[STORY] [Kind of a horror? I dunno] Silence [first novel go easy]

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I decided to write something here you go
WARNING: Has a creepy setting and a small bit of gore like blood description and stuffles

Storyline: A troubled mayor finds her only peace in injuring helpless villagers. The villagers have no idea who it is though, because she is dressed in black and never attacks during the day.
It was a dark night. Isabelle was napping, but was awoken by branches scratching the windows. The canine turned around to the mayor's chair. ''I wish Digby was here..'' she sighed. Isabelle put her head down on the table again, but her ears twitched as she heard the town hall door creak open. ''Um.. Mayor? Is that you? Beau? Marshal? Bella? Who is it?'' Her head cocked to the left, then to the right. ''That door is old..'' She stood up, and shut it. The floorboards creaked. ''Um..'' Isabelle started shaking. ''Digby, I'll kill you if you are trying to prank me.''
''I'm sorry.''
''What? Digby, You are really creeping me out.''
''Forgive me.''
''Wh-- OW!'' Isabelle looked down, and amongst the darkness, she saw carmen red blood dripping out of her leg and spreading on the floor. She felt searing pain up shoot up her leg, as the knife dug deeper into her leg.
And in her vision, everything went black. The next thing she knew, she was down and covered with blood.

''Isabelle, I c-- UWAAH! MAYOR JULIAAAAAA!''


It was daytime, at the hospital in a town nearby. ''Will she be okay?''
''The injuries on her leg will heal soon. We still don't know what caused the wound, since its too oddly shaped to be a knife. Looks like.. a claw mark?''
''Odd.''
A conversation was ending, as Isabelle woke up to a blurry hospital room. She lifted her head, to see a large bandage wrapped around her leg. ''Hey, Isabelle.. You're awake!'' Isabelle smiled, as Mayor Julia held a cupcake infront of her. ''I brought you a cupcake. It took me a while to convince them that it had no painful chemicals or anything, but it worked!'' Julia smiled. ''Th-thank you.. What happened?'' Isabelle slowly nibbled on the cupcake.
''Well, through the night I heard a loud scream, sounding like Bella's scream. She came to my house, told me that you were collapsed, and then we ran together to find you collapsed and covered in blood. Don't worry, you'll be okay though.''
''Thanks. Wait, wheres Digby?!'' Isabelle pulled herself up, looking for her twin brother.
''Calm down, Iz! He's in the cafeteria downstairs, getting himself a coffee. He's stayed here all night, he's been worried sick! He also brought you one of your favourite ropes. Its over here.'' Julia picked up the rope, and put it on Isabelle's bed. ''Well.. uhm.. thanks.'' Isabelle wondered as to why, and how the mysterious person or animal came and assaulted her. ''We couldn't find the culprit, so we can't exactly go to the law.'' Julia sighed. ''As long as I'm safe and our town is safe, Mayor, I'm fine with anything.'' Isabelle said. Julia laughed. ''Call me Jules. Or Julia, y'know.''
Digby yawned as he came inside the room. ''Hey Isabelle! You're awake!'' He ran over to Isabelle, and the two pups chattered for a while. Julia turned around, her smile turning into a frown.

''I'm sorry.'' she whispered.

So, whatddya think? First time writing, If alot of people like it I'll write a chapter two!
 
cool but its a bit fast-paced for me but please dont take that the wrong way (:

^^user above your text is kinda light ; o ;
 
cool but its a bit fast-paced for me but please dont take that the wrong way (:

^^user above your text is kinda light ; o ;

This, I think more details should be added in to give the eerie feeling a horror story should give. It's really great though, just add in more details and it should be great! :D
 
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