10 TBT per visit to my dream town...

[kid kat79]

I really want some feedback on my town...to see what changes i can make to make it better. I was looking into having some old looking cabin/western town look...I will trade 10 TBT for a review of my town to the first 5 people that visit my town via dream address....please visit and write a review...i will pay your tbt soon right after i read it...thanks


Town name: Aerobay
Name: Raptor

 

[kid kat79]

This thread has been reopened...thanks....oh and if you are going to review, please reserve a spot. so no more than five people have to do it..

 

[kid kat79]

bump

 

[kid kat79]

still taking reviews..

 

[kid kat79]

10 tbt for the first 5 reviews..thanks

 

[mayor-of-ivyvale]

I'll gladly visit your dream town! Let me go to the dream suite and I'll edit when I'm there.

- first of all I love the team rocket theme on Harley! She showed up right as I spawned.
- Oh, your other alt has the second half of the team rocket catchphrase. That made me smile
- very nice paths!
- Love the symmetry in the upstairs bathroom of Flame's house. As for the main room, I really love the sloppy set but in my opinion only using furniture from one set is a bit bland. I like to see parts of two or more sets work together you know?
- Same with Harley's rooms. The ice set/sweets/mush sets are lovely but just that furniture set and nothing else could use some other items to really make it pop.
- also I really like how you have the same kind of fruit trees put together symmetrically!
- I think the flower clock could use some flowers around it, or mushrooms. Some sort of decoration surrounding it.
- I think adding some music to all the houses would make it even better.
- the basement of your main house is really cool. I always love mad scientist type rooms.

Overall I'd give it a 7/10, the houses could use some work but the town itself is lovely

 

[Kittyinpink87]

Sure I'll visit

Update for review :

The paths are very well done! I don't even like paths, but these look amazing!
You set them out really good.
The team rocket characters are awesome.
Tree layout is good
All i can think of to say that would make it better is more PWPs
Should i rate it? 7 out of 10.

 

[Deak]

My reviews are 20tbt per. Sorry.

 

[kid kat79]

thanks mayor-of-ivyvale and kitty in pink87 i just transferred your tbt.

Will take three more reviews.

 

[kid kat79]

bump

 

[momiji345]

Dream suite Review

What i like
- Qr path Its nice and simple
-outside of your house (It has a nice cabin/western look )
-I like raptor house first room,and i like science space room/bath room
-I like the flowers around the house
-I love the team rocket clothing/catchphrase

Needs work

-Town needs some clour like flowers/bush/ect I think its too brown /and flat
-some room in the Houses i think its to plain,it will be nice if you mix furniture
-town Needs more work protect it will make the town look nice/fun to explore

4/10 ( needs some work i think you can improve on the town) Every one Please don't hate me ..its what i think..And yes even my town is not prefect but am trying to improve

 

[kid kat79]

Thank you momiji for your feedback, I will put your advice to work..

 

[MTPockets]

I don't write reviews for towns much because I honestly don't know much about them and what makes one "good." Still, here are my thoughts:

For starters I really like the name of your town, it has a nice ring to it. The path is also really nice! One of the best paths I've seen for sure. It doesn't try to show up with the natural graphics so it blends nicely while still looking detailed. The lamp posts in front of town hall are nice. I must say though that I'm not sure if I should be impressed by the detailed uniforms or really scared of the rockets! Seriously though, their belts look great. I like the gardens that you have around most of the homes. They're pretty, you put thought into them and they're well maintained.
Harley's home wasn't anything special, but I liked the upstairs of Flames. Your home is obviously the nicest, I like how the main room sticks with the theme an the others make you feel like you've been teleported somewhere else! Which I think is fun and a good thing. The upstairs and basement really take the cake.
I don't know how I feel about the cherry tree placement. On one hand they're nicely spaced out which is great. On the other it looks really forced and unnatural looking. The placement of the perfect peach trees is the same, but somehow it works much better. It just feels nice walking down the middle bridge into all the peach trees! Maybe its because they're perfect and there's lots of paths that the placement feels more right, but I really can't put my finger on it. On that note though I love the lighthouse placement.

Honestly, I really like your town! But there are two things that I'd recommend giving some thought to. One is having roses on the beach, given how many are in your town, maybe they're your town flower of something. That's cool, but they seem out of place on the beach. They're too well manicured. I'd put more wild looking flowers there. The other thing is that while I appreciate all the wooden exteriors the town itself doesn't really feel western or cabin themed. It's more like an autumn theme. I feel like it should be a bit more rustic and rugged. It's probably worth saying that the east end feels more like the intended theme then the west end. Unfortunately there isn't a ton you can do about making it look more rugged and rustic. I would look into to some public works projects though such as the camping cot, log bench, bus stop, water well, and water pump. I want to end on a positive note though so let's say that you made a good choice for your bridges and the fire pit was a good call!

 

[kid kat79]

Thanks for your detailed review mtpockets...

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I have room for one last review

 

[MariaD123]

I'll do it! 1 sec

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First impressions, nice bricks. Harley was a tad bit creepy as she approached me the minute I got off the bed and said prepare for trouble. Nice ice set, a lot of lovely sets in Harley's house, onto flame, again a tad bit creepy, cool sloppy set!! Raptor was a bit less creepy. His house was well polished off.
Well that was brilliant! Lovely paths spaced evenly throughout the town, lots of complete sets! Well done! 9/10

Suggestions: maybe add a bit more variety in the flowers, different types and different colours, but if you like the way it is now then you keep it like that.
More PWP!!!!

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Sorry those team rocket reference flew right over me

 

[kid kat79]

Thank you mariad123 for your suggestions... Thank you all.