Hello.
I just visited your town and it's ..well.. It's not the best out there, but I definitely see that you provided effort into your town. ☆
(I do like your paths though. Just tone it down with the clovers, OK? It could get a little messy or confusing as others have stated before. Maybe use natural/dirt paths? Just an idea.
There's an empty blob of space below the instrument shelter, and there's a random white path behind Marina's house. I bet you have plans for the empty space, yes? The player houses I'm assuming is a work in progress, so no negative points there.
Your PWPs are fine, and your river shape is pretty funky. (Seriously, I've visited a lot of towns, and it proved to me that any map can be worked with. Yours is another example. ☆)
Overall, your town is actually kinda nice. Just give a little bit more TLC and maybe leave a few gifts around town(and clean up your houses/players, as well as the random beehive on one of your bridges, the empty space below the instrument shelter, and the white square behind Marina's house, and it'll be as great/amazing as you say it is. For now, keep it up! You're getting there. ☆
Final Score: 7/10.
(I'm not trying to be mean! Or negative!! I just want to help you out.
Hope my review was helpful! ★)