Hey!
I hope for Loura to change more throughout the story, as I'm only started out C: Yes, Kirrin is a girl, but she's not very girly, either XD I was actually thinking of doing a side-novel with Leihi and Zelm (originally I considered including Leihi in the story, even before Zelm's creation, but then I decided not to), but we'll see about that. Also, I wouldn't be surprised that some of it is very slow-paced, as These were originally supposed to be long chapters, so they were kinda "dragged" in a way. I plan though to make things go by MUCH faster in more recent areas of where I am right now
Yes, since it's a whole TEN chapters and the story STILL hasn't reached its antagonist (would've been only like chapter 7 if we were back where things were originally) I understand XD But, with my plans I plan to bring out where things move into competition a couple chapters from now (specifically the one after this one I need to do). Thanks for reading C: