A new start

JobySheepie

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I felt like writing this =D It's basically about me moving into my town and meeting new people, etc. Most of it is fantasy, obviously =P Animals are human-anthro's in this story (humans with animal features.

Chapter 1
It's really a bit step for me, moving to this new town. No one knows anything about it, it's far and kept secret amongst the people.. But I remember that I used to live there as young child, so very long ago, and I've never been able to chase those memories out.
The town is called Strust, and I just moved here. Funded mostly by my parents. But even then, it turns out that I still have a loan to pay off; why don't people tell me these things earlier?
 
i think you write very well. there's room for improvement of course, but you've got the initial idea of how to write, and it's really nice. <3
 
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