Can somebody visit my WIP (Work In Progress) town?
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hypnoticsoul
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I just visited your dream town. I can tell that it is a work in progress. Did you just start (or restart) your town? It doesn't look like there is a lot of landscaping or effort put into it yet. If you're going to start getting dreamies, soon, I'd suggest plot resetting them along the western side cliff, where'd it look pretty nice. I feel somewhat of a foresty feel coming from the many plentiful trees in your town, I might suggest adding special tree stumps and perhaps outdoor PWP's like the wood bench and topiaries?
Mayor Natsu's house...a candy mansion is what I'm getting from you. I can tell you're still working on the rooms. The main room is coming nicely along, the sweets series is perfect. I would suggest using different music, however, K.K Sonata sets a sad mood in your house, and I'm not quite sure if that's what you want for your house. More preferable music would be K.K Stroll. I used it in my alt's kitchen if you check out my DA. Your other rooms, you're probably going to expand them, so I won't be mentioning them.
Cute paths, by the way.
Overall, I can tell you're still working on it, or starting out on it, and you probably haven't gotten all the PWP's you wanted.
Loved the special orange sunset in your town, too
Mayor Natsu's house...a candy mansion is what I'm getting from you. I can tell you're still working on the rooms. The main room is coming nicely along, the sweets series is perfect. I would suggest using different music, however, K.K Sonata sets a sad mood in your house, and I'm not quite sure if that's what you want for your house. More preferable music would be K.K Stroll. I used it in my alt's kitchen if you check out my DA. Your other rooms, you're probably going to expand them, so I won't be mentioning them.
Cute paths, by the way.
Overall, I can tell you're still working on it, or starting out on it, and you probably haven't gotten all the PWP's you wanted.
Loved the special orange sunset in your town, too
Overall, your town seems a bit barren to me.
One thing that bothers me is the front of ReTail. The tiles aren't symmetrical - I'd put another line of tiles before starting the heart and checker tiles.
And with these tiles, (if you made them yourself) I'd make the spaces around the actual squares the same colour as the grass so it blends in and looks a bit cleaner. I like the placement of the clock, though. It'd look nice with some flowers around it.
I also like the time of day you updated the dream. The music and skies are really nice. The lineup of villagers are good, too.
The mushrooms dotted about the place are a nice touch, too.
I was going to comment on the homes, but Vizionari has already done a good job of that so far. Good luck on your town!
One thing that bothers me is the front of ReTail. The tiles aren't symmetrical - I'd put another line of tiles before starting the heart and checker tiles.
And with these tiles, (if you made them yourself) I'd make the spaces around the actual squares the same colour as the grass so it blends in and looks a bit cleaner. I like the placement of the clock, though. It'd look nice with some flowers around it.
I also like the time of day you updated the dream. The music and skies are really nice. The lineup of villagers are good, too.
The mushrooms dotted about the place are a nice touch, too.
I was going to comment on the homes, but Vizionari has already done a good job of that so far. Good luck on your town!
Thank you guys!
@Vizioarni: Oops. I could have sworn I had Aria in.
@nekosync: I didn't mean to actually dot mushrooms around. XD nor did I really mean to update it at the time. It just looked so beautiful! And I did'nt make them. They are in Japanese, so I don't even know what their names are. XD
@Vizioarni: Oops. I could have sworn I had Aria in.
@nekosync: I didn't mean to actually dot mushrooms around. XD nor did I really mean to update it at the time. It just looked so beautiful! And I did'nt make them. They are in Japanese, so I don't even know what their names are. XD
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Meh, still looks nice. :3
