Animal Crossing: New Leaf story idea (Long Post)

[Michelangelo]

Has anyone else had this idea of creating a story for your town, villagers, and mayor? In a way, my story kind of continues from the AC Movie, because I have Apollo, Whitney, Margie, and Rosie in my town. However, there's a twist to my story that involves all of my villagers. The mayor character is shocked to see that the animals are not people in costumes. They are real and they need a new mayor since Tortimer had to retire. The animals look up to the mayor and suggest ways to improve the town. The villagers are all unique and most of them are forest type animals, excluding Tia and Cube. I know I have cats, but who knows--they can get lost in the woods or something. Because of this, there is some prejudice of the forest animals vs. the non-forest animals. Whitney and Apollo are together, and since Whitney is the snobby gossip, she makes up rumors of Tia and Cube and how they are not like them. They don't even show up to the tree-planting ceremony in fear of being bullied. Skye moved in town to be with her older sister, Whitney, and they get along, but Skye feels that Whitney is too bossy and controlling of her. The mayor wonders why Tia and Cube didn't show up, and he learns their backstories. Tia had to move away from her village which was populated with other elephants because of food shortage. She and Margie were friends and Margie was living in that village whilst fashion designing and making new clothes. Tia had trouble making friends, but the mayor befriended her. He also met Cube, who was very shy and scared of Whitney. The mayor introduced him to Tia and they seemed to get along: their differences being the ice-breaker. Later, Skye runs into Tia at the store, and she learns that her older sister, Whitney, was wrong about her. They had so much in common, but Whitney told Skye to not hang out with Tia. They get into a fight and Skye decides to leave the village. The mayor soon stops her from leaving, and speaks to Whitney about the prejudice. Meanwhile, Punchy the cat has a crush on Rosie and goes to Chadder for dating advice. When he musters up courage to knock on her door, he is stopped by a smell of fresh baked cookies that Tia and Cube made. Punchy and Cube become best friends and discovers Whitney was yet again wrong about the non-forest animals. Shari thought Whitney was a bully and tried to not listen to her lies unlike the other village folk. She didn't care about reputation. Whitney didn't run the show here--the mayor did.

There's wayyy more to my story, but I don't want this too long. What do you guys think?

 

[g u m m i]

It's pretty good, but like most stories, there's dat evil character. I love the plot line, and as a young writer myself, feel like you give your villagers more meaning. I'm intrested since you mentioned Chadder! LOL HE'S SO CUTE! XD Squishes hyena stuffy!!!

 

[Reenhard]

Sounds really nice, did something femailiar post http://www.belltreeforums.com/showthread.php?162393-Story-behind-your-Mayor&highlight=reenhard

 

[MayorCecilia]

I love your story so far and i would love to read the rest. I have also wanted to write a story about my town but I have no clue on how to start it since ive had villagers come and go But i hope to figure it out soon

 

[Michelangelo]

Thanks, everyone! Maybe I will go on with the story when I get time!

 

[leepotato]

Love your story.
I ALSO like to actually make my villagers come to life.. I draw them and gave them each a little bio and a story. (I just need to get them out of my head and actually write them lol)
Most of my mini stories have to do with pairs of my villagers haha. (Lopez x Diana/Fuchsia; Chrissy and Francine; MarshalxPeanut)
After thinking about nice little things my villagers are doing are just draw them, like Diana and Fuschia in an argument.
I adore my villagers and I put too much thought into them ;-;

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You know what you actually inspired me to upload my stories for once haha

 

[Murray]

honestly I don't really like this story idea - but please don't be discouraged from writing about this/your villagers. Maybe it was just the structure of what you posted but it seemed a bit like a big bowl of words that just goes in circles and never gets anywhere.