opinions on this drawing?

[treetops]

happy early birthday cherry
fu.ckk the mods and f.uckk the furry haters who draw gijinkas all day u deserve sex gurrrrrl lmao uwu xdxdxdxdxdxd

 

[Zane]

The link is broken. px

 

[treetops]

ahhh it was working for me. lemme fix it quickly...

edit: should be working by now. i hope.

 

[Hyoshido]

Maaaaan that's hella adorable

 

[Zane]

Ohh yep now that I can see it it's really cute! 8D Especially Antonio aww. As for criticism I'd say the mayor's eyes might look better with a thinner outline, unless that's a stylistic choice.

 

[Wishii]

Adorable! Nice work

 

[timecapsule]

it's so
so
so
SO
SO
SO
CUTE <3

 

[unravel]

Fascinating my dear, everybody has their own drawing style just keep practicing and you'll do great!

 

[spookycipher]

aw v cute!!!! c: xx

 

[The Pennifer]

I absolutely LOVE everything about it!!
★ ★ ★ ♥ ♥ ♥ ★ ★ ★

 

[Hopeless Opus]

It's adoraaable!

 

[okaimii]

It's great! I love the lineart and the coloring. It's really vibrant and clean.

 

[treetops]

thanks so much for the feedback you guys!! i really tried my best with this one in particular. <3

Ohh yep now that I can see it it's really cute! 8D Especially Antonio aww. As for criticism I'd say the mayor's eyes might look better with a thinner outline, unless that's a stylistic choice.

thanks for the criticism! it's a stylistic choice, but i'm all for improving my art style, considering that this is a new one i'm experimenting with.

 

[chocobeann]

awwww this is rlly adorable! And antonio is perfect looking! *_*
For criticism, the lining for her mouth could be a little thicker to balance with the rest of the lineart. The thinness makes it stands out a little bit. Also her feet are going inwards so it makes her look pigeon-toed. Maybe have her right foot going the other way?

 

[Rasha]

I think it's beautiful..no
I think it's amazing!!! I'm digging this style <3

 

[Llust]

Your style is really cute <3 The only problem I see is the nose is a bit too high up - I suggest moving it down a little. Other than that, it looks great