Reikuz

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I've had this in my mind since I was like 11, I started it back at my old forum, and it has become my other world. It started as a manga, but I can't draw so it became a project and a story.

It is Reikuz ( Main name ) or Sekai no Pōtarusaitono.

The second one was google translate :L
It's probably completeness different than what I intended.

But here's a mild teaser thing, starting it off.

<div class='spoiler_toggle'>Spoiler: click to toggle</div><div class="spoiler" style="display:none;">"I miss them so much."
"I know, but you can't bring them back."
"But, I took them away."

She came behind me and hugged me, the only comfort I had had in years. She was my best friend, she saved me from life, death, and myself.

I don't remember what my real name use to be, I only remember my story. I use to be rich, I could get anything I wanted. One day I got in a fight with my dad, I angrily ran away from home. My dad fell terribly ill after I left and I couldn't hear the news because I was so far away from anyone I knew. My brother searched for me to make me visit my father, seeing as his life span was unpredictable. That night my brother died in a car accident. The news got back to my dad, and being in the condition he was in he died of a heart attack. Three months went by, my mom having lost her two sons and husband, was thrown into a fit of depression. She killed herself on July 15, 1998. I was 12 when I murdered my entire family in a small fight. I soon came home to find everyone was dead. I had inherited a small fortune, and sent to a foster home. The money always made me sad. After begging her parents, my best friend Sarah had convinced them to adopt me. I now live with them.

"Thank you Sarah, for... everything."
"I didn't didn't do anything..."
"No, you have fixed my life after I had wrecked it, you did a lot."

That day went by slowly as I remember, and now life as I know is different. Everything is gone, I had nobody except her after that, and now I have no one at all except Kyōryoku. I get ahead of myself though, but who will ever read this?</div>
Don't hate ;~;

And I know, his life was pretty tragic, but it signifies that you need to accept what you have in life.

Kayso, Reikuz:

<div class='spoiler_toggle'>Spoiler: click to toggle</div><div class="spoiler" style="display:none;"> Reikuz is the "mainland" where worlds intercept. A world is kept together by a very powerful artifact (unnamed) which is kept anywhere in a world. They hold generous amounts of energy, and are commonly sought after. They use that energy to maintain the world, providing energy to change landforms, and provide air (ect). Whenever energy builds up, a rip is created and makes a portal to Reikuz. Reikuz is like the absolute magnet of portals Taking one though, almost destroys a world. It instead turns the world into an energy hungry--thing. It's still a world, but it drains out energy from people to sustain the togetherness of the molecules. . Some have even mastered focusing energy to create portals to Reikuz. Reikuz is the largest world there is, which is why it's the mainland. </div>

Short summary thing on energy and what not.

<div class='spoiler_toggle'>Spoiler: click to toggle</div><div class="spoiler" style="display:none;">There are two pure energies in the world, dark and light. They manifest in emotions and energy. Most molecules are made of neutral energies, and when absorbed are kept in the SP in which it stays, changing to emotion. When a negative emotion such as sadness or anger build up, the energy becomes negatively charge and becomes dark. It flows through the soul and manifest in a physical form. Energy can be taken out of the SP and used for matter. When out of the body, the matter is a different color depending on the levels in between dark and light. The darker, the more black and navy blue it is. The more light, the more yellow and white it is. The more charged the energy within the body is, the different amount of physical change and the amount of energy manifest around the body. The more energy is charged and manifest the body, it multiplies and significantly powers the body. Dark charge is easily obtainable, yet weaker than light charge. When energy manifest into molecules it holds a base look and substance, neutral between solid and liquid, it's easily movable but still hurts. The information in the energy molecules can be changed to appear and act different. It is very hard to write, and rarely used.</div>

It doesn't really say anything about the main plot, I'll post it later.

Here's a scene that I will draw ( Just the emotions at least )

<div class='spoiler_toggle'>Spoiler: click to toggle</div><div class="spoiler" style="display:none;"> What- What is this place?
This is Reikuz, Tentai.
Tentai? But my name is-
You will now be addressed as Tentai Sukiou. And you will be assigned a Reki.
Reki? What's that?
It's your new companion, he knows Reikuz and will help you with your missions.
Missions? Since when did I have missions.
Since you became a citizen. Your Reki is Kyōryoku.
Kyo what?
Kyōryoku, here he is.
He's..small.
...
And wordy.
...
I don't like him.
...</div>
 
Interesting idea. I've actually had something similar planned in my head since I was 13 (that's 6 years now... .-.). I wanted to make a manga, and I can draw manga, but I'm far too lazy to ever draw an entire manga series myself. XD So I ditched that idea and decided to make a story with pictures to assist it, so I can still draw manga but I wouldn't have to draw the whole thing, lol. But I still haven't started on it. XD I have the whole story in my head, though. I made one picture of the main character a long time ago, but because it's from so long ago it's not my greatest work of art, and if I were to redraw it today it would look much different because I've changed things in my head quite a lot.
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Tye___Elementor_of_Fire_by_Tyeforce.jpg
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Hmm. People are speaking a language I don't recognise...
 
Short summary thing on energy and what not.

<div class='spoiler_toggle'>Spoiler: click to toggle</div><div class="spoiler" style="display:none;">There are two pure energies in the world, dark and light. They manifest in emotions and energy. Most molecules are made of neutral energies, and when absorbed are kept in the SP in which it stays, changing to emotion. When a negative emotion such as sadness or anger build up, the energy becomes negatively charge and becomes dark. It flows through the soul and manifest in a physical form. Energy can be taken out of the SP and used for matter. When out of the body, the matter is a different color depending on the levels in between dark and light. The darker, the more black and navy blue it is. The more light, the more yellow and white it is. The more charged the energy within the body is, the different amount of physical change and the amount of energy manifest around the body. The more energy is charged and manifest the body, it multiplies and significantly powers the body. Dark charge is easily obtainable, yet weaker than light charge. When energy manifest into molecules it holds a base look and substance, neutral between solid and liquid, it's easily movable but still hurts. The information in the energy molecules can be changed to appear and act different. It is very hard to write, and rarely used.</div>
 
Gnome said:
So the whole family died within a week?
ikr tragic

That's like the only part I made up on a day ._.

I will probably change it cause it seems way too unlikely.

Well, good life ;D

Kayso, Reikuz:

<div class='spoiler_toggle'>Spoiler: click to toggle</div><div class="spoiler" style="display:none;"> Reikuz is the "mainland" where worlds intercept. A world is kept together by a very powerful artifact (unnamed) which is kept anywhere in a world. They hold generous amounts of energy, and are commonly sought after. They use that energy to maintain the world, providing energy to change landforms, and provide air (ect). Whenever energy builds up, a rip is created and makes a portal to Reikuz. Reikuz is like the absolute magnet of portals Taking one though, almost destroys a world. It instead turns the world into an energy hungry--thing. It's still a world, but it drains out energy from people to sustain the togetherness of the molecules. . Some have even mastered focusing energy to create portals to Reikuz. Reikuz is the largest world there is, which is why it's the mainland. </div>
 
Attempted to draw (herp)

I suck at manga, :s

Maybe if I keep trying at it ;D

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6eg4y0.jpg
</div>
 
Numner said:
Attempted to draw (herp)

I suck at manga, :s

Maybe if I keep trying at it ;D

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6eg4y0.jpg
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Ok the head is either flat/small, or those eyes or huge.

That or both.
 
Gnome said:
Numner said:
Attempted to draw (herp)

I suck at manga, :s

Maybe if I keep trying at it ;D

<div class='spoiler_toggle'>Spoiler: click to toggle</div><div class="spoiler" style="display:none;">
6eg4y0.jpg
</div>
Ok the head is either flat/small, or those eyes or huge.

That or both.
Probably both.

And I only had that posted for like 30 seconds.

I made a dot for the nose cause I can't draw it ;~;
 
Numner said:
Gnome said:
Numner said:
Attempted to draw (herp)

I suck at manga, :s

Maybe if I keep trying at it ;D

<div class='spoiler_toggle'>Spoiler: click to toggle</div><div class="spoiler" style="display:none;">
6eg4y0.jpg
</div>
Ok the head is either flat/small, or those eyes or huge.

That or both.
Probably both.

And I only had that posted for like 30 seconds.

I made a dot for the nose cause I can't draw it ;~;
I know a youtube account that gives great manga/general art tutorials.

http://www.youtube.com/user/markcrilley
 
Just to let you know, your translation of "World Portals" is off (if that's what you're trying to say, that is). It should be "世界のポータル" (literally "portals of the world").
 
Gnome said:
Numner said:
Gnome said:
Numner said:
Attempted to draw (herp)

I suck at manga, :s

Maybe if I keep trying at it ;D

<div class='spoiler_toggle'>Spoiler: click to toggle</div><div class="spoiler" style="display:none;">
6eg4y0.jpg
</div>
Ok the head is either flat/small, or those eyes or huge.

That or both.
Probably both.

And I only had that posted for like 30 seconds.

I made a dot for the nose cause I can't draw it ;~;
I know a youtube account that gives great manga/general art tutorials.

http://www.youtube.com/user/markcrilley
Sexy, thank you.

If I find the patience to follow it ;D
 
Tyeforce said:
Just to let you know, your translation of "World Portals" is off (if that's what you're trying to say, that is). It should be "世界のポータル" (literally "portals of the world").
That would be "Sekai no Pōtaru" in romaji, by the way.
 
Tyeforce said:
Just to let you know, your translation of "World Portals" is off (if that's what you're trying to say, that is). It should be "世界のポータル" (literally "portals of the world").
I was thinking about PMing you for a translation xD

But I felt embarrassed
 
Numner said:
Tyeforce said:
Just to let you know, your translation of "World Portals" is off (if that's what you're trying to say, that is). It should be "世界のポータル" (literally "portals of the world").
I was thinking about PMing you for a translation xD

But I felt embarrassed
No problem, lol.
 
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