Animal Crossing: New Leaf story that I thought of (Warning: Long Post)

[Michelangelo]

Has anyone else had this idea of creating a story for your town, villagers, and mayor? In a way, my story kind of continues from the AC Movie, because I have Apollo, Whitney, Margie, and Rosie in my town. However, there's a twist to my story that involves all of my villagers. The mayor character is shocked to see that the animals are not people in costumes. They are real and they need a new mayor since Tortimer had to retire. The animals look up to the mayor and suggest ways to improve the town. The villagers are all unique and most of them are forest type animals, excluding Tia and Cube. I know I have cats, but who knows--they can get lost in the woods or something. Because of this, there is some prejudice of the forest animals vs. the non-forest animals. Whitney and Apollo are together, and since Whitney is the snobby gossip, she makes up rumors of Tia and Cube and how they are not like them. They don't even show up to the tree-planting ceremony in fear of being bullied. Skye moved in town to be with her older sister, Whitney, and they get along, but Skye feels that Whitney is too bossy and controlling of her. The mayor wonders why Tia and Cube didn't show up, and he learns their backstories. Tia had to move away from her village which was populated with other elephants because of food shortage. She and Margie were friends and Margie was living in that village whilst fashion designing and making new clothes. Tia had trouble making friends, but the mayor befriended her. He also met Cube, who was very shy and scared of Whitney. The mayor introduced him to Tia and they seemed to get along: their differences being the ice-breaker. Later, Skye runs into Tia at the store, and she learns that her older sister, Whitney, was wrong about her. They had so much in common, but Whitney told Skye to not hang out with Tia. They get into a fight and Skye decides to leave the village. The mayor soon stops her from leaving, and speaks to Whitney about the prejudice. Meanwhile, Punchy the cat has a crush on Rosie and goes to Chadder for dating advice. When he musters up courage to knock on her door, he is stopped by a smell of fresh baked cookies that Tia and Cube made. Punchy and Cube become best friends and discovers Whitney was yet again wrong about the non-forest animals. Shari thought Whitney was a bully and tried to not listen to her lies unlike the other village folk. She didn't care about reputation. Whitney didn't run the show here--the mayor did.

There's wayyy more to my story, but I don't want this too long. What do you guys think?

 

[Liquid Ocelot]

I have definitely thought about writing- uh- what do you call them...vignettes? Short stories about what happens during the day- to strengthen my writing muscles. Not that I need it with all these essays, but.

I'm sorry I don't have the focus / attention to critique all of this, but maybe you could look into The Museum board here- I've seen people post stories there before. You could get feedback!

 

[Michelangelo]

Thank you. And this isn't the whole story. It's pretty much an incomplete plot summary.

 

[goodra]

ooh i haven't seen many people make stories for their town. i like it! pretty creative

i don't think i could come up with a story for the whole town, i've thought of a few interactions between 2 or 3 villagers but that's it

 

[Liquid Ocelot]

Eh. It wouldn't hurt to post it somewhere else where there might be writers, anyway. Also, maybe break your summary into paragraphs? Unless you're typing on a phone, then pff I understand.

ooh i haven't seen many people make stories for their town. i like it! pretty creative

i don't think i could come up with a story for the whole town, i've thought of a few interactions between 2 or 3 villagers but that's it

Completely off topic, but you are like the tenth person I've seen today with a Pokemon themed username. I'm starting to think we all share the same addictions and need to start a recovery group.

 

[goodra]

Completely off topic, but you are like the tenth person I've seen today with a Pokemon themed username. I'm starting to think we all share the same addictions and need to start a recovery group.

omg i've only seen two people including you ?? we could make a recovery group OR a cool recovery gang (im shutting up now bc off topic)

but yes, this will probably get a lot more attention in the museum!

 

[Michelangelo]

Yeah I wasn't exactly sure where to post it in TBT, so I just put it here. I'm thinking I'll follow through with this and create this short story. Maybe an entry a day.