137]

i am visiting now!
when i finish, i will post my review and my dream code so you can critique mine as well

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here are just a few notes and things that i noticed of your town! this is just my opinion, so.. ^_^

- i think the flowers should be more balanced in the top half of the town. i absalutely love how you arranged the flowers by color in the bottom half, and your town would be even more fantastic just by organizing the flowers more by species and color. also, some areas in the top half have no flowers, where others have an ocean of colorful flowers! it would be better if the flower arrangements were more evenly placed.

- the stone/grass path you have is fantastic! it looks great. however, i think you should add another really colorful and bright pattern because there is so much green from the path, grass, bushes, and trees that you need some contrast. i suggest making the new pattern pink or another "warm" color. this will also help make the pattern grass and the actual grass blend better if the new paths are placed properly! :3

- blue roses = AMAZING

- i think you need some more eye catching PWPs, atleast in the top half of your town.

- in addition to the above bullet-point, i suggest adding more decoration around the plaza. but it's already off to a great start!

- i think your 3 bridges should be of the same style. this is all about personal preference though, so it's nothing major. i like everything matchy-matchy, so it may just be me. ^_^

i hope you appreciate my constructive criticism! your town looks really great. ^_^

my dream code: 4800 - 2319 - 2879

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! I will definitely take that to heart! More improvements to come.
As for your town, I am looking at it right now. These are just a few thoughts as I was in your town.
I really am loving all the different patterns on the floor, the variety is very nice. Even the beach is decorated!
The roses everywhere really make me happy. I love to see a lot of flowers around a town.
I'm sorta jealous that you have Aurora and a hammock. One day, I will have both!
I love seeing so many trees. Trees are great.
Overall, I really enjoy your town. The only thing I would say is don't go toooo crazy with the patterns.
I can't wait to see the finished product!

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Ooh, I'll be sure to visit when I get the chance! I'm sure it's beautiful!^^
Oh, and by the way, my town isn't developed yet, so there's no use at looking at mine...I want to get it a little bit more improved before I allow visitors, so I hope you understand!
I'm not sure about getting a Dream Code, though. I have to set something up in Settings to get one, so I have to work that out first. :/ I'll have to let my parents know...I'm 12, so I still have to get lots of help from them! Especially when it comes to my 3DS, which is important...I don't want to mess up, right?

Haha. No worries! When you ever do get the chance to finish some of your town, please let me know! Thanks for taking the time to looking at my town!

 

[Corduroy]

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! I will definitely take that to heart! More improvements to come.
As for your town, I am looking at it right now. These are just a few thoughts as I was in your town.
I really am loving all the different patterns on the floor, the variety is very nice. Even the beach is decorated!
The roses everywhere really make me happy. I love to see a lot of flowers around a town.
I'm sorta jealous that you have Aurora and a hammock. One day, I will have both!
I love seeing so many trees. Trees are great.
Overall, I really enjoy your town. The only thing I would say is don't go toooo crazy with the patterns.
I can't wait to see the finished product!

thank you for the sweet comments!
hehe, actually, i can't stand aurora. one day, she shall leeeeeeaaaaaaaaveeee. XD

i'm actually cutting down on the patterns as i speak! i haven't updated my dream town in about 3 days or so

 

[Axeler137]

thank you for the sweet comments!
hehe, actually, i can't stand aurora. one day, she shall leeeeeeaaaaaaaaveeee. XD

i'm actually cutting down on the patterns as i speak! i haven't updated my dream town in about 3 days or so

You should totally tell me when she is in boxes. I would love to have her in my town!