Kyoshi's DreamyTime Reviews

[esweeeny]

Hi.

I would love for you guys to review my town. And I'd love to review your town. Simple as that.

~My DA:4400-4788-1706~ Note that I am not done but I'd love to see what you think so far. I am waiting for a few certain PWPS as well as finishing the rest of my characters houses. I am done with the Mayor's and My dreamies! Either way, Enjoy!

This is for some feedback and for some fun of course.

Just put your dream address and let me know what you want me to review/focus on. =)

 

[Yukari Yakumo]

Kyoshi

Town:
-very nice path
-love the town square
-love the town hall area
-so many trees!
-nice use of bamboo
-train station areas
-nice signs
-... :O what is with the signs in the north-west corner and south of the cafe?
-love the row of flower arches
-nice arrangement with the topiaries and paths around them

Town Rating: 5/5. loved it.

Aang's House: just balloons... I'm pretty sure I expected something else. :|

Korra's House:
exterior: nice
main room: brrr. chilly in here. love the symmetry, though I'd switch the chair on the left for another ice lamp
right room: very colorful. though the outdoor bath doesn't match the colors.
back room: wow. and the music fits. but the lighting feels too dark.
left room: very nice. love the wedding theme, but the jukebox feels out of place
2nd floor: well this is... nice? creepy? I like either way. I think...
basement: kinda cool. though the stereo feels a little out of place

Jinora's House:
exterior: very nice, but the mailbox feels out of sync
main room: now that's sweet.
right room: n/a
left room: n/a
2nd floor: empty

Bolin's House:
-nice exterior
-small and sparse interior

Suggestions:
Korra's house:
-switch the outdoor bath in the right room for either whirlpool bath or the spa set's bathtub
-more light in the back room(I don't think you had the ceiling light on, so maybe just that)
-replace the jukebox in the left room with a phonograph or lily record player
-move the gold clock forward and put the gold stereo behind it.

-expand the other houses

Overall Rating: 4/5
very nice. the only problems are nitpicks involving furniture and undeveloped houses.

I have a feeling you'll love mine.

 

[TheGreatBrain]

I have three in my sig.You can choose one or visit them all if you like.The houses are themed and kind of cute.

I will visit yours in just a few minutes.

 

[TheGreatBrain]

Town of Kyoshi.

Your path is very lovely.I love the clothes you left out too. Those Marshal patterns are adorable.I love the color of hybrids you chose.What i really like about your town,is you have all these cute little areas with signs and pwp's. The park area looks great.

I had so much fun visiting the upper part of town, then i went to the lower half.OMG.I LOVE IT.I was not expecting this. The all squirrel villagers with their pictures next to the houses is super cute.I love how the toperies look too.The hybrids look amazing.

Jinora's house-Cute sweets room.I like what you did with the icecream cones.

Korra's house- The entire house is nicely decorated.The rococo room on the left is my favorite.I also really like the gold basement.

Your town is beautiful.So glad i got to visit.

 

[esweeeny]

Kyoshi

Town:
-very nice path
-love the town square
-love the town hall area
-so many trees!
-nice use of bamboo
-train station areas
-nice signs
-... :O what is with the signs in the north-west corner and south of the cafe?
-love the row of flower arches
-nice arrangement with the topiaries and paths around them

Town Rating: 5/5. loved it.

Aang's House: just balloons... I'm pretty sure I expected something else. :|

Korra's House:
exterior: nice
main room: brrr. chilly in here. love the symmetry, though I'd switch the chair on the left for another ice lamp
right room: very colorful. though the outdoor bath doesn't match the colors.
back room: wow. and the music fits. but the lighting feels too dark.
left room: very nice. love the wedding theme, but the jukebox feels out of place
2nd floor: well this is... nice? creepy? I like either way. I think...
basement: kinda cool. though the stereo feels a little out of place

Jinora's House:
exterior: very nice, but the mailbox feels out of sync
main room: now that's sweet.
right room: n/a
left room: n/a
2nd floor: empty

Bolin's House:
-nice exterior
-small and sparse interior

Suggestions:
Korra's house:
-switch the outdoor bath in the right room for either whirlpool bath or the spa set's bathtub
-more light in the back room(I don't think you had the ceiling light on, so maybe just that)
-replace the jukebox in the left room with a phonograph or lily record player
-move the gold clock forward and put the gold stereo behind it.

-expand the other houses

Overall Rating: 4/5
very nice. the only problems are nitpicks involving furniture and undeveloped houses.

I have a feeling you'll love mine.

I'll take your suggestions into consideration! All amazing points. I can't wait to visit yours!

- - - Post Merge - - -

Town of Kyoshi.

Your path is very lovely.I love the clothes you left out too. Those Marshal patterns are adorable.I love the color of hybrids you chose.What i really like about your town,is you have all these cute little areas with signs and pwp's. The park area looks great.

I had so much fun visiting the upper part of town, then i went to the lower half.OMG.I LOVE IT.I was not expecting this. The all squirrel villagers with their pictures next to the houses is super cute.I love how the toperies look too.The hybrids look amazing.

Jinora's house-Cute sweets room.I like what you did with the icecream cones.

Korra's house- The entire house is nicely decorated.The rococo room on the left is my favorite.I also really like the gold basement.

Your town is beautiful.So glad i got to visit.

Thank you so much! I am not even done with the houses, AT ALL. but when I update those again I'll be sure to keep you two in mind!

- - - Post Merge - - -

Kyoshi

Town:
-very nice path
-love the town square
-love the town hall area
-so many trees!
-nice use of bamboo
-train station areas
-nice signs
-... :O what is with the signs in the north-west corner and south of the cafe?
-love the row of flower arches
-nice arrangement with the topiaries and paths around them

Town Rating: 5/5. loved it.

Aang's House: just balloons... I'm pretty sure I expected something else. :|

Korra's House:
exterior: nice
main room: brrr. chilly in here. love the symmetry, though I'd switch the chair on the left for another ice lamp
right room: very colorful. though the outdoor bath doesn't match the colors.
back room: wow. and the music fits. but the lighting feels too dark.
left room: very nice. love the wedding theme, but the jukebox feels out of place
2nd floor: well this is... nice? creepy? I like either way. I think...
basement: kinda cool. though the stereo feels a little out of place

Jinora's House:
exterior: very nice, but the mailbox feels out of sync
main room: now that's sweet.
right room: n/a
left room: n/a
2nd floor: empty

Bolin's House:
-nice exterior
-small and sparse interior

Suggestions:
Korra's house:
-switch the outdoor bath in the right room for either whirlpool bath or the spa set's bathtub
-more light in the back room(I don't think you had the ceiling light on, so maybe just that)
-replace the jukebox in the left room with a phonograph or lily record player
-move the gold clock forward and put the gold stereo behind it.

-expand the other houses

Overall Rating: 4/5
very nice. the only problems are nitpicks involving furniture and undeveloped houses.

I have a feeling you'll love mine.

YOUR TOWN IS WONDERFUL!

I love the placement of everything. The cute bench on the upper right corner is placed so beautifully with the cedar trees.
I enjoy the different paths and the way you placed them its different and your town almost feels like a mystery to me. I also love the clovers and the tree placement as well.

Yukari's has such a relaxing vibe to it. I can tell you put a lot of thought into every room. I also love the music choices to every room, my favorite room has to be the living room!!

You have all the amazing zen pwps , not fair!

Reimu's house is awesomely done. My favorite room is the upstairs. I love the sword, rainbow cloud, and the different colored regal furniture. Oh and I appreciated Jingle in the basement...he's my favorite special character from the game!!!

Marisa's house=Wandering is the perfect thing to walk into. I love the cabin cozy feel of this whole house! The cafe with the lovely set is a brilliant idea. Id go to that shop if it was one in real life ^.^ Makes me so happy and now I crave a coffee with a pumpkin loaf! The basement! SO SWEET!!!

Alice's house is awesome with all the customized furniture. The doll creeps me out but that's just me cause I don't like dollz, lol. I love the placement of statues and the beautiful music in the left room.


Overall your town is awesome. I love all the pwps and the way you placed your bamboo, trees, and path! so beautiful! great work, I can tell you worked very hard on this town!!!

 

[steen]

Wow, I love your plaza path! So gorgeous

I like the way your paths are set up -- very clear & easy to navigate~ very pretty PWPs as well. This is a small point but perhaps the illuminated arch would look better if it were moved a space to the left so it matches up with your fountain? (I'm a big fan of symmetry).

I think you placed flowers really well & you did a really good job of having the whole town feeling like it's connected, like nothing is out of place, I'd imagine your town looks gorgeous in the cherry blossom season. Having villager's faces as tiles in front of their house is such a cute idea! I've never seen that before ^^ and I LOVE the face standee of marshal in front of his house <3 Also your flower bed placement is A+. I've always wanted to build that PWP but could never find a good place for it in my town!

Have you thought about using a cute one-tile path going through your flower arches to make it more of a walkway to Static and Cally's houses? You could add the pretty tile path in front of their houses as well maybe :3

"dont forget you're here forever" LOL i love that, also the marshal playground, very cute

Really love your use of cute signs as well, something I wanted to do but couldn't because I ran out of PWPs ;-; Anyway, seems like you're a natural at landscaping and I don't have any criticisms besides the few minor points I mentioned above. Love your town, it was a pleasure visiting

My DA is 4900-4945-5032, if you'd like to visit! I'd love some feedback on the layout/PWP placements, as I'm basically done landscaping but haven't really had any 2nd opinions on it! The houses are wip, but if you'd like to check them out, I put the most effort so far into Korikuma's (it's a cafe) and Kaoru's (supposed to be an inn). Thanks in advance <3

 

[Seira]

5700-2445-6826

Just let me know what you think so far. Ignore Lolly's house. I can't bring myself to get rid of her

 

[esweeeny]

Thanks everyone so far. I am almost back home, after vacation I'll be continuing these reviews