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It would be nice to get some critique about my dream town xD

DA is: 7500-4961-6091
 
would also love to get a critique <3 DA is in my signature :3
 
It would be nice to get some critique about my dream town xD

DA is: 7500-4961-6091

the town of UNDELLA
by marshmellowXO

notes:
rain :)
lots of trees
lots of flowers (hybrids too)
not many PWPs :(
cool villagers
no paths :(
only saw pear and cherry trees
cool house
saw some carnations ^-^
nice bamboo and pansies
bushes and PWPs in the SW region were nice :)
pretty big tree

What to change:
Definitely draw some paths
get some more fruits to spice up the town
a little more PWPs in the top region
you could possibly make paths out of your bushes or Hybrid
try to make some more hybrids
try to be a little more organized with your trees

It was a cute town, but nothing really stood out to me
Looks like you started playing a couple months ago?


4/10 (sorry)

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would also love to get a critique <3 DA is in my signature :3

i dont see a sig?
 
Feel free to review mine, DA is 4200-4401-7842. I have a bunch of things near the train station, so just ignore that. I haven't updated in awhile because I've been preparing another dream update, but I haven't been able to get to that recently >.<
 
Feel free to visit mine when you start back up. I haven't updated in a while, but I haven't changed a super whole lot landscaping-wise other than some trees and I redid the area with the sphinx, so if you hate that area I changed it! >< I'm not quite ready to update yet because I've been working on houses, but since you aren't going in houses I guess it wouldn't matter for you. I may update tomorrow, I'll think about it. XD DA: 5400-3515-8043
 
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Help yourself to Applewin and/or ACNLpics!

Dream Addresses, for both, are in my signature.
 
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