Clown Town
Senior Member
Ok for english we have to write a short story but i seem to always make it go for 50 pages or 6500 words...
we are meant to write a short story about anything as long as its 400-600 words...
and ive got 322 words...
i cant figure how to finish this story fast cos its due in about 30 mins...
this is what ive got
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It was 15/4/1865, the day after 45 people died on the ranch 1 kilometer south of you. It was said that a man lost his mind and attacked everyone on the ranch with a machete. All the bodies were supposedly burned, but some people had their doubts.
The local guards had been visiting everyone within a 5 kilometers radius of the ranch, testing them, taking them.
Three people had been taken by the guards for unknown reasons. The populous had been arguing that the people were too far away from the ranch for anything to have happened to them, they did not listen.
You just got back from town after gathering supplies. Your mother had been bedridden for the last 4 hours with aching joints and migraines. Once you got back to the cottage where you and your sick mother live, you could see a guards horse outside of the cottage, you were about to open the door when someone rushed out the door
we are meant to write a short story about anything as long as its 400-600 words...
and ive got 322 words...
i cant figure how to finish this story fast cos its due in about 30 mins...
this is what ive got
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It was 15/4/1865, the day after 45 people died on the ranch 1 kilometer south of you. It was said that a man lost his mind and attacked everyone on the ranch with a machete. All the bodies were supposedly burned, but some people had their doubts.
The local guards had been visiting everyone within a 5 kilometers radius of the ranch, testing them, taking them.
Three people had been taken by the guards for unknown reasons. The populous had been arguing that the people were too far away from the ranch for anything to have happened to them, they did not listen.
You just got back from town after gathering supplies. Your mother had been bedridden for the last 4 hours with aching joints and migraines. Once you got back to the cottage where you and your sick mother live, you could see a guards horse outside of the cottage, you were about to open the door when someone rushed out the door
