Someone to review my dream town!

[Becca617]

I need ideas for my town, so can someone look around my town and give me ideas? I need ideas where to place my hybrid flowers on my beach, where I should put bushes, ( I have plenty in my storage ) and maybe some PWP's! My dream town has just been updated ( Keep in mind, it's still a WIP. ) DA: 4100-33655619

 

[Akina]

I can do it
Would you mind reviewing my town? I need some more ideas the address is in my signature!

 

[JellyBeans]

I'll visit yours in just a minute!

 

[Becca617]

I can do it
Would you mind reviewing my town? I need some more ideas the address is in my signature!

Yup! I'll do it in just a moment

I'll visit yours in just a minute!

Thanks

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Delphi's DT review:

Like: Love the path, illuminated arch <3, Your town map is perfect. So much space at the top ;D ( jealous jealous! ), MARSHAL! ( so jealousss! ), Julian's in my town too <3, plenty of flowers in general, and I like how you have most of the villagers houses down at the bottom part of the town. Nice town!

Improvements: Maybe some of the flower placement like you could do one color of hybrids leading to a major building like the town hall, cafe, etc. What I mean by one color of hybrids is like for example orange, you could do any type of orange hybrid leading that way. And a pattern like: Orange roses, orange tulips, orange cosmos, etc.

 

[Akina]

Paths - The paths really do go together well with the bridges! But perhaps you could make paths from every building to the system? So there's a path to every villagers house, to all the buildings and so on, so you just have to follow that all around That would make it a lot easier to find your way and it would make it all seem connected Perhaps you could use the same kind of path all way around?
Flowers - You could, with all your amazing hybrids, make small gardens or areas with a certain color or kind of flower? Maybe put flowers around villagers houses like you did on Roscoe's house Or you could put them along the paths
Trees - I really like the trees around the path, next to Diana's house (on the right side)
PWP's - the bench at Fuchsia's house seems a bit random, but I really like the hot spring and the statue fountain! Perhaps you could surround it by some flowers or some paths?

Your town seems a bit random at this point (I don't mean this in a negative way), there's lot to work with! Are you going for a fairytale themed town or perhaps a more naturalistic town? Try to make it all seems connected and especially the "random"/"lonely" pwp's could use some surroundings that made them seem like a part of something
Bushes would really help, perhaps making a park with bushes, PWP's, bamboo and some paths?

If you want me to be more specific, just let me know ^__^