Adventure of a lifetime ~ a pokemon story

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This is a story I started because I was bored and I decided to post it incase you liked it. I'm not the best writer and this is just for fun but creative criticism is welcome, Without further ado here is chapter 1. (there will be some extra things at the bottom)


Chapter 1

I wake up to see sunlight stream through my windows "Uuh" I groan as I get up. I pass the mirror and examine myself. I have short chestnut brown hair and pale skin. I have brown eyes, wear glasses and have an athletic build. I put on my favourite clothes, a red tartan shirt with rolled up sleeves, blue jeans and red trainers. My first thought was "IT'S SATURDAY". Two days no collage was fine by me. Me and my best friend Kaden were roommates at our collage and it was a decent dorm too. I went to the living room in a great mood, unlike most, I was a morning person. I saw that Kaden wasn't there, typical. I make myself breakfast and watched the TV for a while before Kaden appeared at the door. He was surprisingly joyful considering he was not a morning person, "What are you so happy about" I asked curiously. He just stared at me before saying "How could you forget, Alex", I then realised that today was the Pok?mon tournament me and Kaden had been training for. "Oh the Pok?mon tournament" I replied sheepishly, me and Kaden had loved Pok?mon since forever and we were pretty good at it too. After grabbing our 3ds XL?s we switched on our games, we played a few matches before our games suddenly switched off with the message "See you soon". I was officially creped out but Kaden stayed calm, "let?s watch some TV" he suggested. We switched on the TV on and saw that Pok?mon was on so we switched to that. After a while my vision starts to blur, "what's going on" I yelled, "You see it to then" Kaden replied in panic. The last thing I saw was that message "See you soon?.


First of all thx for reading. second I have a second story called Unlikly love with I'm doing with my friend Snowsnap so plz check that out. Thirdly if you have a good title for this story plz tell me it because I'm not good with titles.

Lastly is you have a OC you'd like included in this story fill out the form bellow

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Chapter 2 is here already (I had it written and I'm impatient so why not)

Chapter 2 (It's longer)

I woke up to a blaring alarm right next to my ear "gahhhh" I yelled as I painfully hit the ground. I stood up rubbing my back and realised that this wasn't my dorm, panicking I rushed out the door and into an empty hallway before yelling "HELLO" my voice echoed through the seemingly empty halls. Out of the corner of my eyes I saw a door open to see an all too familiar face peered round. "Kaden" I yelled as I ran towards him, "Where are we" he asks confused. Before I can answer a small lady appeared around the corner she had grey eyes and black hair in long pigtails, she was wearing a dark red top and a long dress that was also dark red, she wore a lot of what looked like dinosaur teeth. She stared at us, her eyes open in surprise before mumbling something and slowly making a way towards us, I couldn't shake away the feeling I'd seen her before, but that was impossible, right. She stopped before us and said "So the prophecy is true" I was now utterly confused, who was this woman? "My apologies, my name is Drasna and I believe that you are the ones from the prophecy, to defeat the evil in Kalos" She said, "we're in KALOS!?!?" Kaden yelled, "Indeed, you are in the Pok?mon world and you are the ones from another universe, you will save us all" Drasna stated "but first take these". She hands Kaden a strange stone that changes colour, blue, red, green then light blue, "That is an elemental stone, they was recently discovered by some archaeologists in an old mine, they only found 7 and 1 was given to each elite four member" she explains "It can be used to change the type of a Pok?mon, the blue means water type, the red means fire type, the green means grass type and light blues means flying type". She then give's a thunder stone to him as well as 3 potions, 3 pokeballs and a pokedex. She comes up to me and gives me a stone that glows brightly "This is an all evolution stone, found at the same time as the elemental stone it lets you evolve a Pok?mon any time no matter how you usually evolve it but it's a one use item". She then gives me 3 potions 3 pokeballs and a pokedex. "What do we do with this stuff when we don't even have Pok?mon"? Kaden asks, Drasna starts walking away before saying "But you do" and disappearing.
 
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Name:Logan
Age:15
Appearance:Short ginger hair, fingerless gloves, blue eyes, green shirt and orange shorts
Personality: Energetic
Pokemon: Charizard and Delphox
Extra info:
 
Firstly thank to Propig for the OC Logan. secondly I would like to say that in this story I plan to make there be 10 gyms in every region and for us not to face the elite 4 and champion, so is you want your character to be a gym leader that's fine.

Lastly here are the factfiles for Alex and Kaden

Name:Alex Dorum
Age:16
Appearance:Read chapter 1 to see
Personality:Smart, logical yet Zany
Starter:Klefki
Extra info:None

Name:Kaden Worthington
Age:16
Appearance:He has Spicked up blond hair and blue eyes, he wears a white hoodie, brown shorts and brown boots.
Personality:Smart yet Naive, Daring
Starter:Pikachu
Extra info:None
 
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Name: Minato Arisato
Age: 16
Appearance: He's my pic ^.^
Personality: He's quiet. rarely he will talk. He has a up session with food and a Persona/Pokemon User (that sounds weird)
Starter: Oshawott.
Extra info: Has a sister:Minako Arisato,His mom and dad died in a car accident. (THIS IS REAL GUYS.),etc...
 
Thx ApolloJusticeAC for your character, But I must ask if Oshawott is his only pokemon or does he have more? Also he will appear chapter 4
 
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Plz enjoy

Chapter 3

I put my hand in my pocket and fell a ball shape in it, I pull it out and find that in my hand was a pokeball "Whoa" Kaden yells in surprise, then he too pulls out a pokeball. "What Pok?mon do you think we have?" he asks me, "I don't know but let's find out" I reply. Copying what I'd seen in the anime I pressed the button on the front and the ball expanded "Come out, whoever you are" I yell throwing the pokeball, the iconic red energy appears and it reveals a Klefki "Score" I yell catching Kaden of guard "Sorry" I sheepishly reply. I pull out my new pokedex and the robotic voice says "Klefki, the key ring Pok?mon, these key collectors never lets go of a key that it likes, so people give it the keys to vaults and safes as a way to prevent crime." "Hmmm" I mutter and tap a feature that says moves "Klefki's known moves are Phychic, fairy wind and protect" the robotic voice states. "Good Pok?mon" Kaden comments "Thanks" I reply "So what's your Pok?mon?" he presses the button on the pokeball and then throws it to reveale none other than Pikachu "Awesome" he yells as he run towards it. Suddenly Pikachu jumps onto the thunder stone in Kadens hand and glows brightly, by the time the light had dimmed he was holding a Raichu "Even better" he exclaims. A loud bell suddenly echoes through the large halls and hundreds of people around our age streamed through the once empty halls, pushing and shoving us around till the halls were empty again. Suddenly a tall man came and simply said "follow me" I just looked at Kaden, shrugged and followed him.

Thx for reading :)
 
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here is the next chapter, enjoy. (for the record it is now monday)

Chapter 4

The tall man led us to an office and told us to go in before leaving us, I walked in followed by Kaden and we found our self face to face with professor sycamore and next to him was Drasna. He then spoke into a microphone on his desk saying "Minato Arisato, please report to the headmasters office at once" He then looked up at us and said "So your supposed to be the ones that save Kalos, what are your names?" "I'm Kaden and this is Alex" he said pointing at me "Well then, I guess you'll need to stay here and train for a while, since you're not from here" he said "So welcome to Kalos' best collage for Pok?mon". Just then there was a knock at the door and a boy that looked our age came in "you called professor" he said. He had dark blue hair, grey eyes and pale skin, he was wearing what I'm guessing is the uniform, it was a white polo shirt with a black blazer on top, black trousers, black shoes and a black tie. "Kaden, Alex, this is Minato" he said "he will be showing you around the building" The professor got up and told Minato something before he sat down again. "Please follow me" Minato said, then walked out. The first place we went to was a room identical to the one I woke up to "This will be your dorm, you'll be sharing it with me and a girl called Vita" he said "On the beds there are uniforms for you, you'll wear them every day of classes but today's an exception". the next few places where our classes, we had Pok?mon history which I loved but Kaden hated, then we had battle lessons which we both loved, plus we got to see Minatos epic Oshawott in action, next was P.E Which I hated and Kaden loved. It was then lunch and by then I' was sure I'd got Minatos personality down, he was a strong yet silent type and didn't talk much, he also had a great love of food and knew lots about it. "I wonder is our parents and friends are worried that were gone or is time like stands still?" Kaden asks "What about you Minato, do you talk to your parents much?" He looks down before answering "My parents died when I was 5" "I'm so sorry" I said "It's ok" he said. the rest of the day way just classes, by the time we all got to our dorm we immediately fell asleep.

Thx again to ApolloJusticeAC for his character Minato, I hope I got everything right :)
 
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Dude Minato is epic in this story! Also here's he's other pokemons :P Oshawott,Raichu,Breloom,Lucario. :)

- - - Post Merge - - -

Also can I make a other character I'm gonna name him Roy :)
 
Name: Mercedes
Age: 13:
Appearance:
hair: image.jpg
Body shape: pear image.jpg
Dress: image.jpg
Shoes: image.jpg
Bag {for pokeballs and such}: image.jpg
Personality: easy and outgoing, hyper active, and can be as noob at times, also a very bad sport.
Pokemon: Fennekin F, squrtile F, Treecko M, purloin M, and Dodrio M.
Extra info: Dipper {Purlion male} Can talk. Also, Dipper rides on Mercedes shoulder at all times, and Cedes {Squrtile Female} never goes in her pokeballs, so walks behind or with Mercedes, and on long walks they all ride on legs {Dodrio Male}, and yes Cedes rides in front then Mercedes gets on while Dipper rides on Mercedes shoulders.
Nick names: Fennekin: Foxy, Squrtile: Cedes, Treecko: Carmon, Purloin: Dipper, Dodrio: Legs.
 
Name:Roy Suiki
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Appearance: image.jpg
Personality: Nice,Kind,Can be mad at times,Loves Pokemon.
Pokemon: Skitty,Delcatty,Purugly
 
And the next chapter is here

Chapter 5

I wake up and see that Minato was talking to someone I'd never seen before, she had blond hair in a ponytail, blue eyes and fair skin. She wore the school uniform except she wore a black cardigan instead of a blazer and a black skirt instead of trousers. "Who's that" I ask Minato "This is Vita, our roommate, you didn't see her yesterday because you fell asleep so quickly" he replied. The rest of the week went by pretty quickly and before long it was the weekend and Vita had arranged a day out with her best friend Mercedes and invited me Kaden and Minato along, which me and Kaden accepted but Minato said he needed to study. We all met at the entrance and took a bus which Vita paid for, when we sat down I asked "Where are we even going?" to which Vita replied "We are going to the fun fair". When we got there Vita rushed towards a girl that looked about 13 and hugged her saying something before signalling us over, "This is Mercedes" she says pointing at the girl next to her. Mercedes had rainbow hair which really stood out, she had brown eyes and pale skin. She wore a purple dress that was frilly at the bottom and wore high heels that were covered in white sequins and she had a rucksack also covered in white sequins. she had a Squirtle on her right shoulder and a Purlion on her left shoulder, "Hi, my name is Mercedes as you know, this is Dipper she said pointing to the Purlion and this is Cedes she said pointing to the Squirtle" "happy to meet you" Dipper said, WAIT WHAT, "Your purlion can talk" I yell "Yup" she replies "I trained him to". "Wow well, Hi my name is Alex, and this is Klefki" I say pointing to Klefki, "And I'm Kaden and this is Raichu". After we all got to know each other better we went on some of the attractions. At the end of the day there was a race which Mercedes entered with her Dodrio, Legs. As the race started Mercedes was in fourth but as the end drew closer she picked up speed and ended up in first, the winning prise was a shiny trophy. We said our good byes before we left and got back to the dorm, and I had something planned for tomorrow.

I wonder what Alex is going to do tomorrow, well you'll have to wait to see

Also thx to Luckypinch for her character, Mercedes, hope I got her right :)
 
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Name: Vanessa
Age: 17
Appearance: dark purple dungarees with a light green top underneath and blonde tied back hair
Personality: Cheerful
Pokemon: Vulpix, Bellossom, Houndoom
 
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