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Advice for my town - another visit my Dream Address thread

Sdj4148

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I'm at a point where I don't know where to go with my town. There's only one PWP I know I want and where to put it (if you do decide to visit, I wanted to put a picnic blanket in the empty are in front of Purrl's house). Other than that, I don't know what to do with my town. Can someone visit my DA and tell me what they like and don't like and what advice they have for me? My dream address is in my signature but here it is anyway: 4800-5613-1432
 
I'll visit when I'm done plot-resetting :)

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Which is now (Olaf chose a good spot on the 1st try lol)
 
I'm no Town building god or something but I can try to give you a few pointers :)

- Use paths with borders, it looks alot better! This one is similar to your current one and it fills out the inner-corner pieces automaticly!

- You should also try to use a bit less paths (this is prefrence though)

- Trees, use them! (more). A mixture of both normal trees and cedar trees will instantly make your town alot more beatiful!

- I only saw roses with specific colors, switch things up! A nice mixture of flowers and colors goes a long way!

- There is alot of empty spaces, fill them out!

- The same thing as with the trees. Use more bushes! you can also have them go along with paths instead of flowers to mix things up!

Nontheless I like your town! :)
 
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I'm no Town building god or something but I can try to give you a few pointers :)

- Use paths with borders, it looks alot better! This one is similar to your current one and it fills out the inner-corner pieces automaticly!

- You should also try to use a bit less paths (this is prefrence though)

- Trees, use them! (more). A mixture of m?both normal trees and cedar trees will instantly make your town alot more beatiful!

- I only saw roses with specific colors, switch things up! A nice mixture of flowers and colors goes a long way!

- There is alot of empty spaces, fill them out!

- The same thing as with the trees. Use more bushes! you can alsohave them go along with paths instead of flowers to mix things up!

Nontheless I like your town! :)

Ok thank you. I know where the borders are maybe I'll use them. With the too many paths thing, I see what you're saying especially in front of Retail, it looks a bit awkward because of the rock but I just kicked 3 squares out and it looks better. I only used the three rose colors because that's the theme and if I could, I would recolor the path I currently have to match it. But I'm thinking of adding clovers and trees to even it out and maybe it the process, full out my empty spaces. Thanks for the criticism!
 
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Feel free to visit my DA! My town is and therefore pretty boring, I have only done the Town hall area and even that is a bit messy (And my trainstation is so much wow)

DA: 7900-5802-9195
 
Feel free to visit my DA! My town is and therefore pretty boring, I have only done the Town hall area and even that is a bit messy (And my trainstation is so much wow)

DA: 7900-5802-9195
Will do! After I finish selling turnips in someone elses town
 
I'll give some advice!

I really like your flower pattern idea, with alternating from blue roses to white roses to gold roses! I really like that, and I hope you keep that going!

One thing that I think you could change is the area where you have the orchard? I like the idea, but it seems very empty. I think by the waterfall there would be a great place to put a PWP (especially one you can sit on). I'd also suggest putting more PWPs next to each other. I think a combination of PWPs looks very good. I notice a lot of your PWPs are by themselves, and I think they could be improved by placing another PWP next to them!

Also that area leading up to the orchard would be a good place to put a wisteria trellis or any arch PWP.

Is that rock to the left of the cafe permanent? If so I suggest not putting a path there at all and making the path to the right of the cafe instead!

For right now I think that's probably it. I really like the placement of your villager houses, also! Overall you have a good setup, and there really is a lot of space for PWPs!
 
I'll give some advice!

I really like your flower pattern idea, with alternating from blue roses to white roses to gold roses! I really like that, and I hope you keep that going!

One thing that I think you could change is the area where you have the orchard? I like the idea, but it seems very empty. I think by the waterfall there would be a great place to put a PWP (especially one you can sit on). I'd also suggest putting more PWPs next to each other. I think a combination of PWPs looks very good. I notice a lot of your PWPs are by themselves, and I think they could be improved by placing another PWP next to them!

Also that area leading up to the orchard would be a good place to put a wisteria trellis or any arch PWP.

Is that rock to the left of the cafe permanent? If so I suggest not putting a path there at all and making the path to the right of the cafe instead!

For right now I think that's probably it. I really like the placement of your villager houses, also! Overall you have a good setup, and there really is a lot of space for PWPs!
Thank you! And btw, when you were referring to the space by the waterfall, did you mean by Pietro's house or the other side in front of Purrl's? Because I'm going to put a picnic blanket in front of Purrl's house
 
Thank you! And btw, when you were referring to the space by the waterfall, did you mean by Pietro's house or the other side in front of Purrl's? Because I'm going to put a picnic blanket in front of Purrl's house

Oh I meant the waterfall by the orchard! All the different trees! You could make the orchard smaller and put a pwp in the corner by the waterfall!
 
bump! I'm going to update my town soon! What's going to be added: Bordered paths, more trees, more bamboo, and an illuminated heart! I still have a long way to go but I'm just a little bit closer! If you visit right now you won't see any of those things, I'm waiting until the illuminated heart lights up to update the dream. I could still use some criticism though
 
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