So, for Annette's caf? rooms, I think the blue series furniture in the main room might benefit from being customized in dark blue, to better emulate real life police uniforms. Love what you've done with the Reese & Cyrus room especially, the use of cabin series furniture really speaks to Cyrus' craftsman persona
Layne's house felt less cohesive; you have what looks like a sports junkie bachelor pad, a gamer's room, The Fortress of Solitude, a bank, pizzeria, and pool hall. All nicely done, but disparate thematically
For Breanna, also very nicely laid out, still lacking a perceived unifying element, but here I thought worked fine, very calm atmosphere in most of the rooms, loved the ice cream parlor in the basement. I do think the use of ore on the pieces upstairs clashed a bit, too bright
Chuck's place made me smile right away, loved how you set it up with the bamboo and tiles outside, making it look like a desert island cabana. I could actually imagine the characters from that old show, Gilligan's Island, fitting right in. All you really need now is the desert island map to top it all off.
Over all I loved how you landscaped your town, wish I had the energy, time, and imagination to do something comparable with mine. Looking forward to dreaming of your other towns