reviewing dream towns!

[katsuragi]

hey so i feel like visiting more dream towns and i want to get the dreamer badge!

so if you want, post your dream address and i'll review your town in general as well as any player houses you have! i'll be as nice as possible but don't post if you don't want any criticism i guess.

oh also i would say that you could review my town if you want to, but i've taken it down for a while because i have stuff lying around everywhere and i need to tt to get the weather i want

i get through only a few of these a day because it's tiring and i have other stuff to do, so please don't expect to get your review back right away. if you want me to pm/vm you when i do yours, let me know in your post.

Spoiler: completed reviews

Melyora
Crystiecs
akidas
BlueSkittleWolf
Qvaric_Storyteller
TheGreatBrain
Yukari Yakumo

Spoiler: pending reviews

Swiftstream
kathyceeiscool
neon-tetra
magmortar
doetothelindsay
Tellini
KiloPatches

 

[Melyora]

My town is in my signature ^__^ It is still very much a WIP.

 

[Crystiesc]

I'd love suggestions! My DA is in my signature.

 

[akidas]

DA is in my sig~

 

[BlueSkittleWolf]

7600-2182-7134
I hope this is right. I got it wrong once.. The town is named 'Dinosaur'.

 

[Qvaric_Storyteller]

My DA is in my signature. I'd love to know what you think. My town is still a working progress, though.

 

[katsuragi]

My town is in my signature ^__^ It is still very much a WIP.

Spoiler: review

my first impression of your town was how full of nature it is! that seems to be a strong theme throughout the entire town and it's really nice. one thing i would suggest is that you have more two tile paths rather than a lot of one tile paths, because they make it look a bit unfinished and it's also a bit hard to navigate comfortably with one tile paths. also, most of your flowers aren't really coordinated, although it looks like you're working on that. there's also a lot of bamboo in one area that seems quite random? maybe you could try including a pwp there like the zen garden or something that would fit the bamboo theme. also, your paths ends at a dead end, but you might be planning something there. aside from that, i think your town has a lot of potential and is looking really good!

mayor's house
i really love your first room! it has a great theme and you've stuck to it really well, the music as well. i like your room to the left as well, but the wallpaper makes it a bit dull? also some of your furniture in some rooms needs to be adjusted to the room size, but that can be easily fixed!

so overall, i really like your town so far and i can definitely see potential as you develop!

 

[Melyora]

Spoiler: review

my first impression of your town was how full of nature it is! that seems to be a strong theme throughout the entire town and it's really nice. one thing i would suggest is that you have more two tile paths rather than a lot of one tile paths, because they make it look a bit unfinished and it's also a bit hard to navigate comfortably with one tile paths. also, most of your flowers aren't really coordinated, although it looks like you're working on that. there's also a lot of bamboo in one area that seems quite random? maybe you could try including a pwp there like the zen garden or something that would fit the bamboo theme. also, your paths ends at a dead end, but you might be planning something there. aside from that, i think your town has a lot of potential and is looking really good!

mayor's house
i really love your first room! it has a great theme and you've stuck to it really well, the music as well. i like your room to the left as well, but the wallpaper makes it a bit dull? also some of your furniture in some rooms needs to be adjusted to the room size, but that can be easily fixed!

so overall, i really like your town so far and i can definitely see potential as you develop!

Thank you for the review! I can definitely work with it <3

I know about the rooms, I have already adjusted it, but not updated in the Dream Adress yet. Tysm!

 

[katsuragi]

I'd love suggestions! My DA is in my signature.

Spoiler: review

i like the way you've made a lot of doctor who references without overdoing it! it works really well and i can tell you've put a lot of effort into your town. my main suggestion is probably to widen some of your one tile paths because i personally find them uncomfortable but that's my taste, it's up to you. the colour coordinating of your flowers is done really well too but in some places it's a little overdone.

ten's house
the theme is kept really well in this house, i like the sci-fi theme of it and how it's supposed to look like the tardis. not much else to say because it's a very obvious theme, except that you should probably do something with the empty room to the right.

crystie
most of the room have an obvious theme that flows although some of the colour coordination clash a bit and don't look as good as they might be able to. aside from that i think it's a really nice house.

eleven
it looks like you're still working on this house, so not much to say.

donna
i can definitely see what you're doing with this house and it has a lot of potential, but it looks like you're still working on it!

overall, i really like your town and i can tell you've put a lot of effort into it that is definitely paying off!

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Hi, I have two in my sig, but my third town is turning out kind of cute.I would love a review of it.It's called Critters.DA-4100-4346-3920. Thanks.

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

I hope you enjoy Gensokyo.
just updated in a thunderstorm X)

 

[Swiftstream]

me please

da in sig

enjoy! ^^

 

[katsuragi]

DA is in my sig~

Spoiler: review

i really love your town!!! it's a style i really like, and i think the way you've mixed pink and cute with green and earthy is really nice and efficient. if there's anything i'd suggest, maybe widen the space in some areas because it occasionally feels a bit cramped, but that's not a major issue.

star's house
i love the tent idea (i have the same in my town) and i think you've decorated it really great. not much else to say.

mayor's house
your house is mostly sets and colours, so there's not a whole lot i can say. i really applaud how well you have combined different furniture sets, like the egg and sloppy set. it works well in pretty much every room. some of the rooms seem a bit crowded, which is why i like the princess room most. oh and i really like the way you've decorated the basement with the villager pictures. some people's are really.... unnattractive, but yours is really nice and appealing.

yeah, i really love your town, i can see you've spent lots of time on it and it's paid off!!

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7600-2182-7134
I hope this is right. I got it wrong once.. The town is named 'Dinosaur'.

Spoiler: review

i'm assuming your town is horror themed? there isn't a lot happening anywhere really that i can review. i like your use of paths and placement of everything, but i'm not sure if there's meant to be a storyline or not..

Melody's house
Nothing in the house to review.

Wolf's house
i like the exterior of this house! the inside isn't bad either, but it seems like a lot of random stuff in most rooms. maybe try coordinating some more furniture to improve.

Sentoki's house
empty house (also is this character a reference to naruto???)

Sammy's house
empty

overall, i'm not sure about what your town's theme is. i'm assuming horror, but i'm not really a fan of horror themed ac towns, which is probably why i'm not so keen on your town. as it improves, i'm sure your town will become a hit though.

 

[BlueSkittleWolf]

Spoiler: review

i really love your town!!! it's a style i really like, and i think the way you've mixed pink and cute with green and earthy is really nice and efficient. if there's anything i'd suggest, maybe widen the space in some areas because it occasionally feels a bit cramped, but that's not a major issue.

star's house
i love the tent idea (i have the same in my town) and i think you've decorated it really great. not much else to say.

mayor's house
your house is mostly sets and colours, so there's not a whole lot i can say. i really applaud how well you have combined different furniture sets, like the egg and sloppy set. it works well in pretty much every room. some of the rooms seem a bit crowded, which is why i like the princess room most. oh and i really like the way you've decorated the basement with the villager pictures. some people's are really.... unnattractive, but yours is really nice and appealing.

yeah, i really love your town, i can see you've spent lots of time on it and it's paid off!!

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Spoiler: review

i'm assuming your town is horror themed? there isn't a lot happening anywhere really that i can review. i like your use of paths and placement of everything, but i'm not sure if there's meant to be a storyline or not..

Melody's house
Nothing in the house to review.

Wolf's house
i like the exterior of this house! the inside isn't bad either, but it seems like a lot of random stuff in most rooms. maybe try coordinating some more furniture to improve.

Sentoki's house
empty house (also is this character a reference to naruto???)

Sammy's house
empty

overall, i'm not sure about what your town's theme is. i'm assuming horror, but i'm not really a fan of horror themed ac towns, which is probably why i'm not so keen on your town. as it improves, i'm sure your town will become a hit though.

Ta for the review. It's still in a heavy WIP stage so, not a lot is happening.
And, no, Sentōki isn't a reference to Naruto. Just a random character.

 

[katsuragi]

My DA is in my signature. I'd love to know what you think. My town is still a working progress, though.

Spoiler: review

hmm i think your town is gradually becoming themed, more of a fairytale theme maybe? anyway, i can see that your town is still a wip but i think its coming along well. i would suggest maybe bordering your paths with bushes or trees or something like that, they look a bit unfinished (you might be planning that anyway). also, i would suggest you move your bridges apart a bit because they're all in the middle and it's a bit annoying to have to keep going all the way there to something thats directly across. i think thats it for suggestions though. oh also, you might want to repace your plaza and update your dream where redd or katrina has been.

Lia's house
your house is mostly sets in each room, but i really like your bathroom it's a lot different from what i usually see in bathroom themed rooms! your house is really nice on the outside too, i like it!

Windsor's house
i can see you're still asjusting this house's interior, so not much to say.

Declahn's house
same comment as Windsor's house.

generally i like your town and the theme you're working on, it's looking really good!

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Hi, I have two in my sig, but my third town is turning out kind of cute.I would love a review of it.It's called Critters.DA-4100-4346-3920. Thanks.

Spoiler: review

i visited your town, Critters. i like the theme of the different animal players you have, its a cool idea! i like the park area you made and the ponds you made. also, i like how all the villagers are located around the pond. you might want to pick up some fossils that are laying around but aside from that, theres not much i can suggest because its obviously still a wip.

Honey's house
this is a really cute idea for a home! i don't really like the first room that much, maybe try some yellow and black coloured furniture instead of so much of the stripe pattern, it's kind of uncomfortable to look at. the other rooms are really cool though, and i like the bee and honey theme.

Smokey's house
the cabin and camping theme is cool, you've done it well. i don't really think the music fits in the first room though. aside from that it's a cute house.

Mittens' house
not much to say, seeing as its only one room. i like it though, its really nice.

Lily's house
the frog theme is cute.

 

[kathyceeiscool]

My town is a work in progress but I'd like a review of my town . It's in my signature! I want to build 2 more characters but I'm struggling with where the best place to put their house would be so if you could give me some insight on that I'd be extremely grateful!

Edit: I'd greatly appreciate a PM when you're ready for me

 

[neon-tetra]

Me! My dream address is in my signature. Please don't talk about my overgrowth of flowers. I know they are very messy.

 

[katsuragi]

ahhh i forgot i needed to do these, i'll get on to them now

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I hope you enjoy Gensokyo.
just updated in a thunderstorm X)

Spoiler: review

well, first of all, i love your town name!!! also, i absolutely love dream towns that are stormy or raining, so that's a plus for me.
your paths are v nice, and i like the way that you combine your one tile and two tile paths, so that it's still neat and easy to navigate. you haven't gone overboard with the water path pattern, and it's laid out nicely. i like the area with the stonehenge, and how you've gradually gone into the dead grass and trees around it without it being smack dead in the middle of growth and greenery. i would suggest cutting down on the diagonal paths, and only placing them where you vitally need them, because they look unnatural and a bit awkward.

Yukari's house
love the character name!! there is an obvious japanese theme in here, a mix of traditional and modern japanese elements. it's a really nice idea, and you've certainly spent a deal of time on it. k.k disco does not suit the first room at all though. it looks like you might have tried to pair it with the pink furniture in the room, but there isn't enough of it to do that. also i'll add that some of the rooms are a bit cluttered, and it looks like you've just found every japanese themed item and shoved it in there (even if you haven't). but it's a really cute house overall.

Reimu's house
(again, i love the character name) i love the back room of this house! it seems to be an art studio, which is a great idea. however, almost every other room is traditional japanese. by now i've figured out that this a touhou reference (if i'm wrong this will be super embarassing), so i'm not going to criticise the theme, but maybe make your room to the right fit the theme better.

Marisa's house
not a lot to say, as it is mostly sets in each room. it's cute though and i like the cafe and forest themed rooms. the bookcase blocking the doorway in the first room is annoying though. the basement is REALLY nice, good idea!

Alice's house
your bathroom/spa in this house is really nice, i like it a lot. i also really like the design you have on your alpine furniture in the first room. the other rooms are mostly all sets so not much to say there. don't really like the floor and wallpaper in the back room.

so yeah, overall your town is really cool, and i love the touhou references!

 

[magmortar]

Could you review mine, please? I have stuff lying around cuz I run a shop so just...ignore that haha.
DA is in my sig c:

 

[doetothelindsay]

I would love a review! I feel like my town is pretty much complete, and I'd appreciate any feedback on it. Dream address is in my signature