Cabbage's Art! Please critique (Taking Requests)

[Mega_Cabbage]

I don't have any criticism to give, but I do have a lot of praise I could give you in it's place

Thanks! Good luck with your art too! You are definitely improving.

 

[Money Hunter]

Thanks! Good luck with your art too! You are definitely improving.

Tank you

p.s your avie is hot

 

[Katelyn]

Okay that little Absol doodle is the cutest thing ever. And that raccoon OMFG ;w;

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Okay that little Absol doodle is the cutest thing ever. And that raccoon OMFG ;w;

Yeah! Thanks! Raccoons are my favorite animals ever.

 

[pocketdatcrossing]

It's great but the noses look a bit weird...Something about your human faces is off.

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

It's great but the noses look a bit weird...Something about your human faces is off.

Yes, I completely agree. I'm just not sure what it is (besides the nose). Maybe it's the eyes that are sort of too stylized? I'll try looking at a reference next time I draw a nose (or face in general).

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Gemsona WIP
I'll eventually draw it out on my tablet, but for now, here is a quick pencil sketch. Not quite sure what hand position I want yet.



I also did a pixel of myself.

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Bump.

Just recently discovered the curve tool (actually the entire vector layer option of SAI)... Where have you been all my life? 0w0

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Gemsona

Name: Onyx
Personality: Shy, child-like (around 10-11 human years old), polite, secretly a genius, has a cauliflower phobia, stutters when angry
Weapon: Strings, more specifically puppetry. The control bar comes out of his gem on the right shoulder. Nearly invisible strings shoot out and can be used to control the movements of others or constrain them. Strings can be modified to be needle-like to pierce his enemies or manipulate shadows (shadow puppetry). His powers can also change other gems' forms through their shape shifting while they are under his control.
Likes: Pompoms, rides, using cotton candy as facial hair
Dislikes: Being used as an arm rest, People touching his stuff

I'll add a background eventually. It's probably going to have his control bar somewhere.

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Bump

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Bump

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Wow. It's amazing what one video tutorial can teach you. I'm doing one of my favorite voice actors/singers (not that I know many), Jesse McCartney!

 

[Astro0]

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Wow. It's amazing what one video tutorial can teach you. I'm doing one of my favorite voice actors/singers (not that I know many), Jesse McCartney!

Woaaah that looks so good!!! Going to look awesome when it's done ^_^

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Woaaah that looks so good!!! Going to look awesome when it's done ^_^

Thank you! I can't wait until I get to the hair. I wonder how that's going to work.

 

[inkling]

I love your doodles and I really like the last traditional piece with the dolphin...its just awesome haha

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ooo and your wip is very nice!! sry no critique lol there's no need really, just bc it seems like your exploring and you have talent so just keep going with what inspires you I guess. Maybe start using better paper?

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

I love your doodles and I really like the last traditional piece with the dolphin...its just awesome haha

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ooo and your wip is very nice!! sry no critique lol there's no need really, just bc it seems like your exploring and you have talent so just keep going with what inspires you I guess. Maybe start using better paper?

Thank you! What paper would you suggest? I'm not very experienced in what type of paper is best for whichever media.

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Who's that pokemon?

It's wooper!

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Bump

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Did a Lobo sketch!


Anyone have any requests on what to do next?

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

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