Art Opinions?

[cherriielle]

Hi!

I've been drawing for about a year now,
and would like some constructive criticism on some of my art.
I do traditional and digital. (I have a drawing tablet, and mainly use Paint Tool Sai.)​

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Thank you!​

 

[samsquared]

It's pretty dang good.
Work on joints and movement. Like, in some panels, hair would not naturally fall that way, and people would not hold their arms out like that naturally nor would knees bend in that manner and be able to support someone, etc.
The colouring is really good (I'm so jealous), honestly, I don't have a lot of criticism for you. Your stuff is really good~
maybe i should get in on this paint tool sai thing

 

[cherriielle]

It's pretty dang good.
Work on joints and movement. Like, in some panels, hair would not naturally fall that way, and people would not hold their arms out like that naturally nor would knees bend in that manner and be able to support someone, etc.
The colouring is really good (I'm so jealous), honestly, I don't have a lot of criticism for you. Your stuff is really good~
maybe i should get in on this paint tool sai thing

Thanks you! I'll work on that!

(Also when you mentioned the knees thing, that girl is supposed to be
sitting down, but I can't draw chairs D: )

 

[Reenhard]

It dose looks really good, though I would tip you to make alittle darker shadows and some shades in some parts to get more deep in the characthers, if you put some shadows and shades in the eyes, they going to pop! Good luck with drawing darling!

 

[Hal]

Your avatar would be my favorite out of all of them. But you're pretty good, I can't wait to see where you go from here.

 

[cherriielle]

It dose looks really good, though I would tip you to make alittle darker shadows and some shades in some parts to get more deep in the characthers, if you put some shadows and shades in the eyes, they going to pop! Good luck with drawing darling!

Thanks for the tips!

Your avatar would be my favorite out of all of them. But you're pretty good, I can't wait to see where you go from here.

Thanks! You're so nice ^_^

 

[cherriielle]

Bump! ♥

 

[samsquared]

Thanks you! I'll work on that!

(Also when you mentioned the knees thing, that girl is supposed to be
sitting down, but I can't draw chairs D: )

Oh oddly enough I wasn't talking about that one. I was talking about the first one.
And you're very welcome~

 

[cherriielle]

Oh oddly enough I wasn't talking about that one. I was talking about the first one.

Oh, I see now lol xD

 

[Kammeh]

These are so freaking adorable, omg <3 I love the girl with the blue hair and the one in the pikachu hoodie :')
The only thing I see that needs improving are the arms, they just look a bit odd to me the way they're positioned at times
But other than that your drawings are so cute and amazing!!! I would commission you ;v;
Keep up the awesome work! <3333

 

[cherriielle]

These are so freaking adorable, omg <3 I love the girl with the blue hair and the one in the pikachu hoodie :')
The only thing I see that needs improving are the arms, they just look a bit odd to me the way they're positioned at times
But other than that your drawings are so cute and amazing!!! I would commission you ;v;
Keep up the awesome work! <3333

Thanks! I've seen some of your work and I love it too!!

 

[cherriielle]

Bump!♥

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Aww..They're so cute! The one in the green polka dot sweater is my favorite. I would work on the line art for some of them unless you are going for the sketchy style. Some of the points are sticking out.

 

[cherriielle]

Aww..They're so cute! The one in the green polka dot sweater is my favorite. I would work on the line art for some of them unless you are going for the sketchy style. Some of the points are sticking out.

Some of them are supposed to be sketchy, but thanks!

 

[cherriielle]

Just made! Thoughts?

 

[Mariah]

I think your drawings should be less anime.

 

[cherriielle]

I think your drawings should be less anime.

I like the anime style, so I will draw it in that style.

 

[Mariah]

I like the anime style, so I will draw it in that style.

I hope you're not planning on being taken seriously as an artist then.

 

[cherriielle]

I hope you're not planning on being taken seriously as an artist then.

Why would peole not take my serisously?

 

[puppy]

someone already mentioned it but definitely more shading definition
and do you use references? if so, what kind do you use?

i mean your style is really cute. and it looks nice. i feel like theres some more potential here, though