Please visit my dream town!

animalcrossincrazi

♪Mayor of Junko♪
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Hi guys!I need more visitors for my dream town, plus I'd love to hear what you guys think!The adress is in my signature.Thanks.
 
About my town

I've worked hard on my town but it's not done yet!The town fruit is oranges(I wish they were apples)Lots of designs and paths.Golden roses, purple, and orange.High HHA score!I update my dream town A LOT and I mean A LOT lol!If the dream adress changes you can always search for it!ONE LAST THING: If you look in my house can you guess what i'd score the best in on the HHA score challenge?I'm guessing it's fairy-tale theme, Thanks!
 
Ok you asked for feedback so here goes. Just keep in mind this is just some "tough love" advice & I don't mean to hurt your feelings or anything by it. It's just some random internet persons opinion.

So I looked at your town. I don't want to be mean but oh man.......ok...that picture of the girls...face? Is it Daisy maybe? Well, it's kinda...bad. Needs some work or something...

Your paths were all over the place & it was hard to tell where to walk without bumping into random stuff. Maybe just pick the path you want, pick where to put it, then line the edges with flowers,bushes and trees? Instead of just placing it everywhere with no set destination, try to make the paths lead places.

Your house was kinda cute inside, I liked the witches room & basement. The main room was also cute. I liked your mayors outfit.

I think you just overall need to work on path placement.
 
Thanks for the feedback!I know my town's a total mess!But don't expect me to be a master at art, I'm only twelve years old!But the reason i have paths everywhere is because i'm going for a big city look with pavement.Of course that probably sounds stupid.I'm still trying to get a higher hha score of course!But thanks for the feedback and thanks for visiting anyway!
 
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